Across Timelines

I have read more than 240 chapters, please give me some suggestions It can be seen that the author worked very hard to write this book, really worked hard. Everyone has their own position, which basically breaks away from the common problem of flat characters in online books. Even if the protagonist turns against the Blade of the New Alliance, he doesn't mindlessly hack into the New Alliance, destroy the character, or anything like that. But there are two serious problems. First, in addition to the protagonist and supporting characters, the supporting characters, such as the police, Qi Xiaoqi (I think she is a foreshadowing, keep your opinion, but it is a bit illogical to be killed once because she is really powerful), Gao Li, and the supporting characters near the incident, etc., Are completely incompetent. The author's setting is that all people have abilities. Under such circumstances, it is not very logical that social laws can remain unchanged. Not to mention conspiracy/rebellion, it is necessary to use the source of power to make life more convenient, right? I hope that if the author writes about urban supernatural powers in the next book, he will pay more attention to the background setting, or set it so that some people (such as 20%) have abilities. Secondly, the female characters' personalities are too flat. In particular, the protagonist's ambiguous partners and acquaintances basically only have the word "unruly" towards the protagonist when they first appear. Not arrogant and willful, but simply unruly. Jiaojiao and Xiaofeng, when they first appeared and before the bathroom incident, were at odds with the protagonist for no reason at all, they could basically be described as "crazy women" (although this changed later). Such characters, no matter how strong their abilities are, would not be able to survive a few missions. Wang Ke went even further. He knew clearly that he was the party to the theft but still acted confidently. Is it typical that I am weak and I am right? She felt bullied, but did the person she stole from have a direct relationship with her? Steal someone's ancestral sword. After being chased by the protagonist, she was clearly in a disadvantaged position and even taunted and distrusted the protagonist who showed kindness to her. She never thought that as the protagonist's entrusted person, not to mention giving them 1 million, it would be better if they didn't kill them. With all due respect, stealing, doubting and ridiculing those who help, how wrong are these three views? The tone may not be particularly good, so I would like to apologize to the author in advance. But I really think this novel is good, and the author is serious about it. I hope it can get better and better as it gets written 🌹

If I had the ability, I would have bought lottery tickets 😁

After reading the first few chapters, I think the protagonist is a little too ambitious. He has the ability to travel through time, but he dares to use it so carelessly? If people find out, it would be strange if they are not kidnapped or killed.

Very exciting, bookmarked and waiting for updates!

I was introduced to it by a friend, and it took me half a day to read it. The article is great, keep up the good work! I love you.

The chapters in the novel seem to have no connection with each other, but in fact, each chapter is related to each other and connected with each other.

He is also the author of Power Generation with Love. . .

I can't stop watching it. I have to work harder and update it faster.

It's a good book, I like the male protagonist, the writing is delicate, the plot is bizarre, and it's fascinating. The more I read, the more addictive it becomes.

Not to mention anything else, I like to follow novels that are updated steadily. Therefore, it is cruel to stop reading, and it is difficult to pick up what is broken. . So, be sure to keep updating, otherwise...

I have been following this book, voting silently, and unswervingly supporting the author.

Collections, recommendations, it's all for you!

How could there be such a bizarre plot? Fatten up first and take your time.

It's very interesting to write, keep it up!

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I don't really like the beginning and the character. . Too frivolous

No wonder there are so few people watching your loss, and they still say it's not a case of Marvin.

What happened? Why do I receive update alerts for this book? Is this book not on my bookshelf? ? ?

I feel like there are so few readers of this book. I just saw this book today and I think it's very creative!

After reading sixty chapters, I felt that in many places the author forced the protagonists and supporting characters to have lower IQs, and then produced a series of plots. It is a pity that such a good subject matter and setting sometimes make the IQs a little worrying.