Infinite Dimensional Fantasy

When I saw the fallen angel bloodline, I originally wanted to give up. To be honest, the fallen angel bloodline is not the strongest. It is neither high nor low. It is very embarrassing, and it is particularly good.

The author's writing style at the beginning is very immature. It is estimated that many people can't even read the beginning and give up. So I give the author a suggestion. I hope the author will listen to it: before writing the book, first construct an outline of the main body of the article, and then consider the details. It is best to demonstrate it on paper first, so as not to miss the details. One of the problems the author has at the beginning is that the article is rough, not touching people's hearts, and the details are very lacking. And the author made a mistake, that is, the name of King Arthur Arturia is not Arturia. When I saw this place just now, I gave up decisively because the author's mistake made me feel very awkward. Obviously, the author did not have a deep understanding of the fan world he built. Anyone who knows Xingyue knows that King Arthur's real name in history (the history of the two-dimensional world) is actually Arturia Pan Dragon, and the author's mistake was that he got King Arthur's real name wrong. Therefore, the story of Xingyue World is very poorly constructed, and can even be said to be bad. At a small level, it is the details that determine success or failure. At a large level, the author's mistake ruined the general reader's first impression of the book. Therefore, I think the author's plot of Xingyue World is very inaccurate. Under normal circumstances, readers They all start reading from the beginning, from the shallower to the deeper, and finally wantonly. Therefore, the author should think about how to write before writing the book, and firmly fix the reader's senses on the word "perfect" at the beginning. Don't directly collapse the reader's sense of the book because of a small detail error, because a tree ruins the entire forest, and the gain outweighs the loss, and in the end, the entire book is disgusted. Therefore, the author should first consider the details, then the needs of the plot, and finally the interpretation result. Only in this way can the reader's psychological needs be firmly grasped. Remember that the primary purpose of reading a book is to satisfy the spiritual needs, not just to see what is going on. It is not so much the details that determine success or failure, but the details that are greater than the details. Success or failure, that's it. It's up to you how to do it, but I still want to warn the author: Don't take the book seriously. It is the crystallization of countless revisions. You can see your thoughts and concepts from it. What your wild imagination contains is not groundless, but the final result of countless sweat and hardships.

The biggest shortcoming of this book is that the author did not write it in separate volumes, ah! ! , The experience is extremely poor. But it's still good. Good looking.

The author insists on not having a harem or stud. I personally think this is a breath of fresh air in the variety comics. The author should use some refreshments in the setting. Many people will be interested in the redemption aspect.

I wrote 2 million+ words. Please support me.

I would like to give some suggestions to the author. You should write more positive things, like the dark power you wrote at the beginning. I believe many people will give up the book after reading this. You are writing to comfort others and it is very positive. I hope the author can learn more from Luo Qing's books. The logic is clear and a bit suspenseful, which makes the battle more exciting. This is just my own opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it

Actually, I'm a little confused... Isn't it just a full subscription... How can I become the number one fan base...

To be honest... I didn't read the writing, but the fallen angel bloodline at the beginning really poisoned me. It wouldn't be a big deal if bloodlines such as angels and dragons were obtained later, but at the beginning there would be a feeling that I am reading a novel from countless years ago? This feeling

What the hell, more than 6 million words and less than 2,000 recommendation votes, perseverance is invincible! ! ! Awesome

I'm convinced, this pig's trotter is really not intelligent, he directly gave half of his life energy to the female partner. How much does he want a woman? If this is the case, forget it, but pig's trotter was also a strong man before he was reborn! How did he reach the fifth level without thinking too hard about everything?

More than 4 million words and only 1,000 recommendations, but I haven't even entered the palace yet. It's okay, I have great perseverance, come on, author!

Is there any novel about the human beings in "Pitch Black Bullet", where people are saved from a world that is obviously rubbish, and people who almost die from laughter, whose hearts are already twisted, are not even qualified to save.

The author has amazing perseverance and a sincere attitude, but there is basically no use in the extra chapters. Why not open a new book? Let me talk about a few points: it is not divided into volumes, which looks very confusing; the format of the chapter names is not uniform, which is even more messy; the extra chapters are also confused with the main text, which shows a lack of experience. I hope the author will start a new book and do enough "surface work" to at least make it less confusing. Come on

The author actually persisted for so long? It's amazing. It has more than 4 million words and more than 1,000 recommendation votes and it's still going strong. It's amazing.

I'm a little curious. With more than a thousand chapters and more than four million words, why is the author still a first-rate author?

They are both at the peak of 2 stars. It doesn't matter if the protagonist can't defeat the other party, but they are also abused. In the end, with the addition of 2 star servants, the two of them can barely defeat each other. It seemed good at first, but this time they were really poisoned.

After reading the first chapter, I felt like it wasn't suitable for me. The protagonist doesn't look like a normal person, and it's hard to feel like a real person. Reading is relaxing. He was so serious and dark from the beginning, which was very discouraging.

Passing by, how does the author persevere,, is awesome, uses love to generate electricity, come on, author

I'm convinced, let's divide it into two volumes and give them chapter names.

Even if you don't write chapter names, it would still be troublesome for the author to write a name for each new world. In this way, the results will be better, and it will also make it easier for people to pick out their favorite reading.

6666 Has been around for a few years, 4 years, right? This book is also a weird one. It's a good slap in the front. How do you want me to read it? I can't understand Goodbye.

Five million words... The recommendation votes are around 1,600. I'm really speechless... The author is also amazing.

Can you write some more popular ones? I've only watched the first three