Mercenary Elegy

I really can't write anymore. Two months of hard work can only be exchanged for a few scattered subscriptions. I can only temporarily send out all the manuscripts I have saved, if the results continue to be like this. I can't guarantee how long I can keep writing! I think I will stick to writing this month! At least insist on getting perfect attendance! Otherwise, after several months of hard work, nothing will come of it, and thousands of dollars will be spent on it. It's really not worth it! I don't know how many authors are like me, holding great dreams, but the results are far different from what we imagined. How many authors are like me, who spent thousands of dollars before making a single profit. This is not the most important thing. The important thing is that they spent all their time on it, but they did not get the results they imagined! If updates really stop one day, book friends who support this book, please forgive me! All the energy was spent on this book, and I stayed at home for several months to write it. But for the sake of livelihood, we had to make changes! You can only write wherever you go!

Wanting too much often results in disastrous results. I endured the pain and spent 1,200 yuan to get a ranking at the bottom of the click list on the homepage. But a week has passed, and the results are far worse than what I expected. While I feel sorry for money, I will also learn from the experience and stop dreaming about sweet dreams that I shouldn't expect. Now that the story has begun, it cannot be abandoned halfway. I will keep at it until the end of the story.

It's a mess, the preface doesn't match the subtitles, and it's impossible to connect to it.

Would you believe me if I said that I am commenting here because this book is the last one on the collection list...

Maybe my writing isn't great, maybe it's pretty bad, but that's the extent of my writing skills. As the author of this novel, I will humbly accept reasonable opinions from every reader and make improvements. I also ask those book friends who have not read this novel seriously, please do not point fingers at my work. Maybe a comment you write casually will guide one or even multiple readers to their first impression of this book. If you don't like it, you don't have to watch it, but please don't trample on other people's hard work. Thanks!

Can you advance the plot faster? It's so hard to follow.****

I don't have money to reward, and I really like fantasy novels, so I wrote a long review to support the author. A novel with a Western legendary background and mainly mercenaries. To be honest, it is difficult to stand out in today's online literary world. I really like the three characters Aileen, Manid and Momocha in the book. The author describes the characters of these characters very carefully and distinctively. There are also other characters in the book: such as the free knight Rogge, Count Araxes, Sheriff Harric, tavern owner Suk, and slave trader Ramon. These NPC characters in Mount and Blade are all very well portrayed. Each character has his own unique personality and does not exist to support the existence of the protagonist.

The story is so captivating that once you read it, you won't be able to put it away.

I have played Mount and Blade games before, but the NPC characters written by the author gave me a new understanding of this game. To be honest, the writing is very good, especially the characterization. The story is also very strong, and the author is good at laying out foreshadowing in the early stage. The author is also very good at describing the characters' minds. The abandoned mercenary, the down-and-out businessman, the wretched horse thief, and the brave and resourceful pirate, these are the main characters in the book that I like very much. Especially the character of Alleyne. That's all I've written for the time being, and I will always pay attention to the author's novels. I have always read it, and I also like the style of fantasy writing. If the author can insist on writing, he will give dozens of dollars to support it.

Damn, here I come! For your constant support, please send your votes! ! !

Such good writing and storytelling are so rare. I have been playing Mount and Blade for more than a month, but I feel it is not as impressive as your book... The author must be a horse riding fan too!

Very anime style cover! 😄

Come on! This book will be a hit! ! ! 🤭🤭🤭😄😄🥺🥺

The author writes too slowly. I would like to ask, if I give a reward, how much would it take to add more updates?

Mount and Blade? ! Not bad, let's take a look first before talking

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I like the four characters of Alleyne, Manid, Wiggins, and Momocha. In the first volume, there are the freedom knight Rogge, the tavern owner Suk, the instructor Kai, Xiao Yi, Karadus, and the slave trader Ramon. I actually remember all these characters. I just want to say that the author's portrayal of these characters is somewhat impressive. About Volume Three The Knights of Freedom. The sudden appearance of the arena space and brand-new characters made me a little confused at first. The two new characters, Jamie Lin and Brun, occupy almost the entire third volume. There is also a lot of description of the character Sheriff Harrick in the third volume. Later, in the fourth volume, which was written more about the Lord of Zenda, Count Alassis, and the Bachelor of Cordine, I felt that the whole story suddenly opened up a large area. Finally, I want to say: This novel actually gave me a sense of déjà vu of ice and fire.

This is truly a fantasy novel with a solid foundation. The description of every scene made me feel like I was there. Every inner description appropriately shows the character's true thoughts. Even a butcher or a robber has his own thoughts. The structure of each character allowed me to see the essence of this book. The appearance of all the characters and the pen and ink spent are so real, which makes me feel that everyone has the value of existence and what they want to express. Aileen, Manid, and Momocha are my latest characters. In the book, there are the free knights, Lord Zenda, and the bounty hunter and pirate Nabar. The author describes all the characters in the book thoroughly, so that each of them has their own thoughts and personality. Instead of writing all these supporting characters as stupid and stupid, they also exist to set off the protagonist. The sense of déjà vu between ice and fire makes people want to stop, and reduces the visual fatigue caused by a single protagonist appearing in the book all the time. Although the story moves slowly, the sentences in the text are very detailed, which made me read every word carefully, for fear that I would miss an important dialogue or a wonderful scene description. At the beginning of the story, the protagonist carries his destiny and searches for the prophecy in the sheepskin. This gives the story a clear plot. While embarking on the road of mercenary, he also shouldered the mission of the order to find the final prophecy. I really like this kind of novel with fine writing, profound characterization, and huge story background. Come on! Very well written.

The biggest feature of this novel is its strong storytelling, outstanding characters, and excellent scene descriptions. The first is the appearance of Alleyn, a mercenary who was abandoned by his companions. In order to make a living, he went out of the city to suppress bandits. Then I met Manid, a down-and-out businessman, and three pirates who couldn't survive, formed a small group, and later hired an excellent guide, the horse thief Momo Cha. These are all NCP characters in the game, but they are flexible in the author's writing. Although the plot is a bit the same as the game, the writing is really good, with a bit of gray humor, but not the rigor of orthodox fantasy.

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Maybe my writing isn't great, maybe it's pretty bad, but that's the extent of my writing skills. As the author of this novel, I will humbly accept reasonable opinions from every reader and make improvements. I also ask those book friends who have not read this novel seriously, please do not point fingers at my work. Maybe a comment you write casually will guide one or even multiple readers to their first impression of this book. If you don't like it, you don't have to watch it, but please…

The author will definitely receive applause from flowers all the way if he writes like this! He will become a god soon. Don't forget us after he becomes a god~

In order to write this review, I also read the novel specifically and made some suggestions for the author. The framework of the novel is quite good, but in terms of writing style, don't deliberately be gorgeous for the sake of being gorgeous. It's not necessary, otherwise it will be a bit artificial. I am quite optimistic about this novel, and I hope the author will work hard and not forget his original intention. Since I have not read many chapters, I cannot objectively evaluate the content of the novel. I hope other readers will judge for themselves. If you don't like it, don't complain, and read in a civilized manner.