Ship Girl Under the Starry Sky

Eve Confessor-class destroyer... Starship... Maybe the tonnage is larger than the Yamato class... Why don't you go to heaven?

After reading a few chapters, the beautiful character of the ship girl was not written at all, it was all a mess of settings.

Did something happen to the author? Do you want to prepare some incense for him in advance?

Disgusting people all the time.

I didn't expect you to be such Ruochen

Meteorites from outer space can be used as resources, red. Is this Red Econo Rock? If there is a mineral belt in this world, then if you have a mine gun, you can mine in outer space. But the question comes again, how to do chemical mineralization and production? Does the garrison have this function?

When incense is burned, mushrooms grow on the tombs! !

I'm back to visit graves again. 2020.10.6 Night

As I was typing this review, I knew I was going to be trolled by some die-hard fans. But I still have to defend myself. After all, the core of this book review is praise and affirmation. To be honest, this book is very poisonous, not that it is poisonous at the beginning, but it seems very poisonous at the beginning. If I have to say it, it's a fantasy fairy tale. I don't know if it's because the author has written fantasy fairy tales, but the first few chapters didn't feel comfortable at all when I read it. His mind is full of things like cleansing the menstruation and cutting the marrow, fighting against Douluo and so on. The setting is not necessarily very novel, and the writing is not particularly good. Coupled with the poor style in my opinion, it is really hard to swallow as a commercial web article. But. Everyone who sees this, please calm down. I have read a lot of Qidian articles, and have covered a lot of them, including military, history, science fiction, urban, rebirth, romance, martial arts, online games, immortality, fantasy, and all kinds of articles. So I know very well that there are many authors who start well but fail to finish, and there are also many authors who have a bumpy start but persevere and write more and more like gods. Then I read Chapter 100, Chapter 200, Chapter 300, Chapter 400, Chapter 500, Chapter 600. I believe that if you read it every 100 times, you can always see the changes between the lines of the author's words. So I was disappointed. Because the author's writing has not changed much, it can only be said that it has become more mature, unlike the beginning, which was just mechanical. But. This is another twist. I still want to give the author a thumbs up?. It's really not easy to persist until now. More mature writing may seem useless, but it is crucial. The subject matter is ship girl, the writing style is fantasy and immortality. In fact, it is difficult to change these two things, and if you change them, it is easy to lose more than the gain. At this time, mature, or proficient, writing greatly adds points to this book. If the previous chapters are like old gears, then the chapters written by the author after he becomes proficient are like pouring lubricant into them. Became very good. In short, this is a ship girl novel with a fantasy writing style. People who like it will like it, and people who don't have a cold will basically ignore it. In fact, this is also true. The audience of Kanniang is history, military, two-dimensional, and maybe science fiction, but the audience of fantasy is inconsistent with the historical military that focuses on reality. Naturally, a history geek like me would not be interested in this article. But for those who like shipgirls and fantasy, I do recommend it. In addition, even if you are not into fantasy, this book is a good ship girl novel. Of course, if you hate fantasy or are a history geek like me, it's better to read with caution. Don't troll me. Please like, comment, and pin it to the top. No more shame. Don't worry, at least let the author see it and let him know that I only eat (manually funny) his.

To be honest, the writing is so bad🤐🤐🤐

Does anyone have a complete copy? This book is so incomplete that I can no longer keep it and read it. If you have it, can you share it with me?

No hatred, it's purely because the author turned a first-rate text into a subpar thing with second-rate writing and third-rate conception. This book is a public enemy in the eyes of any author who writes about shipgirl novels. Not only is it poorly written, but it also has thousands of chapters. I'll teach you a way to tell whether a book is good or not by counting the number of chapters. Divided by the number of discussions, as long as the ratio reaches 1:5, it is a good book. 1:3 Is solid food. 1:1 Can not guarantee the quality. If it is less than 1, it cannot be read. As long as there are no trolls maliciously swiping the quantity, you can basically judge it according to this. In addition, books older than one year are for reference only. After all, we need to compare the situation at that time.

It's best to read this novel with your brain out. Just looking at the setting is pretty good. Although it's a eunuch, there are still a thousand chapters to read. That's enough. Let's use love to generate electricity...

When you burn incense, the grass on the grave is already three hundred meters high.

RT, I have been completing secondary missions recently. I was born in the Amarr Empire with a background setting. I used the Confession skills pointed out by my brain. I equipped a ship and ran to do secondary missions. I had nothing to do but read novels on my mobile phone. I accidentally clicked in. When I saw the introduction, I felt inexplicably visual... When I clicked in, it turned out to be a tactical driver. I stared blankly at the confession on the screen... I was meowing. Is this considered fate?

Chapter 1001, I suddenly realized that this book is already the third in terms of the number of words among Qidian Jian Niang novels, and is only 100,000 words away from the second. Hmm, maybe it's also the third one that has more than a thousand chapters?

In EVE, the Empire and the Republic are feuding. Confession is now always working for the Empire or something, and he is obviously a die-hard Amarr. If T3 recruits a big labor country and expels Manguo for the sake of the Republic, will these two fight? Both are T3 expulsions, who is more powerful?

A thousand chapters, it's not easy at all!

If there is a situation where ship girls hurt admirals out of shame and anger, it first means that the law cannot punish them, and it also means that ship girls can be induced and coaxed to kill people and destroy buildings. Then there must be admirals who are more interested in human civil war and occupation of political power than fighting in the deep sea. Moreover, if the artificial ship girl is a little selfish, she can easily assassinate her by firing a few shots at the Governor's Mansion. I have always felt that in many ship girl novels, there is a very serious flaw in the setting of "what happens if a ship girl kills someone". First of all, if humans had the force to fight against the ship girls, they would have gone into the deep sea themselves. If humans can't fight against the shipgirls, then why didn't the shipgirls take over human power? The answer can only be that they don't want to do it or can't do it. If you just don't want to enslave human beings, then if you provoke them, you can let them bomb you and the target buildings or people. It is too convenient to carry out terrorist attacks. Such dangerous elements who carry naval guns through security checks must not be allowed to enter the city. In my opinion, the government's restrictions on ship girls are too small. What if an admiral wants to force a ship girl to become the king when transporting goods? What if the ship girl breaks the law and then violently resists law enforcement? What if the ship girls were passive and refused to obey orders during a critical battle, how could the admiral alone deal with them? What if someone uses Kan Niang to participate in the struggle for political power? It can be imagined that unless Kanji is unable to harm humans under any circumstances, the social system of Kanji's world must be completely different from reality. Kanji is either a gangster or a slave, and peaceful coexistence is really unrealistic.

Please update more chapters! Author! ???

Repenting and becoming a ship girl can be understood as the original confession was damaged in the battle, and the soul state became a ship girl; dissatisfaction with the slot can be understood as being dropped, the green equipment was picked up, and the black equipment came with the confession; equipment damage can be understood as the repentance of the fallen battle opened the overload, making the equipment super broken. But I can't understand why you are equipped with two civilian mining guns. After all, it's T3. Even if it's not a powerful official outfit, why should it be a T2 outfit? What the hell are you carrying two civilian mine guns? If you want to use civilian mine guns, you can just use the Empire.

Do you have it? Do you have it? Do you have it? Say important things three times

A thousand chapters to commemorate, welcome to take photos downstairs. Also, I got the Gothic Lion in my daily mission. Is it a new ship? I want the 505. Please ask for the metaphysical formula. The standard formula for me is all 125_(•̀ω•́ ‖∠)_

But there is too much nonsense in this writing style. You can't write like this if you drag out the word count. Many psychological descriptions and dialogues have no practical value. For example, on the battlefield, they were stunned and stunned casually, their reprimands and contempt were too deliberate, and so much time wasted was all due to their nonsense. Their various jokes and banter also gave a feeling that they did not take life safety seriously, giving people the impression that these admirals are very unreliable.

Suddenly I'm curious, what equipment does Penance have now?

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