Golden Greenery

It feels like the author is writing a book with two personalities. The scenery is different from the literary and youthful, and the dialogue is different from the glib. This makes the reading experience not very good! These two styles are in conflict with each other, especially a group of foreigners who are full of Northeastern slander. To be honest, this is the first time I have seen this kind of book on Qidian. The style is inconsistent and the text is awkward! The only thing that is better is that it has a good grasp of the importance. It is not like some books that often fail to compete and have no focus at all.

This book is so poisonous. It treats football as storytelling. It feels completely inconsistent!

Hmm... This is a competitive online novel about love, friendship, and family ties by a sultry literary youth, who plays "To Alice" and steps on the black and white elves. He tells you stories with fresh vocabulary and tricks you into believing! What a sight!

It's a very good football novel. It also has an urban and fantasy style. It's funny and humorous. I'm surprised I haven't discovered it before. It ranks very low.

I don't know what the plot will be like later. Judging from the chapters I have read, the protagonist is too outrageous, and the sport of football is too invincible, so it loses its flavor.

Recommended book: "This striker is from China", please collect it

Actually, I quite like emotional dramas.

This football novel is one of the most unique sports novels I have ever read. When compared horizontally, it is no less than Lin Hai's most peak work. The writing is meaningful and magnificent, and the author's character creation is very rich, especially the supporting characters have their own characteristics. The story is therefore very interesting. There are fewer and fewer books that are interesting but not boring. I recommend reading it! Most of the anecdotes about football stars are based on truth, or at least they are rumors. Old fans will smile knowingly after reading them, which is enough to cherish their youthful memories. How could such an interesting and readable book remain unknown and not be widely publicized? Isn't it a pity for us book fans!

I have read many football articles by the so-called starting point masters. To be honest, this one is the best so far! Author, keep up the good work! A quick aside: can there be more updates and faster updates? Not enough to watch

"Golden Green", the most exquisite football article, has a rating of 9.5. I have read almost all football novels, such as Gao Xiaodong's "Restricted Superstar", which is not as good as playing football. I think this is one of the more readable books, and it is relatively readable among systematic texts, and has a rating of 9 points; "Light of Champions" by Lin Hai Tingtao, "Glory of Champions" and "Legend of Champions" by Chu Zhongtian, which are not systematic, have a rating of 9 points. If the system, rebirth and other cheats are not handled properly, it will be extremely poisonous and cannot be watched at all. Zhuo Yang in "Golden Green" has no system and is not reborn. The author creates a genius with a highly developed brain. He is a 17-year-old boy who is very interested in music and football under the influence of his mother and father. This age is the period when his personality is about to be determined. Studying abroad at the University of Music in Hannover and joining the German third-division club Madiburg Youth Team (Germany's fifth-level league) part-time is a period of personality development. Zhuoyang is to music & football what Einstein is to physics. They are all super geniuses who devote all their attention to the fields that interest them most. Therefore, there is no doubt that Einstein will ascend to the highest position in physics, and Zhuo Yang will also ascend to the highest position in music and football (if nothing unexpected happens). I especially agree with the author's handling of the plot, which is very sophisticated and hardly makes people feel a strong sense of violation. For example: A certain football novel is a golden finger of rebirth. The author's approach is to restore the experience to its original state. For example, the night in Istanbul when AC Milan was reversed. When writing, you really wrote down the original process exactly the same. You must know that even if the same person completes a great initiative, if you let him live again, he may not be able to complete it again, let alone complete it exactly the same. For this type of rebirth article, simply don't use the setting of rebirth, and directly give him a setting that predicts the future, as if he can predict the future, but it is not certain and needs to be verified by himself. The author keeps reminding readers that the protagonist is reborn, which is very dramatic and greatly reduces the points. Ye Wei in WALL-E's "Movie Master" let him know the future through a dream-like setting. Another example is Fang Yun in Huangfuqi's "The Royal Family of the Great Zhou". He thought he was reborn, but in fact it was a powerful being deducing the future for the Emperor of the Great Zhou. He was involved in it, with super real senses and memory, and through this deduction, he also studied for 10 years during this deduction, giving him 10 years of knowledge reserves. "Golden Green" handles it very well. Although the author is also interpreting the game according to the history, the protagonist is indeed in the game, and the readers can easily get involved. This is a big bonus. Just don't need the football writer to be reborn, and the system will set it as appropriate, or even just give him a super genius setting. Don't respawn, use the system as appropriate; this way you can have fewer poisonous points and more interesting points. I hope the authors will consider it!

I'm so obsessed with watching the emotional drama of the protagonist. You tell me that reading a sports novel is like following a romance drama. It can either be pure and innocent and stick to the end, or it can be scumbag and take it all in. Don't make it like a soap opera, splitting and reuniting, saying whether it's scum or not, whether it's pure or not.

I have been reading this book for several days in a row. The protagonist's learning ability is quite good. The combination of playing piano and playing football is also very attractive. I wanted to read this book this weekend. Unfortunately, I saw this person maliciously breaking someone's leg just to give his brother a higher position, and it was not him who came on as a substitute later. Brother, the protagonist is furious. It's so disgusting that I can't stand it. The black girl model before was so disgusting that I couldn't bear it. This so-and-so has a crush on the protagonist, but the protagonist smiles in front of her face but deliberately and maliciously jeopardizes other people's futures and ideals. Goodbye, the three views are inconsistent.

It feels like a group of Chinese people are active in European football fields, speaking Chinese idioms. Shut up and curse the Chinese nation, and add a Chinese remark in the middle.

Daily poisoning! Well-deserved reputation! This book is indeed full of all five poisons!

The writing of this book is very good. It looked good at first, but the part about Hargreeves and Ze Roberto with the broken legs was really disgusting. I couldn't stand it anymore. Unfortunately, I just ordered 100 chapters. There is no grievance, no grudges, and people's legs are broken just so that Piggy can be in the starting lineup. It's really disgusting. I might as well just use a wave of magic to kill everyone, and it will be the finale of dominating the world.

This book can only be said to be purely about making money and going crazy. There are too many messy descriptions. The lives of the protagonist and the supporting characters in both hemispheres can be described in several chapters. The description of the snow scene in one morning is more than half a chapter. Everyone always adds the sentence after every word - do you know! The protagonist's teammate is the soul of a Western Chinese, the jokes are all in the Chinese style, and he is always called the referee uncle on the court? On the field, I call Onkel in German and uncle in English. I might as well call him Dad. Can the author understand the customs and habits of foreign countries when writing a book? He doesn't even know the basic skills. They are all different from our cognition. How can we read it?

Discuss when did Zhuo Yang have a girlfriend? Which one is it? When will you join the national team? Definitely the German team. Don't mention the one who is in the middle of the blame. Whoever takes the blame will be the one who takes the blame. Chinese football is a quagmire. The character of an official is simply not worthy of Zhuo Yang.

To be honest, this is the best football novel I have read in the past five or six years (although Zhuo Zhejun has repeatedly emphasized that this is just a football story), bar none! Zhuo Jun has a wide range of knowledge, and various anecdotes are inadvertently told in the article without any sense of surprise. The characters and characteristics of the Six Musketeers and other characters are vividly described, and the plot has ups and downs. It can be seen that Zhuo Jun's writing skills are profound, and he is already superior to Lin Hai Ting Tao and Zhu Tou Qi. With wine here, it will become clear!

How to say it? I endured reading more than two hundred chapters and felt unsatisfied. First of all, the author is too young to show off his writing. For example, the chapter names are like martial arts novels, which looks too awkward. Secondly, what on earth is the author trying to do, stay on a bad team and show your loyalty? Going to school is no excuse at all. What readers want to see is the protagonist racing in a high-level arena. Also, there are too many emotional scenes, which have not been written yet. The Ukrainian woman's previous relationship can be left vague, but it must be made clear that she is a casual woman who is too unfriendly. Finally, if you don't want to write about the national football team, just skip it. There is no need to write about how the Football Association is in trouble. Although it is true, but where do you put the protagonist and openly conflict, then how can the protagonist be good according to some people's faces? Unless the whole family emigrates. And becoming a star and not endorsing products? Many foreign companies attach great importance to the Chinese market.

It's a bit confusing to see that Hargreaves was deliberately eliminated in order to let Piggy start. Why did the author arrange this plot, just to show the brotherhood? I hope the author can explain that this plot is against the spirit of sports.

When I saw the protagonist joining the country to participate in the national football team, I didn't want to read it. It's useless even if I give you five Maradonas. Chinese football is already bad, and YY is not that good. No wonder the results are not good in football novels. Your writing is quite good, but this is where you lose. The national football team is too bad. Not one person can change it. Even five Ronaldos and Messi are useless. Look at this game, there are so many mistakes.

What a good book, but it was ruined by an SB-like emotional drama

It poisoned me so much that I was beaten and beaten every day when I was provoked. The Chinese Football Association is doing that. Why don't you satisfy your vanity and not become a German citizen? The domestic media are so ridiculing and insulting the protagonist and his family, why don't you respond? And is it possible to spend your whole life in clubs? Even 10 Champions Leagues are not worth one World Cup title. What's more, the German coach Klinsmann didn't find you or anything like that. I'm such a bad temper. Why would he find you if you don't change your nationality? Are you sick? He also went over to beg you, look for you, and ask you to become a German citizen? Do you understand that such behavior will escalate to the state? No matter what nationality you join, you must join voluntarily. If he asks you to join German citizenship, your book is basically useless, and the comment section will definitely be full of curses. Couldn't you just write about a German protagonist? If not, can a Chinese with German nationality also do it?

After reading the free chapter, I finally understand why this book is not good. The plot and story line in the book, including the uncompromising confrontation with the Football Association, are very famous scenes. But what I want to say is that the writing problem is that there are too many character introductions, and they always talk about those records. This represents my personal opinion, and I hope you won't follow the outline and go online. It's not easy for authors, but is it easy for readers to find books when they are short of books?

@ Zhuo Se Tong Well, I have discarded many books about football competition. Why, because there are too many books about the Chinese team and how awesome it is, and it feels boring to read it, just like watching too many AVs... I would rather read more real and flesh-and-blood characters and stories. I like football very much and hope that China can enter the World Cup more than anyone else. But the fact is that we do not have the ability to enter the World Cup at all. From the league, player ability, youth training, and refereeing staff, everything is a trap. Xu Genbao, the godfather of Chinese football, saw the current situation of Chinese football, so he could only buy foreign teams and let young players adapt to the current environment of world football. Only by besieging Wei and saving Zhao can China be saved! Do you think Xu Genbao is not patriotic? He sent home the club he had worked so hard to build, but what was the result? Therefore, I think it is better for the protagonist to become a German citizen. At worst, after winning world honors, he can then switch back to Chinese citizenship! It would be better to lay a base for the future of the Chinese team! But I said no, I will continue to watch Brother Zhuo's updates! !

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If we talk about the football environment, I think Europe, especially Germany, is very mature in training young people. If we talk about national feelings, I think it is better to immigrate. It's not that I don't love our motherland, but emotionally and logically, I hope that the protagonist can have greater development. Chinese football is very weak, and the reason behind it is not anything else, but the country's emphasis and concept of football. What is weak is the thinking of our people. Football in China will always be only a second or third-class profession. Parents still hope that their children will become leaders, presidents, and civil servants!

New month, new comment. I would like to see if the author adds more updates. 😌😌😌 I have already voted for the guaranteed monthly vote at the beginning of the month, and I still vote for recommendations every day. Is the author not good enough?