Roll On, Mochi!

... They wanted to portray her as innocent, but the description didn't quite capture it, making it seem contrived. The shifts between innocence and naivety didn't fit the character. Also, many events were left unresolved before moving on to the next, and the plot flowed poorly.

I actually found the earlier parts (up to chapter 72) more enjoyable; the later parts got boring. The female lead remained naive throughout the story, showing little improvement, which made the fight scenes feel rather dull. The cuteness and naivety of the female lead were entertaining in the beginning, but maintaining that character throughout became monotonous and tedious. I only managed to keep reading because I was experiencing a reading slump.

If the first chapter had started with a scene depicting Mochi's real life, it probably would have been much better... In the beginning, Mochi's naivety felt too contrived, but otherwise it was alright. It's the kind of story you can read when you're looking for something to read. I only started to find the story interesting after Ji Yan appeared in chapter 42. I feel sorry for Mochi~