Queen of Doomsday Rebirth

Not much to say, just a few bugs. First, Lu Chi was the first experimental subject for zombie virus medicine. The blood in a person's body is limited. Lu Chi ran away later and proved that the blood was not drained. So where did the continuous supply of antidote medicines in City B come from? One generation, two generations, three generations? Second, the people around the heroine have been drinking her space water for a long time, and the crystal nuclei absorbed have been soaked in space water to remove dark matter, so they are healthy and can upgrade their abilities quickly. Then why is it that the serum extracted from the blood drawn from her team members can directly detoxify and is permanently effective, and it is also OK to absorb the toxic crystal nuclei. Third, people who have drank space water have become monk meat. Drinking their blood can detoxify them. Why do we need to refine the serum? The female lead team member will be exposed. Isn't it the man named Qian who broke up with them at the beginning? She is found drinking his blood. Can it be detoxified? So to sum up the above two points, if the heroine soaks the crystal core in space water, doesn't it mean that she takes off her pants and farts? Fourth, it is also a serum extracted from human blood. Lu Laoer became a monster when he was beaten. The people in the base where he took refuge were beaten to detoxify and quickly upgrade his powers? Fifth, the feud between the heroine and Lu Laoer is simply inexplicable. No matter how Li Yuyao harmed the heroine in his previous life, in this life, people will kill you without saying a word to you. Taking a step back, I want to avenge my past life and get rid of my addiction, so I want to kill her, that's fine. The heroine's superpower is so powerful that she can destroy the opponent in minutes. Why does she have to talk to Lu LaoEr and attack Lu LaoEr face to face? Anyone with a brain will think that the heroine wants to kill Lu LaoEr, so this is called having superpowers and willfulness? Kill whoever you want?

I read more than 80 chapters for free and couldn't stand it. It was okay at first, but later on I saw more and more bugs. I always hope that the author can fix the bugs, but the more I read, the more shocking it becomes. This is because the author is only responsible for digging holes and never considers the readers' feelings. The biggest bug is that the SB heroine doesn't know anything except that she is reborn. A SB who knows nothing can save the whole world. The second bug is that the apocalypse comes in the early morning. You said that there are parents taking their children to eat KFC in the early morning. I agree. The shopping mall has become the most crowded place. There are zombies everywhere. Who the hell takes their children shopping for clothes at two or three in the middle of the night? All the female characters in it are very jealous, and the jealousy is completely unreasonable. They can deeply hate the heroine just because they take one look in the crowd. All the men can fall in love with the heroine just by taking one look at it. I really don't know what to say...

I felt that the heroine was too cruel when I met Qian Bin and his wife for the second time. At first, when she gave them two biscuits, she thought that the heroine was quite nice. Later, Qian Bin and his wife had a bad attitude, and the heroine just cut off his hand. I am really speechless here! Either you kill the person directly to avoid leaving hidden dangers later, or you don't give them cookies and drive them away. You just don't understand why you have to cut off his hand, bug.

I feel like the heroine is very neurotic. Is she mute? Can't speak? Why do you take action every time you disagree? He was also a bit too cruel to Second Young Master Lu. Although Lu Er is not a good person, you don't have to take such harsh action directly, right? Although it was to kill Li Yuyao later, can you say a word? Later, it completely turned into a fight between the two teams. Isn't it too much? You don't have a mouth? I don't know what to say: I just want to kill Li Yuyao! It's irritating to watch. I feel like it's very unreasonable here. The heroine always gets into trouble every time she disagrees with her. It's annoying.

The heroine is stupid, greedy, extremely selfish, and not decisive in killing. The other characters are also paper-like and not three-dimensional.

What can I say, the more I watch this heroine, the less I like her. A heroine, who worked hard to save supplies before the end of the world, was taken away by the rescued people. Although there was a reason, she was exchanged for a room, and she still felt warm in her heart. He is always rescuing people and always encountering white-eyed wolves, which is really unpleasant to watch.

All I can say is that if this woman was not the heroine, she would have died long ago

It feels like there are too many bugs. Unable to complain

Where is the Queen? Where is the queen in the title?

Why does it feel like when the end comes, all normal people will die?

I came from a male channel, am I still normal...

I didn't see the heroine sofa decisively.

I thought it was the Honkai Impact Queen? ? ?

Just a quick calculation, it's almost April, will the end really come? 😃😃

I don't like the male protagonist Song Yuan, he has no passion

I've always wanted to ask what the heroine's superpower is?

Let me say something. After reading the comments, many people said that the end of the world should be nothing to do with oneself. Some said that the heroine can help more people. The end of the world is the destruction of the world, and people's morality will gradually change. Some people will be willing to help. They think that when the end of the world comes, we should help each other, and some people will release themselves. There is a lot of pressure in society, and they do not want to help. People can do it. How many people will help you when you are tired? What about the end of the world when society is like this? This has nothing to do with the three views. It is caused by the current situation of society. Everyone has their own ideas. People who are not living as they want are selfish. There are not many people who are happy who are not selfish. Human nature is evil, and the things they do at any time are different.

After reading all the time, I may feel that the heroine is not as strong as I imagined, but it is acceptable. There are many comments saying that it is not good. I haven't found any special bugs. Maybe I am reading more casually. I just have fun reading the novel. Come on, don't be discouraged.

I always didn't want my teammates to know about the space. I was speechless and kept talking. What are you afraid of? Are you afraid readers will scold you?

It's cowardice, not the Virgin! Abandoned

I would like to ask if there must be only one protagonist at the end of the world. Can't have an army of hundreds of people? ? ! I don't know if this setting is reasonable.

The writing is good, but unfortunately there is a lot of logic and the plot is not pleasing to the eye.

There's nothing interesting to see. I'm looking for it. After looking around, I always feel like I've seen it before? Maybe it's the heroine's name? High repetition rate? But the Bai Lianhua and "boyfriend" at the beginning also seemed familiar to me, but I still couldn't remember them... I couldn't stand it after reading one chapter! The hostess's design was so bad. She was busy with her studies and didn't respond to the earth type person who protected her. I was very touched when I ran away with her, but I didn't deny it when he claimed to be my boyfriend. You said she was Bai Lian? Isn't she just the female cousin? She blindly enjoys giving, and before the end of the world, she is being pursued. If she works hard in the future, she will definitely not be in the same world as her "boyfriend". After the end of the world, I enjoyed being protected, but I never really responded seriously and acknowledged it. When someone slowly changes their mind and feels about to lose it, then they feel scared and then reflect on it. Otherwise, I am afraid that I will enjoy all this beauty with peace of mind until I die. Is it a shame to be guilty? It makes me feel sick. Why are Bai Lian and her "boyfriend" so close? What did I do wrong? Am I not good enough? It was obvious that you were just enjoying yourself and giving without ever responding, but in the end it felt like you had been greatly wronged🥺. Why did he change? How can it change? How can it change? It's easy to change your mind in peacetime, let alone the end of the world. What are you wronged about? Deserve it! Even if Bai Lian and her "boyfriend" really did something sorry for her, it wouldn't be considered a love backstab, after all, she never admitted it.

The Zhang Fucai in the opening chapter is a reborn person. Where was it copied? Studio product? The heroine died later. The second-rate heroine is a model talker before and after her rebirth. Personally, I feel like the author just wants to keep the word count down.

The author gives you some advice. I think the overall framework of this book is very good. There is nothing wrong with your thinking. There are many things that don't need to be explained over and over in detail. It's annoying to watch. A heroine lives in a peaceful modern society. You can write about her boldness and courage and let the heroine grow up step by step. But you can't know everything right away. The strength, speed and intelligence are superior to those of the heavenly boss and her dick. It looks annoying. In a. First story only. Writing about a female protagonist and a male protagonist somehow makes me like it. The male protagonist is attracted to the female protagonist when he sees her bravery. A bit far-fetched. The heroine is right as if she has never seen a man before. Obviously 20 chapters can be written. There is too much repetitive emphasis that makes people unhappy. Why. Love this kind of story. Unfortunately, the first story put me off completely. Tried watching it twice. Didn't even read it. My bad