Rebirth and Cultivating Immortality in the City

Forget about Immortal Emperor Xuanyuan, this Immortal Emperor Xia Yu was transformed by Dayu, right? Forget it, but this Immortal Emperor Shang Zhou and Immortal Emperor Zhou You, are you playing with me? Will there be Immortal Emperor Yingzheng, Immortal Emperor of Shu Han, Immortal Emperor Tang Wu, and Immortal Emperor Wu Ze later? And it will also be explained that Immortal Emperor Wu Ze is the first female Immortal Emperor in the world of cultivation?

I found that this book was written exactly the same as Rebirth of Urban Cultivation. Save the general, the general is injured, he participated in the Anti-Japanese War, and his lungs were injured. Then he writes medicinal materials, has a small holiday with the general's granddaughter, and meets the local emperor in the entertainment club. The key name is also a certain Tianhao. A certain Tianhao has retired special forces under his command, and is easily defeated by the protagonist. Then the people around the general come to wipe the protagonist's butt. It's exactly the same fucking pattern. Although I read this book, I was really speechless sometimes. Is this a common pattern for all rebirth and immortality books?

Galaxy Zerg? Do you want me to help you find the Starship Troopers?

I just couldn't bear it after reading Chapter 28. I just gave gifts and even performed magic tricks? An old monster who has been in the world of cultivation for 500 years gives gifts to a little girl and performs magic? Ordinary middle-aged people living in the city can't do this, right?

This book is really not well written. The protagonist has the same mentality as an eighteen-year-old adolescent boy. It is completely impossible to tell that he is a person who is more than 500 years old at heart. Or maybe the author wants to write an emotional plot and just inserts the protagonist into it. The result is neither fish nor fowl.

There is still a slight gap between it and Rebirth: Urban Cultivation

Toxic 😰

Sincerely, the author is completely self-indulgent, and the writing becomes worse as it goes on. For example, in the early stage, it was described that the martial arts myth corresponds to the Yuanying, and later it became the martial arts myth corresponding to the Yuanshen. Just like that person who took a blood pill and went from the pinnacle of martial arts to a martial arts myth. Then he went to capture the male protagonist's two women in the Yuanshen realm. Also, Immortal Emperor Mingwu went to Earth to get a nuclear bomb, but failed to get it for several years, but finally the male protagonist got it. I was convinced too. And judging from the description, the male protagonist has not been away from the earth for more than two years. The result described later is many years. . Besides, the demon can change in many ways that day, and the male protagonist is not at a high level, so he only has two hands or something like that. This is not a three-headed and six-armed technique, but a technique that allows you to change your body shape at will. Moreover, when the male protagonist has changed into other species, he has changed many times. Damn it, Immortal Emperor Mingwu has been trying to get a nuclear bomb for several years, but he hasn't been able to get it. Can you be dissatisfied? It's so troublesome. Haven't gotten it yet. To be honest, with an existence like the Mingwu Immortal Emperor, and with the strongest people on earth at that time being in the Nascent Soul realm, the male protagonist and the woman had to practice for many years before reaching the Nascent Spirit. In such a situation, they could easily get the nuclear bomb by sending someone who has transcended the Tribulation Realm to control the head of the country and search for souls. Then use the computer to record the manufacturing method of nuclear bombs, and then you can make them yourself. Even if they are inferior, you can capture those ordinary scientists and send them to the underworld of Emperor Mingwu to make unlimited nuclear bombs. And compared to ordinary workers, it is easier and faster for the immortal family to make it. And Empress Qinglian's talk about being too supreme and forgetful of love is really nonsense. According to the author's description, if Liu Tianbao committed suicide in the risk of death, the family relationship between Empress Qinglian would be broken, and the male protagonist raped her. The puppet body created by Tiandao added the memory of that time, which caused Empress Qinglian to fall in love. This is even more ridiculous. Is there any woman who doesn't hold a grudge after being raped but actually develops feelings for her? Empress Qinglian practiced the Tao of Forgetfulness, which cuts off and forgets all kinds of affection. Well, if she forgets a certain kind of affection for someone, it will affect whether that person lives or dies? Regarding one person's affection for another person, if that person is alive but he no longer has affection, so what if that person is still alive? If that person dies, but there is always affection in his heart, what if that person dies? And after all, a puppet is still a puppet. Even if it is a puppet of Tiandao, according to the description, it is a puppet body made by Tiandao, and then the memory of the person with the puppet appearance is transplanted. It has nothing to do with me at all. It's not a clone created by splitting my soul, nor is it an incarnation of me. Secondly, the puppet has no soul at all. It just has a certain memory, that's all. This kind of existence. Hey, it's over 800 words. It's not a problem for the author to exaggerate the description. It's a novel, but even for the author, the description is exaggerated. But it has to be described according to the description set by the author himself. For example, it is described that Ye Wuji's physical body, magic power, and soul have all reached Chunyang, and then the male protagonist's soul is not even close, but the result is that the male protagonist, who has not reached full perfection, is more perfect than Ye Wuji. The whole novel is completely the author's own real-time sexual intercourse, and everything is messed up. It doesn't feel like writing a novel at all.

The Immortal Emperor suppresses the world of cultivation, which means that the Immortal Emperor can also mix in the world of cultivation.

As a person who once almost reached the peak in the world of cultivating immortals, I feel so scummy after being reborn. Ordinarily, the knowledge resources possessed by such a powerful man are terrifying. But the so-called emperor-level skills after the male protagonist's rebirth are completely made up. The fusion of this skill and martial arts is simply a premise. It would be better to have the male protagonist obtain the emperor-level or more powerful skills at or above the emperor-level in some ancient secret realm before his death. It is said that the male protagonist has mastered millions of low-level skills and martial arts, but the result is the basic palm skills practiced by a monk. Among the millions of martial arts and combat skills, are there no defensive and physical combat skills? Let's talk about cultivation. Why does the Ghost Yuan Dan state require a breakthrough in the state of mind, not spiritual energy? But as a result, the male protagonist's breakthrough was not achieved by absorbing a large amount of spiritual energy. What was promised was that the breakthrough was based on the state of mind? He also said that it took 20 years for such a genius, and the male protagonist also spent 10 years because of various life and death trials. . Let's talk about onmyoji. For the soul. But the male protagonist is a person who has been reborn in the world of immortality, but he doesn't have any soul-related skills? This is so much nonsense. And what kind of ghost sacrifices are there? If a person who is stronger than ordinary people sacrifices himself, he can fully recover the remaining soul of a strong man who has a light soul state and is stronger than the male protagonist who has cultivated to the third level and the Yuan Dan level. . Who will be afraid of harm to the soul in the future? Secondly, it describes how thin the spiritual energy is. The male protagonist relies on jade for cultivation and recovery. Although the male protagonist is rich, there is no need to cause trouble for himself for no reason, right? Ordinary people who are trying to kill gangsters are just using mana to kill here and there. It is really better to bring a bunch of bullets and put them in the reserve space of the ring. If you don't need to use mana to kill someone, you can just release a handful of bullets at any time and flick the opponent in the palm of your hand, and the opponent will die. Why waste mana unnecessarily and then rely on jade to recover. It's a little more troublesome than using bullets. To put it simply, bullets are much easier to get than jade. I originally thought that the earth's spiritual energy was low and it was difficult to break through in cultivation, so I kept wasting it. Do you think you are not practicing slowly enough? And that Dragon Teeth organization is really scumbag. As for the male protagonist, who has no magic power and no mental state, he can beat Dragon Ya. Then the female Muay Thai fighter who was fighting for the dragon's head before can beat Dragon Ya. When I first described it, I was very cunning, but after the actual fight, I really didn't want to be too scummy, and I was praised to the heavens for being like this. There is also the old man who robbed the tomb. In other countries in Japan, there is a cunning figure like Musashibo. He robs both domestic and foreign things. Does he really have no secret books other than cultural relics? Furthermore, for such a famous tomb robber who stole cultural relics from tombs at home and abroad and turned them over to the country, would other countries allow him to operate domestically and steal cultural relics from his own tombs and return them to his own country?

The King of Soldiers, the Ruffian, and the Mighty Reborn in the City are the three major sources of poison in urban novels today. I suggest writers not to follow these three paths anymore, otherwise they are doomed to be on the street!

You are simply a huge black hole that has not been seen for hundreds of years.

After five hundred years, your hatred is really deep. You are practicing immortality and fakeness. This is not an obsession.

Oh my god, a cultivator doesn't refine his own magic weapon, but uses someone else's? What about the yin and yang seal? It's really okay.

Eight-foot mirror, eight-foot magatama, and Budu Soul Sword. If you want to dig for treasures, can you dig them at home? Even if the Nine Dragon Cauldron is dug up, the Xuanyuan Sword will be tens of thousands of times more powerful than these three Japanese artifacts.

The most puzzling thing is that a cultivator knows the formation, but doesn't understand Yin Yang and the Five Elements? Unexpectedly, I can't play Onmyojitsu

It's really useless, but I'd better give it up. Author, you'd better practice more. Although it can't be considered a novice, the setting of your book is too ridiculous, and novels cannot be written randomly. When the foreign protagonist takes the stage, it seems like there is no other capable person in China except him. After returning to China, I beat the domestic people. One look, I guess, there are masters one after another. What the hell are you doing already? You should have common sense in novels, right?

I'm here to complain again. You said, if you don't build the Nine Paths Spiritual Platform, you can't open the Nine Paths Shrine (Nine Heavens). But your Immortal Emperor Xuanyuan just opened the Four Divine Palaces, that is to say, he just built the Four Spiritual Platforms! So here comes the question. You said before that if you don't achieve the Nine Spirits Nascent Soul, you won't be able to become an Immortal Emperor in the future. If you don't open the Nine Gods Palace, the chance of falling from the Heavenly Tribulation will be greater. So, how did Immortal Emperor Xuanyuan use the Four Spirits Nascent Soul to condense his soul and successfully overcome the tribulation with the Four Gods Palace? Even if we ignore the matter of the Divine Palace, according to what you said before, it is impossible to become an Immortal Emperor without reaching the Nine Spirits, and from the fact that you said that ordinary cultivators must have six spirits or five spirits to condense the soul at the last time, what kind of RMB player must Xuanyuan Immortal Emperor be, a person who can become an Immortal Emperor with four spirits! Isn't this contradictory?

This book is NB, the Immortal Lord can damage nuclear bombs, and the Immortal Emperor can only blow up a planet with a full blow 🤫🤫🤫

I am your number one fan, but I feel like your updates are slow.

You won't be able to watch it starting from the 22nd

Sorry, this book still suits my taste

I looked at more than 20 pictures and every time I said that Mo Qingxue was taken down by pig's feet, but the so-called Mo Qingxue never came out once, why why why why why why why why why why? However, there are several other girls coming out. Do you want to wait until all the sows are bred with Pig's Feet before it's Mo Qingxue's turn?

In addition, the power of the Immortal Emperor in this article is equivalent to a large-yield nuclear weapon, weak chicken. This is clearly mentioned in the article. Humans on earth have nuclear weapons, and the number is enough to destroy stars. Then some people are shocked that they can actually do things that only brothers can do.

Abe Qingming is described as being sincere and naughty, but is he actually a scumbag? According to the description, Ampei Qingming can make others reborn with a single seal. Or it exists in the form of a soul, and it can be said to have unlimited life if it is not destroyed. Would such a being die of old age instead of in battle? With such an ability, he can exist indefinitely in the form of a soul, or he can completely seize the body. According to the description, he is bound by the physical body at most. But with the ability to seize the body, someone else can seize the body with a trace of their soul using a seal drawn by him, so it would be easier for him to seize the body. Such a being cannot die at all, instead of being killed. To actually describe the plot is to die of old age. . Then he built a tomb and waited for people to come and seize the body. . Then after seizing the body, he will become immortal and immortal, this is the description. . I really don't know why I am causing this trouble.