Star of Rebirth

The author is too self-satisfied and has not done a good job in background work. The whole text seems inconsistent. It is said that it is to practice business routines, but it is too commercial, and I am afraid of angry youth when writing about Japan, so I wrote the first volume, but this is too kitsch. Your article has been positioned as a niche from the beginning, so you might as well write it with flavor to win reputation. For training, it's better to use orthodox urban ones.

It's baffling. Isn't it copyrighted? If someone drew the Legend of the Galactic Heroes without permission, why wasn't he arrested and prosecuted? ??? What logicヽ（＿；)ノ

I don't understand the value of this yen. A monthly salary of 10,000 yen? ? Wouldn't the author check the information?

I finished reading this novel in one go, and I think the author's imagination is really great~ But the ending felt too rushed, and I feel like I could have written three to four hundred chapters =￣ω￣=

So you don't want to write anymore? He said he could wait! No hair at all!

This book is very well written and IQ is very online. I look forward to the author's next book.

It's a very nice book. I like the historical background of the first volume and the rhythm of the second volume...

There's a new book, there's a new book, there's a new book!

The writing, plot, etc. Are all good, but the pace of the article really affects reading. We wrote too much about the background description of the first volume, and it was not particularly related to the main plot. The plot of the second volume was too depressing, and it was constantly sadistic, and it was really difficult to retain readers.

The beginning is very pretentious and affects reading!

I've always liked it, it's very interesting, but unfortunately it fell apart in the escape chapter and I didn't even recognize it anymore. It was a complete failure. No matter how round it is in the back, it doesn't have the same feeling as before. It's a pity that it's an overly experimental writing. Let's wait for the author's new book.

I wrote a book on children's shoes with certification. This technology is a bit dark! Unfortunately it still died! I wonder if you are writing a new book now?

I miss you. It's such a pity. I wrote it too early.

I think the beginning is good, but most newbies can't read it.