Sin Becomes Evil

What I say below are my own opinions on the book. The first point is that when I first started writing it, I felt that it was written from the heart, but later on I had to explain a lot. It feels like the more you explain, it's like being in the Fengyun world. The more you explain in the Fengyun world, the more confusing it becomes. The first point is that it feels like you've been led astray. The more you explain, you can't write from your heart. Once you explain this, well, you can't write from your heart. When you write, the feeling you want to write is different from what you think in your heart. It is equivalent to a beautiful woman whose sword demon made trouble to her once, but she can also make trouble. Originally, the devil has no scruples, but later you feel that trouble once and it seems that you can't make trouble anymore, and then it goes wrong. The second point is that your explanation is so unsatisfactory, and you just said that you can write some things that cannot be written during the fight. It is too long-winded, which is more troublesome for book lovers. The first part of Jin Yiwei is good, but the second one is too long-winded. If the latter part is verbose, then there will be too many words in it, which will make the reader irritable and not in the mood to read. My suggestion is that you feel free to write whatever you want, but you can write whatever you want? But if you have a little bit of logic, you can explain it a little bit, but you can't bring it. If it's too deep, you will be equivalent to this thing that is equivalent to Nuwa's mending stone. You explain this from the beginning to the end, and you can just mention it. You also mention that she is Nuwa's prey. Just mention it a little bit and don't explain too much. It's okay. If you explain too much, you'll be verbose. As long as you don't mess up the logic, just a little bit of logic will be enough. It's equivalent to thinking about what a normal person would do, huh? Anyway, we just read the novel directly. We are ordinary people. Normal people read novels, both good and evil. There are many aspects in the story of "Sin Becomes a Demon". You can be unscrupulous, but you can't be too similar to yourself. At least you have a bottom line in your heart, which is equivalent to that, but you can't be too kind. It's equivalent to what you saw when Dao Huang went to Huang to ask for the secret book. That woman is their daughter. You can say that this beauty is beautiful, so beautiful. Everyone has a love for beauty. You don't need to explain so much. After explaining what is written later, it will feel like you are pretending to be gloomy and old-school. You can release yourself, which is equivalent to bleeding. Don't be so old-school and just do whatever you want. Or it's equivalent to when the woman stops you from grabbing the secret book, you can kill her. If not, does the Holy Mother mean that you have strength? You can do whatever you want, and it's okay to be cruel. The first one you wrote was about Jin Yiwei, that person who lives in cruelty can't do anything. When you see the previous one, you can pretend to be serious. You can make that person feel like an 80 to 100 person, so you can't make trouble like this. You can't be limited by that. You have to write as casually as you want, which is equivalent to a cruel character in Jin Yiwei, but people do what they do. It's not too cruel. There is no distinction between good and bad. You can be more cruel, but there is a bottom line to measure it. If you don't have the strength, you can write as many plans as someone in their 80s. What you can write is that you have a developed brain but are not very smart. Then you can write if you have the strength and can overcome the pressure. In this way, you can write as you like, as long as you don't explain too much. Even if you want to explain it, just make a separate one. Don't write it in the book. Many readers will explain this explanation for this reason and run away because they feel it's boring. Do you understand? The above are my personal bad reviews of this book. Please forgive me.

In the first world, Jin Yiwei, after more than ten years, became the world's only emperor. After returning to reality, his behavior instantly dropped several levels. He had to do it himself to kill people. Wouldn't he spend the gold after selling it? Don't you want to cultivate your power? Apart from the plot outline, the most important thing about whether a book is good or not is the details. If the details are good, readers will be willing to recharge for the book and keep up with the updates.

In fact, it's okay. There are a lot of flabbergasted authors who are useless no matter how much they update. When compared with others, your book is just inferior in terms of updates. I can feel happy because the book I wrote is quite good and is recognized by many book friends. At least I didn't see any scolding in the book reviews.

Author, you must persevere, I just like to see you writing so hard that no one has read it.

In addition, when you want to kill someone, you can just kill them with one knife. To be more concise, you don't need to mention that it's boring to hit them back and forth. When fighting against masters, you can write more, but you can't write too dryly. You can just write about it. When it comes to the little monster or the main character, you can only write it in one second. You can't write too verbosely.

I abandoned the first world. The timeline is too long. Nearly 10 years. Why does a world that can be defeated by one person's force with one shot take so long?

I don't want to watch the Captain America aspect if I watch it

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When I wrote about Marvel's Captain America, I started to not want to read it, especially since the system said that I had to collect 6 Infinity Stones before I could leave. Is Pigfoot satisfied with the reward of 1.5 Million and a lottery after completion? I'm confused. Is Pigfoot too arrogant about his abilities? In the last low-level martial arts world, I got more than 3 million. In such a high-level world, can I be satisfied with 1.5 Million for completing such a difficult task? Is it possible to draw something better than 6 infinite gems in a lottery? You have to know that there are a lot of people in the Marvel world who can easily kill a pig's trotters, not to mention Thanos and the gods behind him. I feel that the pig's trotters have lower IQs after they have passed through a world, or they become more arrogant?

When it comes to Marvel, the simplest thing to say is that the protagonist is dissatisfied with the system! I really don't know why. Haven't you authors read the book? Or not even the simplest Chengfu? There is no need to express what you have written! We are readers with God's perspective. The system gives you a life. Some people are really not grateful. This is okay. After all, everyone is different. You can become a demon, but there is no need to show it. You can be the protagonist and take control directly. Will it make you appear more intelligent?

It's been so long in the first world and you don't know how to change the inner strength secrets to practice first? Besides, why are you going to Xiaoao? Is it better to strengthen the strength and sell cheats to Tianlong? In addition, there are so many sin points that you can use to strengthen your strength and save them for laying eggs. Wouldn't it be good for you to practice your martial arts if you change your physique and mental powers?

When I wrote about Jin Yiwei, I did write well, but later on I can only say it was terrible! The most attractive thing is the mentality in the first chapter. I think the main character is a smart guy! Unfortunately, once we enter the real world, things start to get miserable.

In fact, I skipped the part about Xiao Ao and went straight to the return, because I could choose Xiao Ao independently. It felt a little crazy, but then I saw the system was upgraded inexplicably, and I became a slave owner after greedy a million pig feet! What the hell! Does the author think this book is too good, or does the author feel that pig's feet are too comfortable? Abandon the book decisively

Everyone can actively comment here on what world the protagonist wants to go to!

The beginning of this book has a strong persuasive effect.

There is a novel called Sin Becomes a God, which is also very good.

I saw in the book review section that many book friends said they don't like martial arts, and that martial arts sucks for everyone. Please give your opinions. If you don't like martial arts, please post the world you want to visit! The world with the most candidates was requisitioned. Of course, the world that is too powerful for the time being does not want it. The protagonist is still too weak and cannot keep up with the rhythm of the world

Pixiu is a ferocious auspicious beast. Since it is a major evil system, it is more in line with the content of the book to replace it with Qiongqi, who punishes good and promotes evil.

[Fn=2_3]Do you think there is a need for a heroine? Or a harem?