The Art of Feng Shui

In fact, the author's writing skills are good and the old clichés are not so tacky. Regarding the setting of the protagonist, ahem, it's a bit too much. Don't rural areas have no IQ? Even if you haven't experienced so many plots, you should have some capital, right? After all, he is in his 20s.

When will the comic be released? Lao Tie, you said it half a year ago...

I read 250 chapters, and kept telling myself that the book was written two years ago, and some differences due to trends are acceptable. The main plot is good, and even those with no brains can still read it. But now I really can't read it anymore, so I gave it up. Let me summarize some of the reasons why I can't read it. Since the background is set in the background of modern social science and technology, it must abide by the basic laws of physics and the basic laws of the development of things, so that it is logical and does not make people feel awkward and confused when reading. For example, money and prices are obviously decoupled. It is not a matter of face value. The problem is that the prices described in the book are very low and the social wage level is not high, but it gives people a feeling of high inflation, just like 100 yuan in the book can only buy an egg, but the salary is only maintained at around 3,000 yuan. . . The value of money is obviously stable, but how do you increase inflation so much? . . . In my opinion, the superpower system is the biggest failure. The whole article is written around superpowers. The protagonist can acquire superpowers through learning, which means that superpowers are not unique. They have origins and inheritance and are systematic. Then superpowers in such a huge world cannot be only in the hands of a few people. Although I only saw the part in Chapter 250 where the protagonist was abandoned in the well, I was confused from the beginning. Why does the country not have any control over superpowers? I have never believed that there is any power that can be mastered by individuals through learning but not by the country, except for talents, and talents cannot be gifted by only a few people. There must not be too few people with talents, otherwise the development and inheritance of superpowers will be impossible. The resources possessed by individuals cannot be compared to the resources mastered by the collective, not to mention that the protagonist is just a person with scarce resources who needs nothing. Boy, the protagonist in this period is not even a minor figure, let alone have any resources to practice. Being able to cultivate Qi can only mean that the protagonist has good talent, but the talent is good in the protagonist's initial stage, which is useless and cannot be used as food. So the question arises, why are the two major forces competing for the treasure map without a single superpower? In the face of the battle for a key item such as the Tianyi treasure map, even the princess came out. This There is no one with superpowers in front of a person in a high position. Everyone is not a fool. They all have inheritance. It is obviously unreasonable to randomly send cats and dogs to handle such key and important items. Among the three forces currently on the scene are the country, the black gloves, and the descendants of princes. In this important person and occasion, not even a superpower appears. It can be summed up. Because everyone doesn't pay much attention to the information on this matter, and they don't send out personnel with supernatural powers when they are not sure. But what I can't bear the most is that the author describes these three major forces as fools. Only the protagonist knows about the existence of supernatural powers. The three major forces are not aware of the fact that there are supernatural powers in this world. This simply puts people's IQ on the ground and rubs them over and over again. . . Is the resource about superpowers that the protagonist has a monopoly? He is the only one in the world who has it, unique? This is obviously not the case. The protagonist's superpower knowledge is acquired through inheritance, and superpowers are also produced through acquired practice. Since there is inheritance and can be produced through practice, it means that superpowers are not secrets in the eyes of the top leaders of various forces. They are not even important secrets. They are things that can be produced through continuous copying and practice. It is universal, so all the forces and countries must have this power in their hands. It doesn't matter if you say that ordinary people don't understand supernatural powers. During the battle for the treasures in the cave, no one from the two major forces knew that there was such a thing as supernatural powers. In addition to the previous plot, several senior and powerful old men didn't know anything about it. I couldn't help it. This was treating people like monkeys. In summary, the three major forces currently on the scene are all fools. The country controls the national resources and does not know that they have special powers. The two major tomb robbing forces are mentioned in the article as having inheritance, so they do not know that they have special powers. Well, I shouldn't persuade myself to read Chapter 250. It's really 250ヽ(ー_ー)ノ

Why do these novels always feature mentally retarded women? Is it necessary? Too childish

Yesterday I went to buy cigarettes. I bought a pack of 20 cigarettes. I gave the boss 50 and gave me 40. I pretended not to know, put it in my pocket and left. Before I had gone far, the boss called me: You didn't get your cigarettes! I shed tears of emotion and took out ten yuan and gave it to the boss: You gave me ten yuan more. The boss also moved to tears: Young man, bring me the cigarettes, and I'll give you a pack in exchange. Smoking the new cigarette that the boss gave me, the pure taste moved me again: Boss, bring me the 50-yuan card just now and I will change it for you! The boss took the 50 and was moved again: Young man, give me the money you asked for just now, and I will change it for you. After receiving the money from the boss, I was moved again and took out a mobile phone from my pocket: Boss, please return the mobile phone to you. With tears in his eyes, the boss tremblingly took out a wallet: "Young man, return your wallet to you." At this time, I couldn't hold it any longer, so I knelt on the ground and hugged the boss's thigh, crying: Brother, go to Room 304 of the hotel next door and take your daughter who is in elementary school home! The boss was shocked after hearing this, sighed, turned around and shouted to the shop: Hongxing, stop hiding, come out and go back with your husband! I looked at the woman walking out of the store in surprise, shook my head slightly and said, "Brother, you can take this medicine and use it." Taking the penicillin I handed over, the boss lowered his head in shame after reading the instructions and said, "Forget it, I don't need this medicine anymore. I am an HIV carrier. I'm sorry, brother!" My heart instantly went to freezing point. , But the boss's sincerity made it feel warmer than ever before. I said: "Brother, I almost did something that I will regret for the rest of my life! To be honest, that ointment is not penicillin, but dichlorvos!" The boss pondered for a moment, the tears in the corners of his eyes had not yet dried, he closed his eyes and looked up to the sky and sighed: "Young man, in fact, I am not sick at all, your honesty It's really touching, I'm so damn happy!" I rubbed the tip of my sore nose and said, "Boss, don't do this, I deserve to die! In fact, your daughter is not next door, I lied to you!" The boss waved his hand and said, "Boy, it's okay, it's okay, and look carefully, this is not your wife at all, and your wife's name is not Hongxing! "I suddenly realized, and a warm feeling went through my heart: "Haha, brother, actually there is nothing in my wallet. I just picked it up on the roadside." I took out the wallet and waved it in front of him. The boss said: "Boy, that chicken is just a model. If you don't believe me, take a look." He took out the chicken, and the display was just a piece of colored paper. We looked at each other and sobbed softly because we were moved by each other. I said with a thick nasal voice: "Brother, actually, the fifty yuan I gave you later is also fake!" The boss shook his head slightly, and a crystal teardrop fell on the ground: "Young man, the change you asked for is actually... Oh, bring it over, and I will change it for you." My tears were like bursting a dam, On the blurry retina, he bent slightly and flipped through the cash box carefully. I finally couldn't help it anymore and said: "Brother, actually, I don't know how to smoke at all! I came here just to use the fake money!" The old man patted me on the shoulder and whispered: "Young man, to be honest, this is actually not my shop...

The IQ of this book is off the charts, the plot is awkward, and there is such a large audience. I'm afraid the book shortage is too serious and people are hungry for food!

Please tell me why, after writing more than six million words, it has not yet become a masterpiece. Everyone knows the reason! Hehe!

The biggest failure of the protagonist in the novel is that she is a vain girl who marries an old man. It turned out that it was really disgusting to write Sha Baitian later. Wouldn't it be better to write Sha Baitian 😁 who married an old man as an unscrupulous strong woman than to write Sha Baitian?

A book recommended by this so-called great god? I don't believe that old book friends can read the first 50 chapters, but I was persuaded to quit after the 20th chapter.

A novel of 10 million words... Really awesome