Three Kingdoms Unparalleled: Flying Clouds

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I just saw the Hongji eunuch from Three Kingdoms. It was really disappointing. Although there is one less competitor, there is also one less book friend to work together to create. There is a long road ahead, but go ahead and cherish it.

After reading the introduction, I was a little afraid to read it.

A very good book about history, worth reading

Give you a like \(≧▽≦)/, because I know there are not many authors who can persist.

Let me start by complaining. You have so many typos. Even the names of people and places are full of typos. Please correct them. First, the author wonders if he has read too many martial arts novels. The title "Gongzi" was not something that ordinary people could use before the Song Dynasty. The original meaning was the son of the Duke, similar to "Crown Prince". You can just use the title of Young Master or Young Master. Will the title of Young Master give the protagonist goosebumps? ? Second, if the author doesn't know much about history, just admit it and don't make your protagonist so strong. There are a lot of mistakes in the book. If he is not a graduate student in a related department, why should the protagonist join the archaeological team and be valued and reused by the person in charge? Don't just rely on the face of his parents who have been dead for many years. At the end of the first chapter and the third chapter, it is said that the protagonist has many interests. There are a lot of mistakes in the fourth chapter. Third: Men in ancient times were twenty and crowned, but later changed to sixteen and weak crowned. I wonder how old the protagonist of this book is? Huang Zhong actually called him "Brother"?? Fourth, it is generally believed that Huang Zhong was born between 145 and 149 AD. Considering that the average life span in the Han Dynasty was less than 60 years old, during the Yellow Turban Rebellion, he at least said he was over 36 years old. Are you sure you can use the word youth to describe him? Fifth, this is a small issue and not very important. The important point is to remember that Huang Zhong is still a rich man. He is poor in culture and military. He only spent a lot of money on his child's illness in his middle age. One school of thought believes that Huang Zhong once served under He Jin ( He was not a big official and was sent back to Nanyang to recruit troops.) Another group believes that when the Yellow Turban Rebellion broke out, Huang Zhong was in Wancheng and he was the one who beheaded Zhang Mancheng (whether he had an official position or took the initiative to serve as the leader of the local volunteers is not sure). Sixth: I traveled through the night and went out the next morning. It's better to be true. Can you write one more chapter to explain the protagonist's age and family background and whether he will die? Do you think it's enough to just click through the mouth of Hua Tuo in Chapter 3 and the mouth of the servant in Chapter 4? I'm drunk for being such a careless protagonist. Why don't you mention anyone who was injured? You don't even know your family background. You don't even know the situation outside. You just want to win over powerful generals and civil servants and pay back your merits? It's more likely to die early, right? Let's just say this. I'll take a look in two days. If the author is too lazy to answer me, or too lazy to revise, then I won't be too lazy to read this book.