The Sorcerer in the Marvel Universe

After reading Chapter 738, I feel that the author really doesn't know how to write battle scenes. In the more than 700 pictures, the protagonist actually fights less than ten times. The rest are all just talk, or all kinds of half-written and half-white talk, which makes me watch all kinds of embarrassments and dramas. I don't have a problem with the protagonist being greedy for money, but can it be done without being like a country bumpkin (I suggest the author refer to "The King, Spare Your Life"). When describing the storyline, it should be funny, passionate, and serious (for details, you can refer to the abnormality of the big eyes). From the beginning to the end, he looks like a clown. Not many people like to watch it.

Shennong, let's talk about the conclusion first. This book is not recommended for anyone with no brains. Theme: Warcraft + Marvel Goldfinger: World of Warcraft Warlock ability + three artifacts + Burning Legion (World of Warcraft version of Taijun) Plot development: The protagonist appears to be law-abiding in the early stage, and he is in vain with S. H. I. E. L. D. Behind the scenes, he uses the warlock's ability to secretly cause trouble and establish his own power. Poison points: 1. In the early stage, the performance was weak against SHIELD, which is not friendly to readers who want to read exciting articles. (You can't be cool without thinking) 2 Goldfinger's abilities are relatively weak, and his combat effectiveness shows a clear decline even in the movie version of the Marvel Universe. (Goldfinger is weak) 3 Mixed styles, behind-the-scenes flow + comedy + daily life + happiness + Japanese comic elements + secondary 2 (too many elements, difficult to combine organically) 4 The protagonist has a timid personality, bullies the weak and fears the strong, has no ambition, and likes to be greedy for small money. (The mentality of a small citizen, but he wants to do big things) 5 The heroine was born from heaven. During the development period of her power, when she was about to take off, she suddenly ran away to fall in love, and her IQ plummeted. (This is where the poison comes in. The male protagonist is weak in combat and focuses on literary battles. He managed to earn start-up capital but did not develop his power. His intelligence was sucked dry by love again. Those who want to see the battle of wits and behind-the-scenes stories should leave.) Summary: The author wants to imitate the big eyes and write a story about saving the world for ordinary people, and follow a warm line. I also want to write about a behind-the-scenes story, and finally I want to write a love and emotional story, and add some elements from Japanese comics to it. Evaluation: Neither advancing nor retreating, not greedy enough. A bad cook who doesn't know what he wants to do adds sour, sweet, bitter, spicy, and salty ingredients to a dish.

How can I put it, it still hasn't started operating. The protagonist is too weak. His power depends entirely on the artifacts in his hand and he can't use them casually. The upper limit of the Marvel universe's power system is too high. The protagonist, if nothing else, has to grow to the point where he can defeat Odin alone without the artifacts. After all, there is Death Girl on top. God, Galactus, etc., And then there are other bosses. Such a weak protagonist cannot operate. The boss can be killed in the aftermath of the battle. He has little strength and slow growth. The warlock profession is really not like this. The author describes it like a sewer, with high professional growth characteristics. I also don't like that the protagonist is invincible for three chapters but at least he has grown. In the early stage of the book, he made money to support his allies, but there is no growth in the later stage. If you really want to strengthen your teammates, you don't need a warlock. Every hero in the Marvel comic universe can fight through the multiverse. What should the protagonist do if his growth rate is so high?

When I read this book, I was very surprised. Why did this book look so good and interesting at the beginning but I went through the Qidian library but never saw it? Looking back, it felt very familiar. I looked at the table of contents and found that I had subscribed to hundreds of chapters. I saw that I had subscribed a long time ago, but I felt something was wrong. This book looked so interesting and it was a Marvel theme that I like to read. How could I not put it on my bookshelf? Then I read back and understood a little bit about Chapter 80. After reading Chapter 40, I finally understood why I gave up on this book before. 0.0.

Brother author, you are better. Stop pretending to be dead 🤫

The battle scenes are seriously missing😅

This book is a continuation of a chapter in "The Death Track of Azeroth" and was written with the imagination in mind

After seeing the comments, I quit and said goodbye.

These summoned ones are also speechless =_=. The first one is very weak, but the second one is getting more and more impressive. You can at least upgrade it and strengthen it.

The whole article is full of talk. I kept writing plans and plans, only to find out later that there was a plan that was ridiculous. Saying that there was a plan, it seemed like pig's feet had superior intelligence?

Old brother😰

The author's emotional drama needs to be strengthened

I've read some Marvel stuff. For me, there are two extremely toxic points in Marvel literature that are the most unacceptable. 1: Find Black Widow as your girlfriend. 2: Kneel down and lick the protagonist group and S. H. I. E. L. D. For no reason. May I ask if you have this book? If so, I will leave it.

I don't know if it's American culture or something intentional by the screenwriter. I admit that Bucky was not to blame for being brainwashed and killed, but the most unpleasant thing about watching "Captain America 3" is that no matter Captain America or Bucky, the two have always only cared about their friendship with each other, and no one has ever tried to say "I'm sorry." Although it was not Bucky's own fault, shouldn't the old comrades who killed Big Shit's dad and the others say sorry to Tony and the families of other people killed by the Winter Soldier?

The originality is good, but it seems that the author is not very good at describing battle scenes. These are not problems. The main problem is that there are too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many jokes. The book is originally biased towards the Western style, but it has to add so many Eastern jokes. I don't know what the purpose of adding them is. These jokes feel embarrassing at first glance.

Um, what's the highlight of this book? I summoned a bunch of rubbish demons at the beginning, with no fighting power. Then I summoned two uncles. I couldn't beat them and couldn't drive them away. My life was being pinched. If I didn't pay attention, I would be killed one day. There was no chance to use the three major artifacts. There were external and internal troubles. Is this still viable? 🤔 I feel like there is nothing to see in the early stage. How did you survive it?

Damn it, why are the chickens gone today? . . . . .

In fact, the book is quite good, but the problem is the eunuch. As for the many issues mentioned about the protagonist licking dogs, I can only say that the warlock is like this, a slut and a bitch. This book is very vivid.

I always feel that food is tasteless and it would be a pity to throw it away...

This book is recommended for three types of readers not to read it! This is not a sense of superiority, it is just a reminder, because if you are one of these three, especially the last one, you will not be able to read this book. It has no other meaning than to confuse yourself and waste time. The first type, those who have never played WOW and don't know what a slutty and cheap profession a warlock is, don't read it! Warlocks are capable of sacrificing their own fathers for power and desire, and can kneel down and lick the soles of bosses' boots with great pleasure. Don't think that once a warlock is very powerful, they will dominate the world. Rather than fighting, they prefer to hide behind and come up with bad ideas to trick people. Second, don't watch it if you don't have an in-depth understanding of Marvel or have only watched a few Avengers movies. I'm really annoyed by "The protagonist is so much more powerful than S. H. I. E. L. D., Why is he still being polite and playful to two agents?" As long as you know more about it, you will know that SHIELD has many hidden backhands that are far more powerful than what it appears on the surface. If nothing else, how many of you can beat a surprise team? This also applies to all Marvel fans, don't take SHIELD so seriously, okay? Especially since this book's S. H. I. E. L. D. Also stitches together some stuff from other universes. Third point, if you like to read mindless and cool articles about killing, killing, killing, don't read it! This book is a spoof and funny. If you want to read a mindless and cool novel that takes the head of Thanos within ten chapters, this book is really not suitable for you!

It's not about being unhappy or having a strict wife. The main thing is that I can't stand being controlled by these two demons, because I don't agree with these two demons as heroines at all. I don't see the qualifications and significance of these two demons as heroines.

See Summoning Gemini coming to Marvel. After that, I couldn't watch it anymore after I lost control. What I wanted to see was the protagonist using the power of the Legion to roam Marvel instead of summoning uncontrollable Legion members to come to Marvel. No matter what agreement they had between them, this way of writing made it feel like Marvel was the protagonist's wife, but she ended up being fucked by two other people. And the Ancient One is not as weak as you think. The Ancient One can travel across the multidimensional universe and is famous in the multidimensional universe, while the Legion only conquers the world. For example, Azeroth can stop the Legion, but Azeroth is a continent, and there are always countless continents in the universe, and the Ancient One One can make a name for himself in the multiverse, but will he be defeated by the legion? And the protagonist is so weak, how can you hide the ancient one with a shielding magic? The ancient one can know the past and the future, and can travel through the dimensional universe with just one thought. I am afraid that people can know everything at a glance on the earth.

🐴 Yes, did you buy it from the navy? Not only was it poorly written, but it also ended up being a eunuch.

The biggest failure is the heroine Claire. The Ereda twins are ten times better than her. The protagonist's attitude towards her is like a dog licking. She is just a general towards the protagonist, and she has too many scenes. It was okay at first, but later she became a bit annoying.

There is something wrong with the author, there is something wrong with the political situation in the United States. The author writes about it, but there will always be nonsense explanations and justifications, and that's okay. Is the protagonist in the United States? If we follow our ideas, he has the strength and ability to start a rebellion long ago. But the author is always yin and yang in the country, and he doesn't care about anything except yin and yang. It's okay to write them separately, but what's the point of writing them together?

The author's original heroine is completely a poisonous point. Maybe the author wants to use the heroine to whitewash the protagonist's lineup in front of the Supreme Mage, but it is still a failure, of course, in my opinion.

More than 100 chapters later, the power system collapsed. Is it okay for the Eredar Twins to fight Iron Man? Or maybe it will become Kil'jaeden versus the Hulk in the next few chapters? The ending is the Six-Gem Thanos fighting Sargeras? Or maybe you end up writing Kakarot Vegeta or something and destroying the solar system with a vitality bomb? Or some kind of first-generation Hokage vs. Da Luo Jinxian? Sorry, I said this with a lot of sarcasm, and I apologize. I really thought it was very good at the beginning, but when I saw the Ereda Twins, I knew it was broken and collapsed! I really think this novel can be written well. Is it because someone else has written it or is there something wrong with the outline?

This novel and Naruto, who comes to Marvel next door, are really two extremes. One is crazy about SHIELD or the original character, and the other is treating SHIELD like a dog and plundering its wool. Your two evaluations are two good works. You, a fel warlock, don't want to become stronger and invade Marvel. You always want to help the original characters, so you just help. It's too embarrassing.

Although the collapse of the gods in the later stage can be beautified as a fantasy. But it's a divine collapse. Marvel has no problem introducing Cthulhu. But it is obviously very different from the previous ridicule style. . The overall style of writing has changed. . Although it was still a joke, the main plot was immediately lost. . See the latest chapter. . The end of this book either leaves a hole unfilled, or it's a complete eunuch. This is to be expected. . You can watch it to pass the time. But not suitable for detailed reading. . Well, some of the chapters titled "Brain Holes" are actually nonsense. It still looks quite happy. Moreover, although it is a Marvel fan. But the content of the book is obviously funny. Don't think about the original characters and reasonable thinking. . The entire content. . It's all about mindless joy.

In the opening chapters, the protagonist reveals his abilities. SHIELD comes to visit, thinking that the protagonist is a mutant and needs to be registered. Then the protagonist is very cooperative, saying that he is not a mutant, but a warlock, fabricating a bunch of lies, and taking out a book called the Warlock Encyclopedia to evaluate the talents of the two. One of them was attracted by the evil energy and forgot about himself, but the other one remembered what happened and thought that the protagonist had used some method and pointed a gun at the protagonist's head. The protagonist knocked them both down with a weak backhand. The woman cursed ***, and the male protagonist said she really wanted to come to me at night, and then proved that he could kill the two of them at any time. There was no need to do that. After clearing their doubts, the weakness of both of them was eliminated. After the woman got up, she slapped the male protagonist in the face with a big backhand. The male protagonist didn't even fart. Is this a normal person? Don't say I'm stronger than you. Even if I'm weaker than you, I can't bear it. In this chapter, there are still a group of people washing the floor. What else is there to say? I really don't understand what kind of outlook on the recommendation votes for these books these days can lead to so many votes.