Gu Dao Changsheng

It's almost over, let's give a brief review of Xiao Zhai, I have seen some people in the book review area saying that they don't like Xiao Zhai and that the heroine is too strong. Well, first of all, this book is written by a female author (well, Young Woman Bai), so there is a certain reflection subjectively (to a certain extent). Then the heroine is too ruthless. Xiaozhai was raised by his master, not his parents. His attitude towards his relatives is understandable. Xiaozhai is very clear about what he wants and what he wants to do, so he will not waste time on unnecessary things, and his temperament is naturally cold. In her love affair with Lao Gu, well, she was very strong, above all. Lao Gu is a weak person, because of that confession, I pray for immortality and I pray for you. In love, the one who takes the initiative is usually the weaker one, so some people may think that Xiaozhai is sometimes overbearing and unreasonable. Come on, it's not very true that one spouse is willing to lick the other and is willing to be licked, it's just dog food! Is it wrong for Xiao Zhai to treat different people with different attitudes? Finally, in the scene at the beginning of the book where the rich second generation is slapped in the face, the male protagonist is not alone, but the female protagonist is slapped in the face together. How strange it is. After seeing so many such bloody routines, isn't it the female protagonist Bai Lianhua who is as delicate as a white lotus next to her? Is there a sense of presence? Of course, Xiao Zhai's character design definitely has its shortcomings and is imperfect, but the character image is extremely full and impressive enough. From the identity of the melon-eating girl in the Xiaozhai Immortality World to the present world, we can see a certain change in her mood.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            are true love, but they are true love. I ask for immortality and I ask you to call for Zhaiyu!

This is my second brush, please write some thoughts 😄 I hope it will be more refined, I hope you can see my suggestions. Say good things first😄 1. The writing style is still excellent. The characters and certain details are described very delicately. It's really a model for literary youth. (This will also be a shortcoming that will be explained later) 2. The story setting is very innovative, especially the setting of spiritual energy recovery. Some of the later modern cultivation books were learned from this. What I want to say is that Bai Bai's spiritual energy recovery is very logical and empirical. Bai Bai should have a good understanding of the development of Taoism. It's really reasonable. In Jin Yong's novels, why does martial arts (internal strength) become weaker as the dynasties go up? Mr. Jin has never explored it as much as Bai Bai 😄😄 joking. 3. Of course, this book has many advantages, and everyone can judge for themselves. A matter of opinion. Let's talk about the worse ones😄Don't make excuses. 1. The middle and later stages are too light and there is no dramatic conflict, Bai Bai admits it himself. 2. The heroine Xiao Zhai was too powerful before she cultivated, right? The two of them were on a trip to investigate the recovery of spiritual energy. Lao Gu was pretty good at practicing spiritual energy, but Xiaozhai didn't have spiritual energy. Lei Fa was still looking for it, and she definitely couldn't do it. She didn't know how to practice, only some external skills. She was only 22-23 years old, could she take such a risk with Lao Gu? If you re-read it, you must pay attention to the heroine of this period. 3. Continue with the topic above. I don't know if you have noticed it, but after Xiao Zhai started to appear, Lao Gu started to act like a tool. From the conversation between Lao Gu and Xiao Zhai to accompanying her to find the inheritance, the stories in the middle feel like they all revolve around Xiao Zhai, or Xiao Zhai leads it according to his own wishes. Especially when the heroine Xiaojin and the heroine Erlongqiu develop later, Lao Gu can only come out and call me a pig's foot at the critical moment. I think this is because Bai Bai is a female author. Besides Lao Gu, who else has written more? Lao Gu feels that he is actually just water, he can't live without it and doesn't need it, as long as he appears when needed. In fact, Lao Gu before Xiaozhai appeared was probably more popular among male readers😄 4. Like most online article authors, there are bugs caused by lack of understanding of certain industries. For example, the description of government bureaucracy is superficial, such as the weapons used by the government to fight against zombies. There is a paragraph in it describing how men and women broke through the surrounding army with pig's feet: "I have been discovered a long time ago!" Han Dapeng's heart was frightened, but his reaction was not slow. His body bent forward more and more, rolling with the help of inertia. Brush! The moment he jumped up, he quickly took out his dagger and prepared for a head-on confrontation. He thought he had distanced himself, but immediately felt a chill all over his body. A ghostly figure kept leaning against him. Han Dapeng felt a pain in his head and suddenly lost consciousness. 😥The police have to use a gun to catch a dangerous suspect, but you only use a dagger. It can only be said that I have never played and experienced guns in vain 😌 5. The layout is too small, and the literary youth disease is a bit serious. There is a description of rescuing Long Qiu: What a sum! He has the ability to bully girls, but he has no ability to save the people. Forcing people to learn Gu, use it after learning, and throw it away after use. Is this your clan etiquette? "What a money! You have the ability to bully girls, but you have no ability to save the people. You force people to learn Gu, use it after learning it, and throw it away after use. Is this your clan etiquette?" There is nothing wrong with speaking from reality, but it really cannot be said in this living environment in the mountains. There is no medicine or medicine in the remote areas. If someone can cure diseases and save lives, the whole village will agree. If some people are sacrificed, the entire tribe can survive and multiply, and the Miao culture can be passed on. Who is older and who is younger? Of course the individual is very innocent. No one spoke for them. In the great era, a grain of sand falling on the heads of ordinary people is like a mountain. This saying also has its truth. But our culture has not been passed down to this day, and it has been revived. There must be many ordinary people who voluntarily did something. They are great and yet small. In fact, I can write more carefully about the government. I can understand the organizational and responsible capabilities of our government during the epidemic, compare Eastern and Western cultures, and there is a lot to write about about the system during the catastrophe. During the epidemic, I have nothing to do but write whatever I want. If you don't like it, please don't comment. Thank you 🙏🙏

I've finished reading it ✊ I found this book by searching for works by the same author in the literary era. It has two stars from Masters Hall and I read it after reading that the subject matter is spiritual energy recovery, which I like. I think the overall storyline of this book is pretty good, especially Bai Bai's use of orthodox Taoist theory instead of the traditional online cultivation model, and its integration of politics, science, situation and cultivation of immortality are eye-catching. I will also mention the things that are lacking in emm or that I don't like very much: 1. I think my emotional line is a flaw. I can't feel how deep the relationship between Lao Gu and Xiao Zhai is. Maybe I like this kind of light emotional description in vain, or maybe In order to cater to the setting of being indifferent to ordinary emotions after cultivating immortals, I feel that this pair has no sense of CP, and the emotions between the two are dispensable; 2. Continuing from the previous article, the description of Xiaozhai in the early and middle stages of Baibai is too strong, like many book friends said, like a female video, It's like a setting with two protagonists or even a heroine. It's better not to have an emotional line. The two are Taoist friends and each dominates; 3. Bai Bai wants to show a great era with the revival of spiritual energy, a big place where all living beings, many protagonists and many forces compete. The above is not expanded on here; 4. Finally, the overall tone of this book is too bland. Generally, I always feel a sense of loss after reading a good novel, but after reading this book, I felt very bland, and there was not much reluctance to make trouble. I just felt a little confused after reading it, and I couldn't explain many of my ideas properly, so let's just do this 🤐

"Blank space" is the creative style (or ending style) that the author has adhered to since his last book "The Age of Literature and Art". The ending in "Gu Dao Immortality" in which Gu Yu is still searching for the path to immortality is obviously intentional by the author. In the author's opinion, a protagonist who has practiced the immortal path to perfection seems to fall into the trap of traditional upgrade novels. But unfortunately, as the author said in the chapter after Gu Yu became an Earth Immortal and ascended during the day: The main part of this book is roughly over. Because he himself does not like the traditional writing method of upgrading and changing maps, but because some of the story lines and plots need to be concluded, a few more chapters need to be written after this, and the few chapters "necessary for ending" are redundant. / Xie Yu upgrades from the two-dimensional world to the three-dimensional world, explores the source of stars and understands the rules, and finally creates an atmosphere of happy reunion with Jiang Xiaozhai's departure and return and ends there. What these arrangements bring to me is not the meaning of blank space, but more of the awkwardness of a forced ending. "Awkwardness" is one of my biggest feelings after reading the whole book. The introduction in the work information is: I thought it was a realistic urban life, but when I didn't agree with it, I changed the setting. This syntax of "I thought... But I didn't agree with it" means to me: I thought it was an ethereal fairy spirit as shown in the title of the novel "Gu Dao Changsheng", but when I didn't agree with it, I started to complain in embarrassment. The writing style of "You Will Turn White When You Sleep" is indeed very smooth in terms of purely describing the setting of cultivating immortals, large and small map scenery, fighting scenes and characters. It does not have the tackiness of white writing at all. It has a kind of plainness that is truly indifferent and otherworldly. But the impure thing is that from time to time there is a reader in this novel - the author outside the text who is constantly complaining and complaining about himself. Complaining does not mean that it is bad, but the author's skills in this area are somewhat limited. Maybe it is difficult for me to get the essence of humor, but for example, a paragraph in Chapter 287: "In fact, some people may wonder, the evil dispelling pill can only remove illness and strengthen the body, does it count?" Is it worth buying such amazing pills? Think about it, with modern medical methods, if something happens, you may need surgery, chemotherapy, and a few months of conditioning to regain your strength. But taking drugs is different. There is nothing that one pill can't solve. If there is one, then two." The use of common old jokes and the direct conversational narration with the reader inevitably made me suddenly embarrassed. It seems that Bai Da wants to bring an innovative gameplay of "plain complaints" to readers that has never been experienced before. However, innovation is risky, and embedding requires caution. It is quite difficult to embed complaints intended to arouse emotions on a background with a plain writing style. Especially the author has a high level of writing skills in writing the ordinary style of cultivating immortals. It is difficult for the complaints to complement it, and it is even more like superfluous. It can be seen from the novel that the author has a rich accumulation of allusions about Chinese immortal cultivators, and he knows a lot about ancient Chinese Taoist myths. These character allusions have been integrated into the background structure of the book. The author appropriates or transforms the character relationships according to the needs of the plot, making them one of the clues to promote the progress of the story. This is also a major feature of the book. If you ignore the slightly awkward complaints, this feature combined with the author's plain writing style is quite charming.

After reading more than 400 chapters, I really want to write a review. First of all, what is certain is that in terms of writing and logic, this book beats 99% of online novels, and there is no stupid plot. Moreover, it can be seen that the author is very diligent and can quote scriptures. All the religious and historical contents in the book can withstand scrutiny. Therefore, this book is refreshing from the beginning, and it is a completely different experience from other routine novels. But gradually, I discovered that the biggest problem with this book is that the plot is not gripping enough and there are no explosive points. The spiritual energy is revived, and the hero and heroine have been ranked first and second in the world in terms of combat power since the beginning of their training. There are no thrilling battles, and everyone is crushed. It has been more than 400 chapters, and the hero and heroine have not even been injured. The author also described the young couple as doing everything with ease, as if everything was under control and there were no surprises. There are no big puzzles or big suspense in the plot. The whole reading is as bland as water, just like reading a well-written anecdote. In addition, the author also drives a car habitually. It was bright at first, but after a long time, it became boring and it would be better not to drive. To sum up, I can't stand more than 400 chapters anymore, so I decisively skip to the ending to take a look and then abandon it.

，，， So even if I had long-term back pain, asked for leave, or had long-term single or interrupted updates, I turned on automatic subscription and took the initiative to get into the trap. It can be seen from "Gu Dao Changsheng" that Bai Bai is a pursuing author. Apart from being as "dirty" as Little Train, this book is completely different from "Literary Times". Unlike some authors, eight out of ten books are the same model without innovation. Watching Gu Yu walking with Xiao Zhai all the way, he was so cute and soft that he was easy to tease. When he was fascinated by Peach Blossom Miasma, he rarely took the initiative, but was beaten violently by Xiao Zhai. Then he had to apologize to Xiao Zhai, which included a description of Bai Bai. "Will you be my girlfriend?" "Can we be together?" "I love you!" "I love you too!" "No matter how close the heart is, it also needs this kind of ritual sense of certification. If not, then you are definitely not a couple, you can only be considered friends." Then Gu Yu began to suppress his shyness, and slowly confessed his love to Xiao Zhai, starting from his childhood, and then talking about his gradual emotional weakness after practicing Taoism. Then he said: "It is always said that saints are ruthless and heaven and earth are unkind. The purpose of cultivating Taoism is to live forever. Perhaps when we reach the level of immortals or earthly immortals, we will no longer have human feelings. We regard all living beings as ants. In the blink of an eye for a hundred years, we only pursue the eternal road. ... I ask for immortality, and I ask you too." I suddenly found that my eyes were a little sore. Gu Yu didn't say anything about the eternal vows of eternal love, but he put Xiaozhai in the same position as what he wanted in his life. He made up his mind: I pray for eternal life and I pray for you too! Whether he becomes a god or an earthly immortal, Xiaozhai is his path, and this is probably the promise of being with him forever. Different from the love that hugs the left and the right, different from the love that is difficult to choose, different from the hypocrisy of testing each other, Gu Yu's love is open and clear, refreshing and not burdensome. There is no impurity, no calculation, no hesitation. Having read too many online stories about harems, stallions, falling in love and killing each other, domineering presidents, and rebirth and revenge, watching "Gu Dao Changsheng" is like looking at a clear spring. Let us not always feel the excitement in online articles, or ask for but not get, there is a kind of love that comes naturally, it is to seek eternal life and to seek you!

Finished reading! The urban part of the article is wonderful! For example, the characters around the protagonist! Lively nature, innocence and all that! Some of the descriptions of expressions and movements are a bit literary, just like the beautiful scenes described by Xu Zhimo in the last century. Enough of the urban writing! This description of a spiritual recovery novel feels a bit out of place. It may be influenced by the literature I am exposed to. The cultivation system is too simple and single. There is a market for novels about urban spiritual energy recovery. In short, if you want to write well, you must have enough understanding of both aspects. The cultivation system, principles, contact with characters, worldview, values ​​and outlook on life must all be changed. You cannot apply urban ones!

2019.01.01Liu Peng

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Bai Bai, there is no extra update today and I will beat you to death

Found a magic reformer called: From a righteous boy to a heavenly master of all kinds of magic. The author is: {"NickName":"It's not early today","UserId":392199793}

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This book should be the best in the urban immortality novel genre, but I don't know how to unfold it after Lao Gu became an earthly immortal.

I ran out of books, so I read it again and came here to report it. Personally, I think the text is extremely fluent and realistic, with clear logic and a sense of cohesion. I feel very immersed in it when reading it. Moreover, many of the materials are compiled from ancient Chinese materials and after thinking. If you like the practice materials in this book, you can add friends to chat with it. I would love to see this book made into a video. But I don't want to see those random adaptations.

As for new book types, the magic and mystery side may be more popular now. The current environment for entertainment articles is not very good. Firstly, the starting point is strictly controlled, and you will get 404 if you are not careful. Secondly, the entertainment industry is too chaotic now, and someone may expose themselves one day.

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During this period, I think the author always stops updating due to physical reasons. In fact, it doesn't matter if he stops updating occasionally. The main thing is that your health really needs to be paid attention to. It turns out that Cuttlefish also has various physical problems. I see that he now exercises, swims and runs three times a week, but I have never seen him say that he has any physical problems. Having said so much, in a word, I hope the author takes care of himself. You can write slowly, and we can also read slowly.

Gu Daochangsheng is Bai Bai's second book. I followed it from the literary and artistic era. This book gave me the feeling that the writing style is still very good. Bai Bai is still very good at describing characters, but the content is too bland and lacks conflicts (maybe due to the subject matter). The tension of the novel is not enough. The middle and late stages are a bit dull. Although the literary and artistic era also has a lot of daily life, Chu The conflicts between Qing's life and Fan Xiaoye, and the conflicts between work and the film system are all throughout the book. Although the pace is not fast, the reading experience is very good. Gu Daochangsheng feels that there is a lack of such a main line (not necessarily a routine, but something with impact and impressiveness), but I can only talk about my feelings, and I don't have any good opinions. I also hope that Bai Bai will write better and better.

The heroine Jiang Xiaozhai is a freak who was forcibly kneaded together by two people. She is the spokesperson of the author. The author uses her to export his distorted values. On the one hand, she has many inner activities and likes to talk about porn. She is a standard modern person, which is very human, but she is also Weirdly, she has the image of a cold goddess. As a human who grew up in human society, she became a god without divine power for no reason. She is cold and contemptuous of everything in the world. It is said that this is her true face. She was born like this, haha , how can such a person be a normal person? She refuses to be filial to her parents. Her native family is generous and normal, and it did not cause any trauma to her childhood soul. However, she hates her parents and is unwilling to associate with them. She is an irresponsible person without any sense of responsibility. She gave birth to her biological children as experimental subjects and then abandoned them, and she was proud of how progressive her thoughts were. She was unfaithful to love. She did not love Gu Yu but accepted Gu Yu's confession, and regarded this love as her own burden, even though she had given nothing. It was like she was having a convulsion. One moment she was snatched away by the author and told some modern dirty jokes, and the next moment she turned into a god looking down at everyone in the book. The author happily presents such a monster because he thinks that everyone will agree with her twisted and weird values. It is just for self-amusement. Readers are sharp-eyed. This book shows the problem. How can people accept an unfaithful, unfilial, unkind, and unjust person as the heroine?

After reading about a hundred chapters, I feel that the values ​​​​are a bit conflicting with mine, but values ​​​​are relatively subjective. But I still want to give you feedback on reading. ::::::::::::: It feels like Gu (protagonist), Jiang (female protagonist), and Long (female supporting role?), These three people have not yet cultivated, and they have begun to treat people as ants. This feeling was not so strong before, until the plot of Long Qiu, which hurt dozens of people, and I began to have a feeling in my heart that resisted me reading further. Then Gu and Jiang escaped from danger on the snowy mountain, Long Qiu faced the state personnel Gu losing control and devouring others, and then Jiang (the heroine) confronted the state, transferring the "crime" of the incident that injured dozens of people to the "merit" of the zombie incident, and Gu (the protagonist) demanded the release of Long Qiu. After reading until this point, I feel a strong sense of resistance in my heart, so I came here to comment.

A little fat, let's start killing. It's a bit frustrating that there are few updates.

In fact, the writing style of this book is definitely at the level of a master, and the plot advancement is no big problem. It can definitely be regarded as a fairy tale. But there is a fatal weakness, which is the writing style of the heroine. First of all, this is a male channel, and the majority of the audience is men. In your book, the male protagonist is still indifferent and cultivating immortals at the beginning, but when it comes to catching the snake, I feel something is wrong. Looking back, sure enough, isn't this character the same as the character of the female protagonists in the harem novels about showing off? He licks so hard and is pressed down by the heroine everywhere. He is really a wife slave. Although it is a male channel, it is basically a female channel. The heroine Xiaozhai has a more distinctive personality, a more prominent role, and can leave a deep impression. It feels like the male protagonist exists simply to assist the heroine. It makes me feel uncomfortable as a grown man. Yes, it is necessary to be good to your wife, and you can let her go, but in this book, you are completely under the heroine, and he is also responsible for solving the heroine's desires. This is a male channel, male channel, male channel! Judging from the reviews, the author is a woman, so it's no wonder that there is a female protagonist style. Alas, if it weren't for this, the reputation of this book would definitely increase several times. This is really the only thing that makes people feel stuck in their hearts. Above Supplementary comments: The following is my advice to new readers in 26 years Run! Run! Run! Pure female video! ! The male protagonist is pure🐢!

Among the five scholars of Neo-Confucianism in the Northern Song Dynasty, except for Er Cheng who was a pure scholar, the other three all had a sense of spiritual practice. Taiji Tu taught Zhou Dunyi, Qi Transformed the Universe Zhang Zai, and Huang Ji Jingshi Shaokang Jie. The first two were related to the Taoist practices of gods and immortals, but Zhang Zai taught Taixu Qi Transformed the Universe, and Taoism was traced to Wang Fuzhi in the late Ming Dynasty, who may have practiced earthly immortality. Shaoyong Shaokangjie is most likely an Earth Immortal. He is inherited from Xiyi's ancestor Tiantu, who wrote the Yuanhui Yunshi Huangji Sutra, and created his own Plum Blossom Easy Number Divination Algorithm The Tao of Heart Learning is close to the Yangshen Alchemy Method.

The Dharma cannot be taught lightly, and the Dharma cannot be taught lightly. The protagonist narrowly escaped death and obtained the Dharma but passed it on lightly. A stupid idiot with a sperm brain.

It will turn white when you sleep, it will turn white when you sleep, it will turn white, it will turn white, it will turn white... I offer my monthly tickets, please help me with my skills and help...🤤🤤

I was so angry when I saw it. The main character was written as a bastard who was led around by the heroine in various ways. The relationship between the two was completely unequal. Jiang Xiaozhai did not have the feminine charm of the heroine at all. After the early stage, I lost all good feelings for her. When I saw her, I felt alienated. I had to watch their scenes. I can't bear to watch it.

I saw a lot of posts saying that Sao Bai is not pure anymore, and I can't find the feeling of "Literary Era" when reading his books~ Here, I still want to say something, the environment is so boring... The Internet literary circle is like the entertainment circle of the Literary Era, and the status difference between entertainment novels and fantasy novels is like the difference between literary movies and mainstream movies. "Literary Era" really enjoyed watching some, including me A minority group of book friends, but after all, the fantasy daily sect is the mainstream of the market, and that one can make money... The author also has to support his family, so you should just think that he is Jia Zhangke who has his original intention and compromises with the market. After all, not everyone can be like Lou Ye who was beaten to death... PS: Okay, okay, I admit it, in fact, I am just thinking about Mr. Fan who is saying "Chu Qing! I fuck you uncle" every day.

The female video's attitude of treating human life as nothing is too strong. I won't talk about the green snake that hurts people everywhere as a pet, and I didn't even play the zombie in the back😓

I have designed the main character for you. A great director of commercial films who yearns for male protagonists in artistic films. Born into a white-collar family, he is a digital genius and supports half of China's "Industrial Light and Magic" by himself. Funny, good at comedy blockbusters, debuted in comedy films. A collection of expression masters from Mr. Bean and Kerry King. The "King of Special Effects" leads the "Industrial Light and Magic" he formed to produce special effects, and his films are hits every time. Investors are snapping up this movie, and every movie is criticized for its outrageous love stories. He aspires to be a literary male protagonist, and likes to direct and act in literary male protagonists. He has made one hit after another at the box office, and is notorious in the industry. The concept of love, in the early stage, was dissolute, drifting with the tide, and it was hidden a lot. /*If you find true love later, of course you will be a good otaku husband! */

Are you sure this is a male video? After watching a hundred of them, I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up. The male protagonist is just silly and sweet. He listens to the female protagonist in everything. He is like a child in front of the female protagonist. He is a female channel wearing a male channel.