Hell Apartment: Desperate Love for Son

The author is even worse than me. He only got two recommendation votes after writing so many words.

I don't know if you are still writing a book, but I still want to give you a suggestion. I took a look at the beginnings of your two books. They contain long paragraphs of text, which can easily cause readers fatigue. Originally, readers randomly clicked on a book to see how the first few chapters were written. If the writing was good, they would continue reading. If the writing was not good, they would stop reading. But your dense words probably made many readers impatient to read any further (like me). So it is recommended that you should be good at dividing your books into paragraphs in the future. Each paragraph should be divided just right, and the number of words in each paragraph should not be too many. For example, a character's dialogue can be its own paragraph. This way readers will not be too tired to read your article.

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