The Abyss of the Heavens Descends

Another book is gone, and the author is a eunuch. It can be seen that the last two books were not particularly well written. It's not easy for the author either. Why,

The book is a good book, but it's a pity that the author is a eunuch

Rt, this book is well written, really good, but I think there are two shortcomings, so I will explain them. The first one is about the plot of the main world. I think what the author wrote is not as good as the copy, or in other words, the author's writing of the main world is too bland, and the design of the main world is not enough, and some plots are extremely bad (for example, the part where he reads his real name and becomes a slave to the demon who has the power of lightning, although it is only very small, it makes me feel unhappy). Therefore, I hope that the author will put more effort into the main world and not let the main world become a shortcoming of this book, because no matter how good the author is in the dungeon world and keeps opening dungeons and dungeons, he still has to return to the main world, and he still has to use the storyline of the main world to drive the development of the story. This is unavoidable (for example, this is the case with the Supreme Being). The second issue is the strength of the protagonist. Yes, the protagonist is very strong. In the dungeon world, he is simply an omnipotent god. But compared with other demons, does he have anything worthy of praise? Can he perform very well? Can it create some kind of crushing advantage? To be honest, I didn't feel that in the plot of the main world, the protagonist still gave me the impression that he was just a stronger ordinary demon. But this suddenly gave people the feeling that the protagonist was just an ordinary demon. Because he entered the extremely weak dungeon world, he exposed his crazy and violent side and began to constantly design others. But this seems to be what every demon can do. In short, the protagonist has no specialness and independence. Yes, the protagonist has a system, and even has a part of the Dark Flame King's inheritance, but the protagonist has these things, but it does not show that he is far beyond ordinary demons. From this point of view, even the very amazing copy is inferior to a lot because of it - even if he has those things, what is so special about him compared to ordinary demons? The author didn't write it. Therefore, my suggestion is to formulate one or two trump cards and killer moves for the protagonist. For example, if the pig's foot accidentally obtained something, it is necessary to let the blood of angels flow into the dark holy soil, and the protagonist uses this power to form a unique move. When facing angels and demons in the main world, the protagonist will also have the ability to fight across levels. This is where he is different. There is another very important point. Didn't the protagonist get part of the inheritance of the Dark Flame King? Then the author can open up some ideas and use the power of that part of the inheritance to form a killing move, and completely control it to form his own power. After returning to the main world, When facing the demon who has received a lot of inherited power, but has always accepted it, he has an overwhelming advantage, and he is not only the successor of the Dark Flame King, he only obtained that part of the power and turned it into his own use, which transcends the scope of inheritance. Well, these are my two suggestions. They are quite lengthy and subjective at the same time. I hope the author can take a look at them.

I think this book was actually ruined by trolls u>, I remember a lot of people said before that the author couldn't understand the difference between demons and devils. I just want to say that this is not a dnd fan, what's wrong with changing it? Also, in the early stage, the protagonist has just traveled through time and does not want to eat raw meat. A lot of people actually scolded the protagonist, the Virgin. . . . Fearful.

Have done something wrong, taught my king bad things, played tricks on those who are reborn, beat those who have gone through reincarnation, raped female ghosts, etc. You are the best devil in this generation.

Merciful Lord. Forgive the author for his contempt for God. If he had written Snow White and Sleeping Beauty to me. Just let me have sex and forgive him. Infinite Lord, Amitabha, Hallelujah

Ahem, the great void noble came to this book to build a Longtan Tower (official version), where Abyss (the author) will select new victims →_→ The format is as follows: Name: Gender: Race: Ability or specialty: Experience: (The power level should not be too high for now→_→)

I am a reader who has tasted hundreds of herbs. There are so many herbs that can't kill me. Today, I fell on this book. My life is at an end.

Eunuch😭

Alas, these days, authors feel uncomfortable when good books are not popular. It's not because the author doesn't want to write┐(─__─)┌

The protagonist is just pretending to be cool in the small world, but once he returns to the abyss, he is as weak as a dog

It's just that Descendants of Evil was renamed, bloody and violent, and it was deleted.

Hell and the abyss, devils and devils, are always in opposition. The author seems to have confused the concepts of the two. The protagonist is obviously a devil with potential, the seven kings of hell represent original sin, and the seventy-two demon kings summoned by Solomon are the representatives of the abyss.

The author has not returned yet

? The author stopped updating? Why?

I really hope that the protagonist is unwilling to eat corpses to grow at the beginning, and when he meets other little devils, he finds that the two sides are not growing at the same level. Being beaten and devoured, relying on the system to survive and not die, reflect on your actions and be a devil.

I thought I would fatten them up before slaughtering them, but I didn't know that they would become eunuchs if they were raised 🥵

The author's writing is very good and the plot is good, but the genre is really unacceptable! I hope the author can change the genre and write more positive novels!

Coming from Zhuishu, good luck to the author!

Ahem (clears throat)... Well, let me say a few words next. The book "Descendants" has gone through many ups and downs, but it can be said that it has successfully reached the day it is put on the shelves. Everyone is struggling with me under the clutches of Aunt 404. It is not easy. We are all brothers. If we are brothers, let's play Blue Moon Legend together... Bah, if we are brothers, at this critical moment, please contribute a first subscription! The story is very long, and the road is still far away. It is foreseeable that there will be more bumps in the road in the future, but I hope that everyone can follow the book Descendants. After all, starting from a vast sea of books, it is not easy to find an inhumane guy like Carlo, so don't die halfway... Thinking about how he would harm more cuties in the future, Emma felt a little excited. Not much to say, the wine is just warm, drink up this glass, I'll be waiting for you in the VIP. The Dark Throne is waiting for you to come...

It feels quite novel to be able to write about this subject in 2017

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