The Sword Fairy Who Travels Through Time and Space

I read a few of them, and they were a bit rubbish. The protagonist lived like a dog in the Cultivation Continent. The swordsman showed his sharp edge without any sharpness. He would have died long ago in reincarnation 🪖

Hong Kong actually fell...

I was speechless. It turns out that a swordsman is a swordsman holding a sword in his hand. As for kendo. As for the sword intention.

Although I don't like the current mainstream hypocrites and ruthless protagonists, the protagonist of this book feels that the Virgin is too much.

At least you have a sense of national responsibility. Writing a book with this mentality will never become popular.

There are several points that are disappointing. The first point is that the so-called Chinese martial arts has not reached its peak and the essence has been written. Vaguely uncomfortable. I was attracted to it because I saw Chinese martial arts, but gave up because I didn't have Chinese martial arts. Second, martial arts cultivation relies on spiritual energy, so this cannot be the world of martial arts. This is actually cultivation of immortality. It makes martial arts eclipse a lot. Third, the span of time travel is too big. The second world is even more speechless because it is foreign. I just skipped it without watching it. The third world is actually Tianlong. How many people can accept this span? The writing of Guoshu is not exciting enough, and it feels like it is perfunctory. Tianlong looks even more terrifying to me. The protagonist goes to study the so-called Beiming Magical Skills when he appears, and then pretends to be an immortal and goes to the Infinite Sword Sect. It's not exciting at all, and there's even less anticipation. To be honest, if your writing of Chinese martial arts is truly wonderful, a lot of people may love Chapter 2: Crossing Dragon and Snake. It's a pity that the second chapter is actually a robot. If you wrote Chapter 3 about Xiaoao, a lot more people would watch it, even the movie version would be good. As a result, you come directly to Tianlong. So I really don't have any expectations.

I didn't want to read it at the beginning. It was written that the sword immortal could make elixirs and weapons, and was said to be different from other sword immortals. Later, I saw betrayal. A dick who had a Madonna attack and was reborn through time was unexpectedly plotted without any precautions. It was so poisonous.

I only read the first two volumes and couldn't stand it any longer. Then I looked at the names of the remaining volumes. Good guy, the Sword Immortal must be at least ten volumes away. Is this considered a Sword Immortal? If I keep writing this way, I will become a Sword Immortal, and I won't even have 180 volumes.

The word betrayal makes me lose interest.

I started skipping about halfway through it, and I probably understood what the problem was. Author, you don't have an outline, do you? I write whatever comes to my mind. It is disorganized, the system is unclear, and the plot is not outstanding. It is all based on your personal opinion. How do you feel about the plot and how can you modify it randomly according to your personal preferences. But you have to know that what you like may not be what everyone likes. What you want to complain about the most is the world plot, Advanced World and The system of the lower world is completely unclear, and it is almost unbearable to watch, so there is a reason for the poor performance. You should read more about the shuttle articles written by others, how to plan the system, plan for growth, write an outline before writing the article, and whether you have thought more about the character and behavior of the characters in the plot.

If you can't read it or write it, don't write that way.

Dying and weak, he sat up in shock, another short and weak update!

Why isn't it updated? Why do we need eunuchs? ? ? ?

"The Magic Way of Time" has passed by since then!

What the hell, another licking dog who admires foreign things.

The best among the garbage, the fighter among the garbage.

When I saw the name of the protagonist, I stopped reading.

Is Volume 2 Mechanical Enemy or Resident Evil?

It's not very poisonous, it's slightly poisonous. Many times the author himself doesn't understand the division of his own abilities and starts writing randomly. He just writes whatever comes to his mind. The writing is like a running account, the plot has its ups and downs, but in the author's writing, it feels like he went there and did what he did before going there again. The main character's name is Li Chenglong, um, then it's just called Dragon... I can't complain anymore.

The main character's name has the same name as my cousin's

Second Battalion Commander, bring my Italian Trooper!

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