There Is a Broken Door

Can you consider your identity and background when using abilities? Be smart and use things you don't have control of, which can lead to death. The ancients all knew that ordinary people are not guilty and only have their own faults.

After reading dozens of chapters, I personally feel that the plot is so confusing. The further back I go, the more I don't know what the hell I'm writing. I can't be so casual for your convenience.

When I first watched it, I thought it was quite novel! The results immediately fell into the cliché! The standard fairy tale routine, at most add a little fantasy!

Hahaha, in chapters 7 and 8, the protagonist's actions really made me feel ridiculous

The protagonist is a bit mentally retarded. I hope it can be written more maturely. And such a big Goldfinger protagonist seems to be a fool and doesn't think there is a problem. Like playing a game. Don't hold on. Even if it is a relaxed writing style, it still needs some brains. Don't tell anyone about it.

He said he was persuaded to quit after seeing the protagonist's name.

When I read Chapter 35, I felt like I didn't need to read any more. The main plot was a bit confusing.

The author has a good attitude and is willing to listen to readers' opinions. I don't want to see a harem in this book. Many books nowadays were destroyed by the harem

I felt like this book was just for fools, so I gave it up.

The front part is pretty good... The girl feels a little like she's going to collapse as soon as she comes out. I'd like to ask, is there an outline?

The book is good, but there are still many problems that I hope can be corrected.

I'm going! It's actually on the shelves! I don't even have to comment on the launch🙈

When I saw the electric rabbit in Chapter 2, I couldn't stand it. The hand holding the electric baton reached into the rabbit's mouth, and the other hand was still pressing the rabbit's head. Then only the rabbit was shocked. Pig's feet are not afraid of electricity, right? A little common sense, okay?

Brain. . . You don't need to be too smart to be like a demon, at least it's a normal person's standard. The description of female characters is too much. It's really embarrassing to add a few words of praise to every action. It's like an old bachelor who has been imprisoned for 20 years.

I went back to my hometown in the countryside and opened all the cabinets, looked into all the cellars, under the beds, and dry wells, tried all the doors, and ran all over the surrounding mountains, lakes, and ponds, but I still am not invincible. Am I really not the master?

I didn't write about pig's feet at the beginning. When I went back to my hometown in the countryside, I would always think about what was there in his hometown. Now I find that they are basically the same: a cellar, a well, a pond or a mountain.

Wow, there are 4 women in the back, southeast, northwest. This is a surname. How long is the novel? It's still in use today.

Is the author still working on it? It's good to have dreams, but it's even better if you can put them into action But don't lower your head and act recklessly. I recommend you watch "Movie World Shuttle Gate" Really, hard work does not mean reward Aim in the right direction to see hope Also, within ten chapters of the opening chapter, a group of girls are surrounding you. Don't you think you will be beaten?