Reborn in Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils as a Wine-and-Meat Monk

You write a snakeskin novel. Read Chapter 70. They are all top-notch masters, but they have never fought in actual combat. Never had a fight. Also write martial arts novels.

It only cost one hundred taels to buy century-old wine. Two hundred taels is too much for a person who came to deliver a reward from the emperor. Is it too much? If you have anything to ask him for, and you don't want to go to court, why would you give him so much?

The six-door recruitment masters are all chasing and intercepting. If you can't catch them, just run to someone's home? Experts all have their own tempers. They must be angry if they are chased for no reason. If they enter someone's room without permission, if there is any secret inside, they will become enemies even if they are not enemies.

Can you use less tricks? This kind of joke has been worn out for a long time. I have never understood how difficult it is to find a job. There is no good job, no bad job. It can take a year to find a girlfriend to support.

How dare you have your girlfriend support you for a year?

Is the six doors so realistic? A silver-badged head-catcher boss lady, you describe her as being on the same level as the Dali National Master-level Tianlong Ancestor? ? What about the boss lady? At least there must be a gold medal, right? Then the Golden Chapter must be at least better than the Tianlong Ancestor, right? Although Patriarch Tianlong cannot defeat Qiao Feng, he should be considered a first-level player, right? In other words, Agent Jinzhang should be on the same level as a sweeper? Even if it is worse, it can't be much worse, right? On top of that, there are four famous arrests, and the martial arts of the chief arrester. How do you plan to write about them? ? The one among the four famous catchers is Xiaoyaozi, and the one at Murong Longcheng level? ? ? What about the chief arrester? ? Did you say it was a Bodhidharma level? ? ? And isn't this the only department in the Song Dynasty? In the end, you won't write that the emperor knows the Emperor's Dragon Fist, right? ? Later, when Hong Qigong went to the palace to steal food, he was caught as soon as he entered the capital? ? ? The Sixth Prince of Dajin and his gang can no longer pretend to be B? Is this Song Dynasty too powerful? The Emperor of Liao still dared to invade? It doesn't even matter if Qiao Feng is dead, just a Jinzhang arrester can wipe out Daliao in seconds. Then a few people with golden seals captured the heads of each of them, and the Song Dynasty ruled the world, right? ? Then the Song Dynasty, when scholar-bureaucrats ruled the world, turned into warriors ruling the country, right?

This is a very pure novice's anecdotal article. Apart from learning martial arts, you just learn martial arts. There is no golden finger, but magical skills come too easily and are unreasonable. . . And especially the part about meeting Tianshan Tonglao, it was too early.

In fact, the skeleton is laid out pretty well. But even though the writing style is leaning towards comedy, it always feels like it's forced to be funny. There are some parts that make me very embarrassed. For example, when the protagonist first meets Murong Fu, he forcibly tells a nonsense story about Tang Monk in Journey to the West. It just looked very embarrassing, there were pig's feet and my uncle eating meat, and my uncle finally comforted my little heart and so on. I always feel that the author's writing style is mature at one time, and embarrassingly childish at the other. It's like you are eating a piece of bread. It originally tastes sweet, but suddenly you eat part of the bread with super sour lemon curd. It feels like your teeth are being sour. The result was a very uncomfortable contrast.

Or change the novel genre to fantasy or something like that

No one will bully you if you join the Six Gates, but someone in Shaolin Temple will dare to bully you? What's more, if you join the Six Gates, you still have to perform tasks. The sewer might capsize when you catch the prisoner. Not to mention the inconvenience of the Shaolin Temple. There is no martial arts at all. Drinking and eating meat is secret, although it is secret. And in the future, when the martial arts is better, the Shaolin Temple can really not let you do anything, just say Xuanbei, Xuanku, and such masters are going to be controlled? When your martial arts is high, you don't care whether you eat meat or drink alcohol. You can go wherever you want, just like Monk Jigong. As long as you don't make mistakes in major matters, nothing will happen!