The Holy Spirit of Soul Penetration

I hope that fellow Taoists will come to this book review area to speak and give me some suggestions, whether it is plot development or writing style, to help me and "Soul Piercing" grow and mature as soon as possible. (The style of the book has been modified. It is more humorous and no longer serious and plain. Thank you for your help) As a newcomer, I may not be able to write a plot that suits the tastes of fellow Taoists, so I hope you can give me better suggestions and help me improve this magnificent fantasy world. New people and new books need care, training, and support. Although I have nothing now, I believe that in the future, we can do anything! Xiaoshi, thank you all!

One of the few books I can read.

The development of this plot is really unexpected!

Which chapter have we changed to? The first two chapters look pretty good.

It seems that the author deleted a lot of chapters and almost started over again. I hope I can have a good start!

After reading the entire book, I just want to say two words to you: It's beautiful.

It was a slap in the face at the beginning, the idea is really good, I didn't see the thunder and blood, and I am very much looking forward to the follow-up.

Each character is well set up. For the setting of the male protagonist and other supporting characters, the author uses frontal descriptions and some side descriptions, so that readers can easily understand the characters that the author wants to show them.

This book is so beautiful, thank you so much, I support you

The author has amazing skills and a good conscience.

As long as you write carefully, you will gradually form your own unique style, so that the article will not become boring, and the later ones should be more exciting! Come on, I will support you every day! But don't become a eunuch! !

It means that this book has almost reached its peak on this subject, and the author is making further progress!

I read it in one go and it was really good. But I want to tell the author that the number of words is too short. Please save the manuscript!

The writing is great, the content is quite attractive, and it is worth watching. Come on, work hard to create! 🌹

I feel that this book has too many interesting points. People who have just traveled through time must be careful. For example, who would dare to be careless when going to a foreign war-torn place? The previous parts can be justified, but I am scolding everyone here, which feels not good. Anyway, I feel that there is no sense of substitution, which is enough. To scare away many people, I continued to read this part, but here comes another one with very poor qualifications. I can't stand it anymore. Why do you always like to say that the qualifications are extremely poor? This routine is so bad that you still do this. It's very shocking. I'll leave a comment here to commemorate it.

Very worth pursuing, recommendation index five stars