Mortal Song

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How beautiful, the result, alas :-(

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This novel can be said to be unique among the Xianxia novels currently available at Qidian. Because this novel is very similar to a traditional fairy tale in terms of style. There are no popular upgrading schools, there are no elixirs and useless mortals, and there are no golden fingers that are too heaven-defying. In fact, there are certain reasons why those fairy novels are so good. The traditional writing style of this Mortal Song is very good, but I hope the author can also consider adding some current popular routines. I believe that in that case the novel will definitely be better-reading. After all, the traditional classic Xianxia style, coupled with the current popular routines—— Speaking of routines, let me talk about a plot routine that I like. Although it is not deep, it is one that I like very much. It can be written that some of Shen Fei's enemies dislike Shen Fei, but they don't know Shen Fei's true strength. Some of them look down on Shen Fei and feel that they can destroy Shen Fei with one move. Then he verbally provoked Shen Fei in all kinds of ways in front of a bunch of people, and then Shen Fei confronted him unceremoniously. Then other people who also didn't know Shen Fei's true strength thought to themselves that Shen Fei was really out of his mind, and he would definitely be unlucky now, etc. In short, everyone did not think highly of Shen Fei. Then the two of them took action, and Shen Fei easily crushed his opponent, shocking the audience! Of course, some of Shen Fei's hidden powers, such as the Qi Swallowing Mountains and Rivers scroll, cannot be used in front of everyone. He doesn't need to use such powerful means to face those small characters, right? The above are just some of my own thoughts and suggestions. I hope the author can make this novel more and more beautiful.

If Junru Mo dies within ten chapters, the number of fans of this book will increase

1. Hahahaha! Finally collected seven dragon balls! Shenlong: I can grant you a wish. Me: I want an Aladdin's lamp. Aladdin: I can grant you three wishes, tell me! Me: First, I am richer than Jack Ma. Second, give me a god-level girl. Third, I want seven dragon balls. Shenlong: I can grant you a wish. Me: I want another Aladdin's lamp. . . Shenlong: MD, it's you again!

Speaking of why the two protagonists changed their names, Shao Baiyu → Fang Baiyu, Shen Fei → Ye Fei, I didn't notice it at first, but when I thought about it carefully, I realized that it wasn't right, there seemed to be a slight difference 😥, so why?

I barely made it to chapter 12, I can't stand it anymore, it's too toxic

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It's a good book. The protagonist Shen Fei and the supporting characters are all clearly portrayed with distinctive characteristics. Please give it a thumbs up and support.

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There are eight million words promised, come and write the second part

Are there any novels with multiple protagonists that you can recommend, not romance novels?

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The author is very thoughtful. In fact, gods and demons can become gods and demons with just one thought.

The plot was a bit slow at the beginning, but after reading a few chapters I felt it was okay. I hope the author will update well and continue reading. The author should not leave us young readers in the middle of the update.

The character Shen Fei was brought to life by the author. He is not a cold-blooded person, he is affectionate and kind, neither cruel nor killing.

I have watched various scenes over the years, but I was still amazed by the plot.

Amidst the many hardships, Shen Fei indeed became more courageous and courageous with every setback, without any fear.

The large brush strokes are concise and clean, and look comfortable and smooth. It often only takes a few strokes to outline a realistic picture like ink.

The writing is getting better and better, thank you very much.

I like the writing on this subject! Big cheers for the author!

Looking at it now, this article feels clean and not greasy!

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I read many chapters in one go, and I like the male protagonist. After reading it, I was filled with emotion, alas, it's not easy for men.

Very good writing skills, clear ideas, distinctive characters, and will not be forgotten for a long time after reading.

The books written by Xiaoyao Dada are really getting better and better. I think I should have become a big fan of Xiaoyao Dada, because I love reading the books you post more and more. I remember that when you first wrote your first book, your writing style was still a little immature, but the setting of the story is more exciting than that. Every step of the plot, you have made a quick foreshadowing that is not obvious but can make everyone like it. For example, after reading it, I have a very clear impression of the plot and the main characters, as if it were a documentary. When it comes to this book, I personally feel that the writing style and writing style have made great progress and improvement. The starting point is all word tweets, like the current book, which is three words, very good and practical, and the title of the book, Song of the World, very clearly explains the origin of the author and what the environment is like. Fan. Life always has to move from the ordinary to the extraordinary to be meaningful. The growth of our male protagonist Shen Fei is obvious to all. Sometimes I feel a little regretful that the author does not have many emotional scenes. Although there are many female characters, Shen Fei does not seem to be in a hurry for success at the moment, which makes people feel unsure. I always feel that Shen Fei has been immersed under the guidance of the medicine man for a long time. Although his kind-hearted nature must be difficult to change, he is a decisive person. Whenever he faces a vicious enemy, his attitude is just like Da Da said shortly after the beginning of the chapter. He will not be merciful. This kind of him is both admirable and heart-wrenching. Fortunately, he is a wise man. Facing all forces and opponents, he can always perform with ease every time, which is quite satisfying. Cheers, author, your books are getting better and better.

The male protagonist's daily progress and changes are obvious to everyone, and it is really enjoyable to watch.