Ye Zhiqiu

The writing of "L. A." Is very unsatisfactory. The suspense plot is not smooth, and the power and ability of each character in the overall story are not perfectly displayed. Although the background of the story is a mixture of dragons and snakes, it lacks a hint of providence and coincidence. Ye Zhiqiu's tone at the wedding banquet should have been relatively angry. It was a boring feeling of being led by the nose but having no clue, but I didn't exaggerate it. He can be angry, he can kill, he can laugh at the conspirators' final fate, and he can also play with the martial arts seniors and applaud them. But I forgot that there were also factors that prompted his change of temperament in that specific environment. The plot of the last eight chapters therefore seems particularly urgent. The plots of "The Lottery of Life and Death", "The Story of Los Angeles", "The Tribulation of Flowers and Leaves", "The Record of Demons", and "The Tears of the Red Dust" should have taken place during the Zhengde and Jiajing years of the Ming Dynasty, and then can be interspersed with the storyline of the Salt Gang's fight against the Japanese. This time, not only will the years in "The Story of Los Angeles" be modified, but some historical figures will also be replaced for authenticity. The chapter "Linglong Pavilion" is a birthday gift for the teacher, so it is placed in the last chapter. This time, each article will be more than 6,000 words, making it more enjoyable for friends to read. I also try my best to update the article non-stop, and I also hope that my long-cherished wish can be realized as soon as possible. After all, I have been dreaming about it for too long, and some exciting plots have been stored in my mind for too long. Well... No one knows why Ye Zhiqiu is obsessed with Fengyue Place, so from now on, watch "The Sign of Life and Death", maybe you will also understand why he is drunk. I hope this is a martial arts work that can rival the masters. In the process of striving for excellence, I will more carefully consider the historical plot and intersperse the characters more closely. Let's see how a young man from a wealthy family who was originally suave and elegant rose to fame in the world, and how he carried all kinds of sorrows and used his true temperament to interpret the greatness of a chivalrous person and the righteousness of the nation. All this is in "Ye Zhiqiu"...