Tianying

The first volume is the pinnacle and the most exciting, but the second volume has no idea what it is about. Yi Xin dies inexplicably. The power system in the book is also super confusing. The power of cultivating immortals is not as good as that of martial arts. No matter what level, everyone dies inexplicably in the end. Transformation gods are always supreme. The third volume is no longer readable. It leaves too many holes and can no longer be explained. The fourth volume is the most confusing one. If it doesn't end well, they might as well have died. Bai Lian's life experience was not explained clearly until the end. The protagonist still hasn't recovered the memory he lost when he was a black wolf. Many people also wrote and left without explaining anything at all. My personal feeling about this book is in one word: confusion. But after all, the ending is over. I hope the author can make new breakthroughs in the next book!

In addition to the writing style of this book, which creates a suspense atmosphere, this book feels like there is nothing else. It is a suspense novel wrapped in the shell of a fairy. The overall feeling is mediocre, I would say 75 points. Although I felt like the middle half of the book, the author still tried his best to salvage the plot. I don't know whether it was due to time constraints or other reasons, but when there was no natural ending, I couldn't bear it anymore. The author will create a big conflict at about the same time, kill everyone, and end it all. After reading this, I really want to say thank you so much, it's finally over, and I don't have to suffer anymore. Throughout the whole book, there are only a few outstanding images, and this is the only one that left some impression after reading it, that is, the little girl named Yi, the prostitute who died in the village, and other things that I feel I have completely forgotten. The characterization is relatively poor, and the plot is barely complete. This style is a bit like Gu Long's suspenseful martial arts novels, but the characterization is really weak and the writing is a bit tender. In this style of novel, I feel that the author still needs to work harder.

I read a few chapters a few years ago and then gave up. Then I accidentally read it again and decided not to read it. It was a waste of time. From Jin Yong to online novels, I have read a lot of good novels. Zhu Xian was considered a classic when it first came out. I read it from beginning to end, but I have read more exciting novels than Zhu Xian before, so I am not as crazy about it as those who only read online novels. Besides, the writing style of "Sky Shadow" is acceptable, and the content logic is not bad. It can be seen that the author wants to work hard to portray the character's humanity and the connotation of the story, but the writing in this aspect is particularly poor! It's so bad that I really can't stand it. It would be better if there weren't so many human conflicts. First of all, the protagonist is not described as a human being at the beginning. In order to destroy, the undercover demon sect deceives his master and destroys his ancestors, kills his brother, wife and children, and then hides in the city and lives leisurely like a normal person, just to heal his wounds and recuperate. Like a perverted murderer, there is no emotional upheaval, and the subsequent story has no explanation of the previous one. It would be wonderful if the main character had a split personality, but the latter part is sunny, kind, righteous and awe-inspiring, and the character's personality is extremely inconsistent. The content of the story is a bit delayed, and the main line is very unclear. It always seems to be written where it comes to mind, deliberately adding some connotations but not profound. It is slightly better than Shuangwen but not much. I believe many people are waiting for the explanation in the later chapters of the protagonist's murder of his wife and children. Whether he didn't die or for some reason, I can tell you no. The protagonist simply killed to survive and complete the task. Killing four powerful elders was not enough to reduce the strength of the demon sect. Even the brothers, wives and children with average strength had to be eliminated to avoid future troubles. Then go take the sunny path and spend your days leisurely, which is awesome...

Xiao Ding's writing style is very good, but he seems to be under too much pressure. In some places it is obvious that the manuscript is being delayed. I suggest you take some time to revise the book.

This is actually a novel written by the author of Zhu Xian? The storyline is completely illogical and the descriptions are so confusing that it's really hard to watch.

I was deeply shocked when I watched "Zhu Xian" ten years ago! From the lines of Xiao Dashen's works, you can clearly feel the rich emotions, delicate pen and ink, and the profound pictures that can't help but arise in your mind. This is not comparable to those commercial novels, it is not on the same level at all. I can feel the presence of spirit from the works of great masters. What is a hero and what is a fairy? It's just "Zhu Xian"! I am not exaggerating in flattering, but as a sentimental person who has lost hope and is oppressed by life, but still firmly believes in love and persists in faith, I give a silent cry! Xianxia never fades, and heroes never end! He will always live in our hearts!

The work of Zhu Xian and Conferring Gods, and other works, maybe my Chinese is not good enough and my emotional intelligence is not high enough, I feel that the writing is: Haha

Xiao Ding is very good at character description, especially emotional writing. He wrote many vivid characters, such as Dead Bald Head, Sister Su, and Bai Lian. And my favorite Yi Xin. However, I don't know why the plot of Xiao Ding's book is so confusing? Many chapters are incomprehensible, and they even seem to be jumbled together without advancing the plot. I have to say that the first two chapters of this book were really amazing, but then it got worse and worse, and in the end it felt like it was unfinished. And what's wrong with digging holes but not filling them? We will wait and see whether Xiao Ding can return to his original intention of killing immortals.

，，， Thinking about it carefully, "Tianying", Tian, ​​means destiny; shadow means identity, which is the fate of shadow. Lu Chen is not a good person, nor is he a strong man. However, the truth of the world is tragic. When people are fighting within themselves, they do not expect that there are powerful enemies outside. Ten years ago, Lu Chen stopped the God Advent Formation, but he did not expect that what he prevented was the world being cleansed. Ten years later, when Lu Chen was young, he was just a small fish in the adults' vanity fair. Although he often encountered darkness, he still met Yi Xin, Yi Xin's father, Su Qingyun, and Dingdang. To be honest, there were only a handful of good people in this book. There is no concept of country in the book, and there is no national concept such as prosperity, strength, democracy, civilization, and harmony. It is mainly about interpersonal relationships, people are nepotistic, and there is a crisis of trust. Therefore, Lu Chen's master believed that people were all rotten and could not be saved, and must be destroyed and rebuilt, so he activated the Divine Advent Formation to cleanse the world and restore order. In the end, his master failed and died, and Lu Chen's heart became a door again, but I don't know if he will get rid of the fate of the shadow. In fact, Lu Chen's master is so arrogant. It's basically a system problem. Zong families and the like are too backward. Individual rights are not guaranteed. People have to join a group, be wary of each other, be controlled by others, and have a crisis of trust. So, if Lu Chen's master can build a country instead of taking evil ways, many problems can be solved.

I just finished reading the second volume, and I feel that the writing is quite good. The writing is delicate, and although the pace is slow, the explosion at the end is pretty good. Just because the foreplay was too much, the sexual part felt a bit unenjoyable. Xiao Ding's book is indeed different from ordinary Internet celebrity writers. I like to read this book while listening to slow-paced piano music. There is no pity at all for the characters that have been established in so many chapters. Sister Yi Xin was written to death for the next volume. Maybe the characters are harvested just like leeks. As some book friends said, the protagonist of this book probably has a shadow of the author's own state of mind. From Zhu Xian's vigorous spirit to Tian Ying's calmness and indifference, it is like the transition of a young man to middle age. I read some comments saying that there are some bad endings at the end. This is probably a common problem in online literature that is written and updated at the same time. The cycle is so long, and the previous manuscript cannot be revised. It is really difficult to write a novel that fits perfectly. But I will continue to follow it, and I hope that the third volume will also move me.

Somewhere in everyone's heart, There is another self that no one knows about. Clean, sophisticated, It's a secret. It is the rebellion of youth; It is also the forbearance of youth and maturity; It is sincerity that remains innocent forever; It is also the plan that protects me; It is for us at every age, Those who don't want to be humane, Your most authentic self. It grows up with us, Or never grow up, Because of this part, We are flesh and blood, no longer pale, After self-rescue, one can learn to be at ease. So, when you look back, The 2003 "Zhu Xian" actually showed the 27-year-old Xiao Da. At that time, Zhang Xiaofan's dreams and hopes were clear, and in his memories, there was the shadow of the cloth shop boy everywhere. Young man, ordinary. From a small village to the big world, You have to work hard, you have to be lucky, you have to have swords and swords, and you have to walk through too many dark places. Only when you can earn Hua Ming, can you become a demon or an immortal, can you be considered wonderful. With a stick in his hand, the wind thundered, and all the demons and monsters bowed their heads. Our blood boils and we are moved by it, It is also because he releases the inner corner of ourselves for us. We will never forget it in the future, Talking about missing Baguio, missing Lu Xueqi, missing Dahuang and Xiaohui, In fact, I am missing the self that once longed to be stronger. The 2016 "Sky Shadow" constructed the ravines in the chest of 40-year-old Xiao Da. Thirteen years have passed, and the sweet dreams have faded away. The black wolf once faded away and became Lu Chen. Not confused, transparent. From the big world back to the small village, With the choice, the confidence, and the indifference of not caring about the past, The heart has the end of the world, so there is no joy that cannot be forgotten, and there is no pain that cannot be driven away. The long smoke sets and the sun sets, life is always just beginning. Everyone has to grow up, right? We have been reading "Zhu Xian" for thirteen years, and we remember the story, the emotion, and the details. When I think of Xiao Da, it's "Zhu Xian". Thirteen years have passed, We are not what we used to be, With courage, I also began to have plans. Even without Zhang Xiaofan's fire stick, You can also face the whole world alone, And Xiao Da is no longer a twenty-seven-year-old youth who doesn't know where to go in life. The secret self of forty-year-old Xiao Da, I believe it is hidden in "Sky Shadow". Old friends no longer come, And blank is still the most moving color, The sword moves lightly, the sword moves thickly, The story of Qingyun Mountain is over, and the story of Qingshuitang Village has just begun. Thirteen years later, Xiao Da sold us the pass, Could he accidentally release his own shadow from thirteen years ago? Zhang Xiaofan and Gui Li once amazed us. What would Black Wolf be like, and what would Lu Chen be like? Xiao Da has been very diligent in updating recently. I heard that there will be a big outbreak in the past few days. I like Xiao Da like this. As long as you update, I will follow. Anyway, I remember "Zhu Xian", look forward to "Sky Shadow", and support Xiao Da.

Why do you want to write about the protagonist killing his wife and children? Without this part, it will have no impact on the plot. Why, why 😓😓😓, ugh

"Sky Shadow" is only 125 chapters long, and there is already a lot of foreshadowing. It feels like Xiao Da is playing a big game of chess. A temporary compilation, which may not be accurate or complete. Any ideas or additions are welcome. 1. What is the identity of Lao Yu in Qingshuitang Village? Is he just a soy sauce guy? Why did he insist that there were big fish in Qingshui Creek? 2. Lu Chen repeatedly described "grass stems" in the thatched cottage in Qingshuitang Village. What exactly is a "grass stem"? What's the point? 3. What was the strange fish Hongchuan saw in Long Lake? 4. Who is the man wearing the golden mask who appears in Chapter 37? The article describes a "strange voice, hoarse and low, and like metal and stone intertwined. I couldn't tell the difference between men and women for a while, and I just felt a dull pain in my eardrums." Could this "unable to tell the difference between men and women" be Yun Jian or even Yun Xiaoqing who survived back then? 5. What is the identity of the Blood Warbler? Lu Chen said that she would not be a spy of the Demon Cult, but why did Lao Liu call her by her name before he died? 6. Did the barbarian who was killed by Lu Chen in the land of confusion have any tricks or was he just a fool? 7. Ah Tu is described in the article as a "hybrid monster". Logically speaking, the bloodline should be inferior to purebred monsters, but Ah Tu is simply too smart to be true. Is there any hidden bloodline? ... 8. In Chapter 77, Lu Chen told Zhenjun Tianlan that his flesh and soul were burned by the black flame curse, and his mind was also confused, so he couldn't remember much about what happened outside the valley. Did Chase Lu really not remember this or...? True Lord Tianlan told Lu Chen that he had not killed many people and fainted when he came out. Yun Jian and Yun Xiaoqing both died in the rebellion. Why? The point is! Did Lu Chen really lose his memory? Or is there some foreshadowing? 9. What is Lao Ma's identity? Although he was not very good at Taoism, he was sent by True Lord Tianlan to assist Lu Chen. Lao Ma indeed protected Lu Chen many times, including being tortured by Shang Feiyi's captives but did not betray Lu Chen. However, later in Kunlun City, his attitude towards Lu Chen was very strange. They seemed to be wary of each other and tested each other several times. Lao Ma was even a little afraid of Lu Chen. Why? 10. Unforgettable foreshadowing! What is Bai Lian's identity? He is a five-pillar genius at a young age, with such a changeable personality, and is very strong in close combat. He knows the "blood eating" method that can only be practiced by barbarian priests. Moreover, in Chapter 85, Lao Ma asked whether this little girl happened to be passing by, but Lu Chen denied it. Then why did Bai Lian meet Lu Chen about stealing things? Was it intentional? Where did you learn your close combat skills? How do you know about "blood food"? Why should A Tu's bloodline be stimulated? What is the pendant on his body that resonates with the seeds in Lu Chen's body? Ah Tu likes that tree hole very much, but why is Bai Lian so uncomfortable with that tree hole? There is a state similar to "hibernation" in the tree hole? It seems that half of the energy in Bai Lian's green pendant was absorbed by Lu Chen's tree hole. Will there be any impact? ... Of course the point is! Who is she? ! ? 11. Lu Chen said before that his moral skills are very low now, like a useless person, but when he appraised immortals, the mirror had an abnormal reaction, and there was muffled thunder in the distance. Putting aside the fact that Lu Chen's Five Elements Divine Disk has two sides, he must have a hidden talent, but he made such a movement while appreciating immortals. Although the description said that it took a short time, did so many elders with extremely high Taoism in Kunlun not notice it? Or maybe Lu Chen's hidden cultivation level was so high that they couldn't detect it. . ? 12. Why is the Qing Niu of Zhenjun Tianlan so interested in the red ginseng cultivated by Lu Chen? Logically speaking, it is Zhenjun Tianlan's cute little pet. He must have seen a lot of good things! Why would he be so obscene and get intoxicated by the smell of red ginseng, and let Ah Tu take the opportunity to slap the cow's fart later? . 13. Will there be any chemical reaction between black mud lotus root and black fire? . ? 14. Zhenjun Tianlan and Zhenjun Baichen said that turning over would cause an earthquake. . What is it? 15. By the way, what are the two doors in Lu Chen's tree hole? The tree hole is already a space. Is there another space behind the door? 16. In addition to Ding Dong, who is clearly described as dead, there are now 4 women. . Yun Xiaoqing, Su Qingjun, Yi Xinhe. . Bai Lian, who is the heroine? Or maybe the heroine hasn't appeared yet. . . ? Good

I'm the uncle of the shopkeeper Since Lu Chen agreed to go to the Kunlun Sect, Ma Xiaoyun and Fatty Ma have been by Lu Chen's side. In fact, not only during the days when he went to the Kunlun Sect, but also in the past ten years in Qingshuitang Village, Ma Xiaoyun was always by Lu Chen's side. Just as Lu Chen said, a world-famous True Lord Tianlan just let this fat man who was fat, ugly, dull, bankrupt in business, and unable to pass three tricks in cultivating immortals hang out with him. In these years, only this fat man knew his secrets, his past, his past events and sufferings. Likewise, only he was qualified for the mission of True Lord Tianlan, to accompany Lu Chen to "go to the West to obtain the true scriptures." There was both dislike and admiration between them. Fatty Ma Xiaoyun disliked Lu Chen for being too low in cultivation. He made a list of tens of thousands of people the Kunlun Sect should not offend for Lu Chen. Lu Chen disliked Fatty for being stupid and fat. It must be the reputation left by Lu Chen when he was young. Debt-ridden, the big fat man gave birth to a little fat man. Similarly, the fat man admired Lu Chen for being forbearing and repressed, and felt that he had lived too hard. He had shouldered so many things for so many years. Although he was hunted down many times, he was blessed with great fortune. Lu Chen admired the fat man for having an easy-going heart and a jug of wine. , A big and fat chicken drumstick, a small shabby shop can satisfy. In Heiqiu Pavilion, where "the aroma of wine is not afraid of deep alleys", a little girl came to buy medicine. When Lu Chen saw that the shop was too dirty, he said that the shopkeeper of this shop was very lazy. The little girl looked at Lu Chen in confusion. Lu Chen smiled. Answer: I am the uncle of this shopkeeper. I wonder if Fatty will get angry when he hears the word "uncle". It seems that this is everything about Fatty. He is stupid, honest, loyal, self-conscious, and has an optimistic and easy-going nature. But these may not be all of them. Ma Xiaoyun, who works for True Lord Tianlan, and Master Lu Chen, who has a grudge against him, all seem so mysterious and untouchable. Before going to Kunlun, True Lord Tianlan asked Lu Chen if there were any old friends in the Demon Sect Valley. Lu Chen only said that he didn't know. So why didn't True Lord Tianlan, who knew the truth completely, tell Lu Chen the truth? Before going to Kunlun, Lu Chen wanted to find out what the demon sect was planning. True Lord Tianlan just spoke vaguely and said he didn't know. Lu Chen laughed at himself and said, "It's not the first time this has happened anyway." True Lord Tianlan is full of too many secrets, so is the old horse who works behind True Lord Tianlan really clean and clear? On the hillside outside the barren valley, Lu Chen said with a smile that he doubted the identity of the fat man. Although the fat man laughed and scolded him and blocked him, Lu Chen still had doubts in his heart. Maybe many times, he could not see the true face of his friend. "I am the uncle of the shop owner" was a joke and a joke. Laughter is friendship and the emotion of slowly passing by. Perhaps, we are all willing to believe that the fat man is really as he said, "I am of pure wealth, and my loyalty and courage will shine through. You are a fool to doubt me!" In this way, Lu Chen's life will have more emotions and less sorrow.

I had a question a long time ago. Can anyone shed some light on this for me? The bald figure is much taller than ordinary humans. Why doesn't anyone have any doubts about it? Only demons can have such a tall figure. Later, Baldhead said that his master suddenly got a good apprentice after sealing the dungeon, which was a city of demons. Tianlan has destroyed the Demon Sect and wants to destroy the True Immortal Alliance. These two are the strongest human organizations.

Xiao Ding, an old thief who has been a thief for decades, can only absorb the heat of Zhu Xian, and other things are said to be useless🤣Vampires cannot be sucked without him

Facts have proved that the current online writing is basically the kind of novels that primary school students can easily understand. This type of writing is easier to code and make money. But it does allow readers to relax and have fun. However, it is not easy to make money for slowly brewing classics like Zhu Xian. It must be extremely difficult to code. This is just my guess. After all, how can famous books be mass-produced? Zhu Xian may not be able to write a prologue. After all, writing such a book can be imagined as a waste of time. If not, it will put the cart before the horse. Nowadays, new online articles are desperately rushing forward and succeeding, with coolness and imagination as labels, and code word update speed as glory. I do not deny that some small authors have surprisingly big imaginations and strong perseverance. But the pursuit is indeed tickets and traffic. It can only be said that the current era is adapted to this style. What is still intriguing are the works produced by the painstaking efforts of those old people. The ocean of words is wider, but the immersive experience has disappeared.

Xiao Ding said that he had been writing books for more than ten years... Well, what works did he write in the ten years between Zhu Xian and Tianying? Why can't he find it?

You're going to kill your wife and children right from the start and ignore it, so what kind of emotional drama are you going to do? Isn't it funny to sympathize with a prostitute? You tried so hard to give her a break and take revenge, but the starting setting collapsed. It made me want to laugh. A good person can kill his wife and children, but he can't see a prostitute being cheated of spiritual stones. He is really very caring. He likes to help and send people to Kunlun. How great. You are already quarreling with the number one master in Kunlun. They still owe you a favor. I laughed so hard.

In fact, many people criticize Zhu Xian for this book, which I don't quite understand. This book is definitely written by the author who has reached a certain age before he can write such a sense of transparency. On the contrary, Zhu Xian writes too much for literary youth Of course, considering that many readers are students, from primary school students to college students, it is understandable that they prefer literary youth, but it does not mean that Xiao Ding has stretched his crotch ten years after becoming famous.

What a great book, no worse than Zhu Xian. It's a pity that many people now only read Shuangwen and Xiaobaiwen.

First of all, the protagonist is not described as a human being at the beginning. In order to destroy, the undercover demon sect deceives his master and destroys his ancestors, kills his brother, wife and children, and then hides in the city and lives leisurely like a normal person, just to heal his wounds and recuperate. Like a perverted murderer, there is no emotional upheaval, and the subsequent story has no explanation of the previous one. It would be wonderful if the main character had a split personality, but the latter part is sunny, kind, righteous and awe-inspiring, and the character's personality is extremely inconsistent. The content of the story is a bit delayed, and the main line is very unclear. It always seems to be written where it comes to mind, deliberately adding some connotations but not profound. It is slightly better than Shuangwen but not much. I believe many people are waiting for the explanation in the later chapters of the protagonist's murder of his wife and children. Whether he didn't die or for some reason, I can tell you no. The protagonist simply killed to survive and complete the task. Killing four powerful elders was not enough to reduce the strength of the demon sect. Even the brothers, wives and children with average strength had to be eliminated to avoid future troubles. Then go take the sunny path and spend your days leisurely, which is awesome...

One kills the immortal and the other the sky shadow, infinite appendix, treating the fans like monkeys 😰

I'd better ignore things that can be ignored, and it's okay to touch up the damage later. It feels a bit procrastinating to describe it one way. I feel that some authors' methods are quite good. They get the result directly at the beginning, and then explain the reason. This seems a bit suspenseful, and then suddenly feels relieved after seeing the reason, and it doesn't feel so sloppy. Asami, please understand if it's wrong.

Well! Why do I doubt whether the author of Zhu Xian is you?

Zhu Xian has promoted the author status before, but this book is just an ordinary book. With an average writer's level, he can guess the general plot after reading part of it. The plot structure is not new.

The book is not good, it is completely embarrassing.

After reading a few chapters, I searched for an introduction to the book. Just one point of view: the protagonist has bad moral character, achieves his goal by deceiving others' trust at the level of relatives, kills others, kills others, and is not worthy of being a human being. You don't need to read books with such protagonists. If you are generous and use your strength to destroy others, you can be called a hero, but the protagonist in the book, haha, he is not worthy, even the word "villain" is to praise the protagonist. Comparing the difference between Jin Guo Yu and Zhao Xiang during the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, there is a difference between clouds and mud, such as the sun contrasting with fireflies, the vast starry sky contrasting with dirt and dust, and the protagonist in the book is more like a clown.

There is a new book out. I just realized now that it has been serialized so many times. I still remember the days when I read Zhu Xian. It has been many years.

A woman dies, and another woman comes, and the endless cycle of love and hatred, I immediately came to see the cultivator, the protagonist is just like a second-rate man who takes revenge all day long, what kind of stupid thing