Dominate the Future

The author's writing skills are solid, and his various depictions and descriptions are easy to read, making people unable to put it down.

The author's imagination is very rich, which makes the plot unexpected and whets the reader's appetite. The author's logic is clear and meticulous, so the rich plot will not seem disconnected and the readers will follow the author's thinking.

The ending of Chapter 2 is hard to tell, I just can't tell. I suggest you change it, the rest is fine.

I like the protagonist's personality, which is similar to mine. Although I'm a little bit more narcissistic than the protagonist, I still want to talk about narcissism. The protagonist, we are all the same people, haha!