Gold Medal Shooter

This article has been signed, which means there is nothing wrong with it. But to be honest, the whole plot is that the protagonist is playing the game seriously. There is very little plot outside the game. The few girls who appear look like they are playing soy sauce. It looks like the protagonist made a mistake at the beginning that led to his defeat, and then blamed himself? Frustrated? Anyway, it's just starting over. The whole thing seems to be that the game is played well, but there is no conflict and no climax. At the beginning, some people may be interested in seeing what different tasks the game has, but after all, they don't want to see how the protagonist upgrades in the game. It would be better to just write that the protagonist travels into this game world and rises step by step. Either fight outside the game or fight inside the game. There is no one to fight against in life. Isn't it too lonely as snow?

As a new writer, it feels like walking alone in a dark night. I hope you can spare your precious time, use your book reviews to weigh my path, and give me the courage to continue.