Deadly Game

It's still watchable despite some obvious bugs and slightly awkward dialogue. Food and grass. By the way, the pig's feet pretended to be a pig to eat the tiger, but in the end, they really thought they were pigs.

The subject matter is OK, the writing is passable, although the creativity is good, the plot is not good

What a poison! I was so embarrassed when I saw it!

The protagonist's name is better to be Li Jiangnan

Why did that woman leave? Because the protagonist is not good and his character is not good. Why don't they share the joys and sorrows? The main character is not good as a person and loses his temper. Why do people regret leaving? Just look at the results of these photos and you will know how big you are. With this routine, if you take eight photos, you can't stand one of them.

By the way, can we delete all the advertisements? The first few reviews of each book are full of advertisements, making it difficult to find a new book to read.

Is it an online game? I don't really like games about other worlds and lack of sense of immersion.

The writing is very good, but I still want to ask, how many words does the author plan to write in this book? The game is only a dozen days old and already has almost a million words. . .

Coming from Longkong, I don't know whether the author has seen it or not. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I can't say that it's not attractive and I can't find any fun points. The plot and foreshadowing are dizzying, and the settings are unclear. For example, the lifespan is increased to the sixth level at the beginning. What is the lifespan of a real person? If so, too many flaws would turn it into a poison. There is also a game where your girlfriend abandons you after you fail, which has become a forbidden area in the game. Long Kong has a comment saying that this is the game version of Snow in the Snow, and no book similar to Snow has ever seen the light of day except Fenghuo himself. Don't be so bitter and resentful. The most important thing about online writing is fun. If you are a famous author, it's good to have die-hard fans. It's really hard for newcomers to get along at the beginning.

The pit has been abandoned. The first few chapters are well written, but then it becomes extremely toxic!