The First Dandy in Zhenguan of the Tang Dynasty

How can I put it this way? This book gave me the impression that the author was ambitious and dug a lot of holes, but in the end it was unfinished. What on earth did the underworld want the protagonist to do? What does Daomen want to do in the end? If I were to rate this book, I would give it a 6 out of 10. I have always wanted to bring Changle back to life, but in the end, it was unfinished. The little guard around me, and the setting of the protagonist made me feel disgusting. There were a lot of self-righteous things, which was a bit off-putting. It was good at the beginning, but after 600 chapters, the taste changed. The protagonist appeared in three chapters out of ten. What do you mean? Have you changed the protagonist? Finally, let's talk about the ending. Your goal is to build a car? And then the fucking final chapter is over? The first half of the last chapter is still talking about how, and then it's over in the next few sentences? Elementary school students wouldn't be able to write a running essay like this. I know a lot of people may want to criticize me. If you like it, read it or leave it. To be honest, this book is ruined. I won't read it twice. It's just a snack to pass the time.

This book is really suspected of plagiarism. The auctions, greenhouses, and cement are exactly the same. Some people may refute it. If you don't believe it, go read it yourself.

I've read it. This book is extremely poisonous. It doesn't have the magnanimity of a Tang prince at all.

I think the protagonist, since he has brains, technology, and strength. He can leave Datang first and conquer outside, he can go to Europe! There are four advantages to doing this. First, Li Shimin has always been wary of his son's rebellion. After leaving, the sky is high and the emperor is far away, so there will be less suspicion. In this way, the conflict between the emperor and the prince will be reduced. Li Shimin can concentrate on dealing with the family. He does not need to be wary of his son. He only needs to provide the Tang Dynasty's future development strategy, and the protagonist himself does not need to get involved in the struggle between the Tang Dynasty's forces. Second, it is relatively slow to carry out reform and development in an already established national system, because he will definitely encounter resistance from old interest groups, such as Li Shimin and the Aristocratic Family. However, it will be easier for him to directly establish his own power in a relatively backward place, such as Europe or the Middle East, and he can use force and violence to solve most problems. Third, the Tang Dynasty is still too small for the entire world. Even if it wants to accept the position of emperor in the future, it will have to expand outwards. He can lay the foundation in advance. Fourth, the status of the prince has more advantages than disadvantages for the protagonist before he is underage. However, when he has a certain ability to protect himself or reaches adulthood, he has abilities and talents that surpass Li Shimin. What he needs is unrestricted soil for self-growth and development. I think this would be better, using the whole world as the background of the book would be more exciting. On a larger stage, the protagonist can show technology and power beyond this world, instead of spending most of his time in low-level court struggles in the Tang Dynasty. This is not an official novel. When the protagonist has absolute strength, these aristocratic families are like paper tigers and can be crushed directly.

Historical novels cannot require the author to be like those historical scholars and professors. Anyway, I think they are mindless.

I only read Chapter 11 of this book and found that it is not worth pursuing at all. First, the logic is very poor. It was simply written based on the author's subjective wishes without considering the actual situation at all. The reason why I say this is that after the protagonist understands his identity, he actually thinks that there should be no distinction between superiority and inferiority. This is the Tang Dynasty. You still want lowly people to come to the table to eat together. As a prince, how can Li Shimin tolerate such behavior? Don't say that Li Shimin doesn't know that there is no shortage of informants in the East Palace. If you can't integrate with the times, you can't accomplish anything. Second, you think that the ancients are too stupid, and you actually play with sentence fragmentation with the great Confucians. Do you really think that the ancients didn't know the secrets of those sentence fragmentation? In fact, they fragmented sentences in such a way for their own rule, and it was stipulated that sentences must be fragmented in this way. When you come up, you will dig up the foundation of the ruling class of the feudal dynasty. Let alone the prince, you will have to be overthrown even if you are the emperor. Third, since I was 23 years old before being reborn, why is my thinking style after rebirth really only 8 years old? You must know that the Tang Dynasty was the last glory of the family's rule, and it was also the time when the family's dominance was the strongest. If the protagonist really wants to get something, he can only have a chance by relying on the family. However, I don't see any correct way for the protagonist to do it. Instead, there are many behaviors that seek death. You don't even need to read later to know that the author took it for granted that the protagonist was successful. Bookworms should be careful with books that live in their own world like this.

I haven't finished one book yet, and I'm rushing to write the second one, which makes this one start to drag on. You're destroying the Great Wall of China.

Seeing Lin Xiaoxiao (Chunxiao) die at the hands of an assassin, my first feeling was "???" "What the ffff..." What happened just now? Did I miss two chapters? There was no foreshadowing, so why did he die? Elementary school students all know that when they write about tragedy, it will be cloudy and rainy. Why do they suddenly part ways without warning? What kind of seed organization suddenly broke out, which is unheard of. I was really confused when I saw it. Wasn't there any hint of what happened before it happened? Then let me come for a while My name is Wang Xiaoming. Today, Sunday, my parents took me to the park to play. It was so fun. We were waiting for the bus. The summer sun was very bright. Mom lowered her head to wipe my sweat, "Baby, can you let Dad buy you ice cream later?" I looked at Dad with hopeful eyes, and he nodded with a smile and said, "Okay, but don't eat too much cold food, it is easy to get diarrhea." At this time, the bus stopped in front of us Dad suddenly took out a knife from his trouser pocket and stabbed Mom in the back. Mom fell to the ground with an expression of disbelief. "Old... Husband?" Mom fell sideways in a pool of blood. "Ah!!!" Dad cried and screamed, holding mom in his arms. "Dear! Forgive me, in fact, I am an alien spy sent by Planet Q." Then he looked at me. "No... The surname is Wang, he is your son..." My mother shouted weakly. I was shocked. I didn't expect that my dad was a spy sent by Planet Q. My heart was filled with huge shock. But in fact, I am not the real Wang Xiaoming. My soul is actually a 20-year-old otaku who traveled through another parallel world. After a brief period of shock, I endured my grief and ran away. My father pulled out a knife and chased after me. At this moment, there were violent shakings on the ground. A huge purple tentacle suddenly penetrated the ground and slapped my father to death on the ground. Then, in more than one place, huge purple tentacles appeared throughout the city! It turns out. . . Has this planet been eroded from the inside by Cthulhu? The war between the Earth and Cthulhu has lasted for countless reincarnations, and I didn't expect that even here we would not be spared. Fortunately, I still have a system that can travel through all realms. "The system is coming out quickly!" I roared in my heart. "Host, your balance is insufficient. If you want to time travel, please recharge first. However, since the host is using it for the first time, you can get a free time travel." I looked at my "mom" who was stabbed to death and my "dad" who turned into meat paste and resolutely chose to time travel. When I woke up from the dizziness of traveling, I found myself lying on the Trisolaran research platform. "What!? It turns out that the system is a conspiracy of the Trisolaran people!" Although I was surprised in my heart, I did not panic in my heart, because just when I traveled through time, I was accidentally captured by the will of this universe, or the god of this universe. He was on the verge of extinction, and I accidentally took away all his memory and power. Now I am confident and even watch with interest this low-level civilization's research on me. "What a stupid Trisolaris person!" Did you feel that the turning point was too abrupt? That's how I felt when I saw Chunxiao's death.

Starting point, many authors describe time travel stories and I don't know what's going on! Many articles write about the equality of all living beings, as if there is no hierarchy in modern society, and they only maintain superficial equality! The so-called equality in modern society is just talk! From ancient times to the present, and into the future, there will never be true equality. As long as living creatures are inseparable from the law of the jungle, they are all competing for resources. There is a distinction between those with resources and those without resources. There will be no equality. Otherwise, what are people living for? I worked hard to obtain resources, just for equality? Aren't the resources I have worked hard to obtain for my whole life to leave a better starting point, better opportunities and enjoyment for my children after my death? Is it for equality, for there to be no hierarchy?

No, are all free books for members like this? Isn't this just spending money to buy shit?

If you write well, don't write again

At the beginning, the male protagonist traveled through time and became a four-year-old child, and then he molested a thirteen-year-old maid. . . So I decisively gave up writing 🙂

I just want to say that this book is very poisonous, so don't fall into it! Especially those who want to watch the orthopedic drama! Don't read it! I won't mention other pitfalls without filling them, let's talk about the male protagonist and Chang Le. The male protagonist had an affair with Chang Le for more than a thousand chapters, but at the end he was written to death by the author! Originally, he wrote him to death, but what is even more annoying is that the author gave a hope that he could be resurrected, after all, the urging judge is... But! But! The most cheating thing is that this resurrection thing cannot be left alone! It was not resurrected until the end, and it was still alive in the end. Going to see Changle's tombstone is the biggest regret in my life! I feel that simple swear words can no longer express my inner mmp I was worried when I saw orthopedics mentioned in the comments. I kept jumping to see when I would give an explanation to Changle, and then I saw this thing... I can't go on anymore... I have to find something to replenish my blood...

Don't watch it, it's a waste of time. The writing is neither fish nor fowl. Even if the woman closest to him dies, he doesn't even get angry. It doesn't sound like a cool article, and it doesn't even look like it says his IQ is online. I saw that the girl who was closest to the protagonist died, and some kind of ghost organization appeared. It was very bare and without any foreshadowing. It's like you went to make soy sauce, and then a random passerby killed you on the side of the road. He has no grudge against you, nor is he a psychopath. I feel like vomiting, what a waste of time.

It would be great if readers could block the author. This book is specifically designed to disgust people.

This book directly writes about the death of Tang II! The protagonist's biggest achievement after traveling through the past and tossing about it was to finish off the Tang Dynasty! At that time, the final result of the constitutional monarchy was that which family became the leader and directly destroyed the Li family and became the emperor! I guess the protagonist will wake up laughing when he sees his own clan destroyed!

Book friends who want to read this book, please note that this book is terrible. It is terrible in all aspects, from the plot to the character design. Just pick one and talk about the characters of the protagonist and supporting characters. This one can be said to be terrible from beginning to end. It is said that the protagonist is an extension of the author. This protagonist is an innocent tortoise. He is exactly like a licking dog when it comes to women. The article repeatedly talks about the protagonist untying his heart knot and making changes under the guidance of others, but in my opinion, he has not changed from beginning to end. A loser with serious small-peasant ideas suddenly has the power under one person. He fantasizes that he can build a so-called society where everyone is equal and can catch up with the productivity of future generations. At the same time, this society must retain his dominant position so that he can continue to be high. In the later period, he changed again and turned into the strange idea of ​​only retaining the vested interests of himself and a small group of people, while developing society, and himself and his descendants still being in a dominant position. But the result is obvious. His writing power is not enough. He can neither write about the tragedy and grandeur of the revolution nor the changes of the times. Everything seems to come out by itself. The steps can be seen as the protagonist having an idea → giving instructions → the people below complete it with the help of a few words from the protagonist. To say it is a running account is just a boast. There are many typos and messy sentences are very common. Even studio writing does not show such rubbish. As for the performance of the supporting characters, the Empress Changsun is just okay. Li Er has become a ruthless testing machine here, worrying about his status all the time, and testing the protagonist's loyalty to himself. Although he is a feudal emperor, it is normal to ensure his absolute dominance, but at one moment he feels that the protagonist threatens him, and at another moment he says that the protagonist is just like that, he can kill with his backhand. This sense of separation makes people extremely strange, and the so-called emperor of the ages has become like a clown. As for the people around the protagonist, they all have their own strengths and weaknesses, so I won't list them one by one. If you want to be disgusted, you can watch them by yourself. No wonder I didn't write it down. It's really hard to understand that you can reach lv5 at this level from the starting point

This book is poisonous, the protagonist has a mentally retarded aura, and everyone around him is scumbag

What bothers me the most is this kind of weird novel that suddenly kills the heroine in the later stages. It's crazy.

After reading the free chapter, I read the ending again. The author is really awesome. The Tang Dynasty actually developed automobiles and hydroelectric power. . . . . The most poisonous thing is that it turned out to be a constitutional monarchy in the end. What is the difference between this and the emperor's rule that literati have always pursued? He dethroned himself from the throne. . . . . This is actually a high-quality product. . . .

The first half of the writing is quite good, but the second half is not good enough.

Haha, Changle died in the end. He was resurrected as promised. At worst, he and the protagonist will meet again in the underworld. What the hell is your ending? The protagonist comes to Changle's tombstone? Is it useful? It would be better to write about the plot of him and Chang Le in the underworld, and finish it in such a hurry, which is considered a bad ending.

Sure enough, those who buy membership cards are all bastards. What is there in the membership library? ? ? ?

To be honest, the ending of Changle is the biggest failure of this book

This author's book must have a little Loli maid around ten years old at the beginning, and it has a name, a surname, and a flirty and ambiguous plot, which is more or less the case for a man in his forties. . .

I read this book casually. Then he ran away. After thinking about it, I felt very uncomfortable. The emperor and queen of the Tang Dynasty slept very cold at night. That was the emperor. All kinds of precious silks and satins, all kinds of furs. When you make a kang in an ancient wooden structure house, you feel that the author is young and has never seen the world.

Give up, the quality is limited, too white

Oops, after reading more than thirty chapters, the various titles in the book felt wrong and uncomfortable. How can an 8-year-old child have words?

If you don't eat so much oil, you just can't get along with soybean oil, and you threaten to kill your whole family if you can't squeeze out soybean oil?

After reading a few chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. It makes a seven- or eight-year-old child more mature than an adult.