Wanjie Express

Isn't it a big mistake to use the original protagonist's behavior or plot points to steal the original protagonist's woman before the original protagonist? ? ? I have seen this fic before, where the whole process was about trying to gain favorability points from Touma, and then Sister Pao and others threw themselves into her arms, which made me feel sick. Although because I like the female characters in certain works, it is unavoidable to write original fan fiction. But at least find another way to solve it. This approach is too utilitarian and feels like treating the original heroine as an object. And the plot will lack new ideas, because these are the same things the original male protagonist did. Moreover, there is a big difference between subconscious behavior and deliberate behavior. I hope the author will not deliberately use plot advantages, golden thigh advantages, and the character flaws of the original male protagonist to set up traps or frame the original male protagonist, because I have seen this kind of thing too many times, and it often occurs together with the favorability incident. I remembered a rebirth novel I read before. Pig's Foot copied Conan in a hurry and used legal means and public opinion to force the original author to death. Then the author washed it out with long paragraphs of text, causing all the rebirth articles I read now to be a little too serious. Of course, the above are all personal opinions, I am just a suggestion. After all, not everyone cares about this kind of plot.

I feel like I chose the wrong category. It should be science fiction. This is a minor problem. I feel that the plot progress is a bit slow, and the individual chapters are a bit long-winded. I found the monthly exam part so boring, and I skipped it a bit boringly after those years. I believe you will not starve to death if you don't eat for 10 days, but if you don't drink water, you will die. This is not a big or small loophole. Just watch and correct it. We have read too many books about stealing the protagonist's wife. I hope the author can write a line instead of inexplicably throwing himself into his arms. My personal opinion when reading the book is that the main character should not be too mean-spirited, it may be due to personal taste. Now that you have the potential to save the world, prepare to be brave enough to save the world. When the time comes, go to the world of great changes such as The Lord of the Rings and pretend to be a tragic hero. You have positive energy.

This isn't express delivery at all. It's clearly a piece of writing about a carefree, idiotic guy who goes around picking up girls and getting upgraded. He just fell in love with a heroine and then left her without any trace of her. Moreover, after Zhujiao had lived for so many years, it felt as if his life had been in vain.

When I first started watching it, I thought it started off pretty well. The protagonist was considered a successful person before his rebirth. At least he wasn't some loser who achieved nothing without working hard and somehow got a golden finger!

Isn't it a part of the senior high school entrance examination to prepare for graduation? It's a magical high school. . .

I just found out that it was updated, and I thought you were overthinking it.

Alas, the book written by Fellow Taoist is so profound that I can't understand it. Alas, it seems that I have no connection with Fellow Daoist's book.

Late-night commercials, newcomers are on the shelves without recommendations, "The Legend of the Immortal Dragon God", the Western dragon does not change shape, the alien beast stream

It scared me to death. What the hell is wrong with my wife! ! !

I would like to recommend Sansheng's work "The Great Wilderness of the Gods" The sea of blood stains the world, and the years are chaotic. The ancient tribes have passed down ancient myths from generation to generation, the restricted areas of life guard the ulterior secrets, the gods from the heavens have come to the world one by one, and the ancestors who have escaped from the world slowly wake up... What you see when you open your eyes is boundless darkness, what you reach out to touch is the tomb coffin of life and death. He raised his head and asked Changtian, does the fairy still exist? Ask again, is the sky infinite?

It's too poisonous. The protagonist's IQ is not as good as that of a 15-year-old, right?

Think about it before writing, and write without even thinking about the outline! Why do you think the rules are so confusing?

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