A Small Shop in the Apocalypse

This heroine is so disgusting. If you want to marry, just marry Su Yibai. If you want to, just be Qin Nuannuan? Am I really going to be disgusted to death?

This kind of male protagonist is really disgusting, okay? !

Why do children need to be called Nuan Mama? It's really weird, I feel like I'm calling a nanny

Every time the heroine makes up her mind to leave the hero, every time the hero appears, she is always slapped in the face.

I see a lot of people saying it doesn't look good, but I think it's okay. I think reading novels is for killing time and for entertainment. This book has few top-notch items, and it can level up quickly when fighting monsters (I can't stand fighting top-notch items, so writing N chapters about fighting bosses feels like it's all nonsense, maybe because I'm not interested in it). I am not serious about character background and character description. After all, these are all fictions, why do we have to compare them with real things?

It feels like the heroine is like a lunatic. She fell out of a car and entered a space, but she is still in the mood to build a beachside villa and eat a Manchu banquet? Really speechless

The plot of the article is okay, but the author's writing is too poor. Many times the description is not good enough and it feels like he is talking to himself. Especially at the beginning when the heroine kills zombies, there is no mention of how the heroine kills them. Just three onomatopoeias: bang, bang, bang, and then the zombies are killed by the heroine. There are also some places where the author's description is so bad that it is very fascinating.

The preface does not match the postscript, the whole article is full of typos, the plot is abrupt, and the characters are too idealistic. Summary: A Mary Sue story written in a locked notebook by a junior high school girl.

It's fair to say that The Little Shop has a very good plot in a post-apocalyptic novel (I haven't ordered all of them, but it still has a place on my bookshelf). Don't go too far when commenting. Look at the advantages and not just the shortcomings.

Please just take up space with so many cars on the road! Still have to walk to find a car? ? ? ? ? ? So many flaws. You can sleep in the space, and your car can be stored in it too! There are still so many days left, why don't pregnant women show their belly?

Is this idiot like Lao Dao definitely one of the five most powerful legendary special forces along with Su Yibai? No matter how much the author explained to him and stressed that he had little contact with women, the special forces soldiers would not encounter anyone or anything during their missions, and they were not alert at all. They casually believed in Qiqi, and just because she was weak, she ended up arguing with her companions along the way. Well, even if the heroine and he are not companions, the previous experience has proved that the heroine is not a person who talks freely, so he should pay more attention to it. As a result, his inattention affects the heroine's exploration, so he must be sick. How did the author position this character whose IQ is not online as a legendary special forces soldier?

The title and introduction of the book do not match the content

It's Qin Nuan and it's Su Nuan, there are a lot of typos

The author lacks common sense. Can a chicken have a hundred and fifty? Forty or fifty at most.

Where is the store? If this is an 800-word essay, without a teacher, I will give you a direct score of 0

As for your children, they will show up if they want to, and they won't show up if they don't.

This book. . . Is it based on the romance novels that were popular in the 1990s and 2000s? I persisted and read one chapter.

Thanks to the advertising of DaDa, this is my first time writing an article for a new book "The Princess of the End of the World". I don't know how well I have written it. I have had many interruptions. 😁 I hope readers who have seen it can give me valuable opinions. Thank you very much!

I've seen it before, and I think it's okay, but the occasional plot makes me feel unclear! It made me so depressed that I gave up the book 😄😄

The article is not on point~ I've read dozens of chapters, but the shop still hasn't appeared. Even if I am not a Chinese teacher, I will grade this article - it will fail directly

2 Votes to like one and save it! I hope the author's next book will be better!

2 Votes to like the work! I hope the author will work hard and the next one will be more exciting!

The apocalypse is rampant, and there is a small shop. I don't know its owner, I don't know where it came from, I don't know where it's going. It takes care of food, clothing, housing and transportation. It has all kinds of delicacies from mountains and seas. This is the story of a man with a bun and a cool and domineering space system who dominates the world in the last days.

The only post-apocalyptic novel I've ever read. It's great.

The ending is so bad, I don't even know what it's about.

Vote 2 and collect likes! Author, please work hard to write the next one. The apocalypse is rampant, and there is a small shop. I don't know its owner, I don't know where it came from, I don't know where it's going. It takes care of food, clothing, housing and transportation. It has all kinds of delicacies from mountains and seas. This is the story of a man with a bun and a cool and domineering space system who dominates the world in the last days.

I really can't stand that Su Wang appearing and disappearing all of a sudden. It's a big bug.

I think it looks pretty good, I can't stop!

Sanyu Tonghui This book is worth pursuing. Amway Amway