The Most Powerful Mecha in History

Just by looking at the introduction, you can tell it's a pretentious article.

It's not too late to write about mecha and watch Ha Gundam.

I'll give you a monthly pass if you want to watch a plot in which the protagonist makes a leap of faith from outer space to entering the planet. It's exciting just thinking about it.

Recommend a new unlimited flow book "The Inheritance of All Heavens"! Book lovers are welcome to come and watch! A magical ring opened up the world's treacherous and ever-changing world. Animation, games, movies, freedom between illusion and reality; technology, ancient martial arts, magic, Taoism, the immortal inheritance is all with me. In the Ninja World War, the pirates stole the power of the sacred tree from the sky; in the war on top, the alliance of vertical and horizontal alliances caused trouble in the Navy Headquarters; in the Holy Grail War, thousands of swords returned to the clan and destroyed the king's treasure; in the God-killing World, blood stained the top of Olympus, and the death virus raged across the world of Journey to the West... The door to reincarnation has been opened, and the horn of adventure resounds through the sky!

First of all, come on Bingbing! Secondly, this book is a good book. The text is smooth, the connection is natural, the characters have characteristics, and the settings of social operations and daily life are very attentive. I have only read Chapter 4, and the above is my feeling. Compared with "Xian Diao", this book is undoubtedly a huge improvement! I have a few opinions, I wonder if Bingbing agrees with them. I haven't read the rest of the story, so my knowledge of the book is limited, but I think that as far as the first four chapters are concerned, Bingbing's writing is characterized by smoothness but not enough story! The article seems to be dissatisfied with the mountains. In the first four chapters of this book, apart from foreshadowing, are there any real conflicts of sufficient weight? The protagonist is indeed miserable. He failed to get into the ideal school and became a garbage collector, but this is not a conflict, it is a foreshadowing! The so-called contradiction and conflict means that there is a contradiction first, and then a conflict occurs, forming a point of interest. This is what makes the article exciting! In these four chapters, the protagonist is neither tortured, tortured, nor slapped in the face. Because of the introduction of the novel, readers are almost unaware of the content of the first few chapters without reading it. So what is the highlight? Is there any suspense in this book? If at the end of the first chapter, the beautiful girl conflicts with the protagonist, if the protagonist applies for a job, there will be constant twists and turns, if... There are many beggars, why do we only remember the little match girl? In "Fights Break the Sphere", there is no Xiao Mei who is arrogant at first and respectful at the end, there is a family test, and the protagonist makes a fool of herself. So, let me ask, is the protagonist's sentence "Don't bully young people who are poor" still so powerful... Again, the article is like looking at mountains and not finding peace. Bingbing is a newcomer, not a master, and does not have a stable fan base, so the effect of overly long foreshadowing is limited. Please try to make the story rich in conflict and arouse the emotions of joy or anger in the readers. For example, the beautiful woman mobilizes her connections to find the protagonist. I remember this section in "Katu", but the premise is that the author allows the protagonist to show off his talents and create a sensation, and then everyone does not know who it is, thus making the readers expect the protagonist to be discovered... In addition, this book is about mechas. I don't know what Bingbing's setting is, but pure mechas have a single element, while Wang Bingbing has a variety of elements. From fighting methods to skills and equipment, from power competition to promotion settings, there are always expectations that readers don't know. Seeing the bottom line at a glance is very fatal. Please Bingbing put some thought and a little insight into everything from the power structure to the corresponding settings. If what I said is wrong, Wang Bingbing doesn't mind...