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I haven't seen such a good article in a long time, like it

Come to collect it, a friend recommended it, it looks good

I was hooked after reading the first chapter. Not only is the writing style exquisite, but also humorous. The plot is also very attractive. I was even jealous after reading it! Collect it first and then talk about it!

Readers who read the article will have their own thoughts when they see the male protagonist created by the author. There are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand people. In my eyes, the male protagonist is a handsome man with a deep and introverted personality!

I haven't read such thoughtful writing in a long time. It's a good and in-depth article. I recommend it.

🌹 Great work and update

Looking at it now, this article feels clean and not greasy!

The plot advances layer by layer, and the writing is really good.

The novel is very interesting, but it's not very long~ I beg the author to update it as soon as possible, it's a bit unsatisfactory~

Although the author is writing a novel, the things he expresses are very real, and many of them touch his heart~~

A great product for amateur leisure, I highly recommend it.

What time is it now and no update yet? Just one update?

The chapter on "Gong Gong for a Disheartened Man" is written very vividly. The Dantian is a flower pot, the meridians of the whole body are branches and vines, and the acupuncture points are flowers. The meridians of the human body are described so vividly that it is as if they are in front of your eyes. It is so wonderful!

Description of several chapters of Miaokong Mountain: 1. The strong visual impact of the strange fairy but not the doctor, the taste and smell impact of the old farmer's red fruit, the tactile impact of the little paper man of the girl, and the auditory impact of the blacksmith. It can be said that all five senses are present. 2. The plot is strange but the main line is not lost 3. Unique character 4. Humorous writing style All of the above are at their peak. After reading this, I can't help but marvel at each section. It suddenly dawns on me!

The author will definitely receive applause from flowers all the way if he writes like this! He will become a god soon. Don't forget us after he becomes a god~

The first thing I care about every time I read is the plot, ahem, and of course the introduction, so Jian Yue is the most important. The author has some time to think about the introduction. A cool introduction is bound to have good results.

One is destiny, two is luck, three is feng shui, four is accumulation of merit and five is study. The introduction is "four accumulation of merit". This is obviously the same as five study.

1. Shi Xiaohai has achieved some success in learning from Miaokong Mountain, and his learning has temporarily come to an end. This is the so-called rhythm of describing the end. 2. The author is confident and cleverly arranged. The masters arranged for Shi Xiaohai to have an important task, and at the same time gave him an identity of walking outside, and cleverly came out of the mountain. This is the so-called start of another clue. 3. As soon as he came out of the mountain, he fell into a world of war and chaos, which led to another story, this is called inheritance. 4. By chance, the people of the Central Plains entered the wilderness, and it was a small turn in the bizarre twists and turns. (I haven't seen the big turn yet) 😁 5. The turning point of the main plot will wait until I finish reading it, and then I will comment on Mr.'S wonderful writing!

The waves of the Gu country are shining at dusk, and the Han family is roaring with beacon smoke; The wind and clouds are rising, and the mantis appears, weeping at the sight of the desolate god wielding his divine whip. It's difficult for a beauty to be weak, but Hui Zhixin asks the Golden Silkworm sadly. The beauty promised to escape the sky is broken, and the relative pain is always missed; I sing the pear garden song in a low voice instead of crying, and I invite you to listen to it alone and you will also shed tears. After reading the second volume of "Winds and Winds", I felt Rui'er's infatuation. I couldn't help but feel sad and confused. I couldn't think about it. The music and the rhythm were not harmonious, so I just remembered it.

This book is a good book worth reading. The plot is compact and the plot is exciting. It is much better than some other life dramas that are as bland as boiled water. But no matter what, here's another thumbs up. Secondly, the protagonist's characterization is quite delicate.