Enlightened Person

I haven't been to the starting point since 2 years ago. I planned to see if my online writing level has improved in the past two days, so I just clicked and took a look. While the routines of other online novels have made no progress compared to a few years ago, this book is so high that I don't know where it is. It made me burst into tears and filled with emotion. Generally, when reading a book, you can look at three aspects: plot, characters, and world. The three are related but also different. Generally speaking, third-rate novels describe the plot, second-rate novels describe the characters, and first-rate novels describe the world. Of course, this does not mean that first-class novels have no plot. Usually novels still have to tell a story and tell the story well. But if there was only plot, there would be rape of IQ. Next, I will praise this book in more detail and criticize popular online articles. This review is not objective in any way and is very personal. I will not be held responsible for any deviations. First of all, the plot is full of twists and turns rather than baffling. We can know this by looking at other online articles, upgrade - fight monsters - upgrade - adventure - upgrade. To put it simply, it is to become stronger for the sake of becoming stronger. This point must be mentioned about the audience of online articles. People who read online articles are often people who are looking for something fun. This upgrade model is simple and brainless, and it is popular. It is understandable, but in the eyes of people with a little brain or a little experience, it is really not worth mentioning. Looking at this book again, the narrative technique of this book is interspersed with multiple shots, and the mentality is not designed for the purpose of pretending to be B. I don't want to upgrade in the first place, so naturally I will not write an upgrade article. Under this premise, it is possible to write about intelligent people. Second, the characters have flesh and blood. What are people like? If we observe people in the real world, we will find that people are very complex, and there are traces to follow. You can guess a person's living conditions and habits by looking at the way he walks, the clothes he wears, and the words he uses when talking. Although the guess may be wrong, the more people watch it, the more likely they are to be inseparable. And importantly, there are no idiots who appear out of thin air. It is hard to imagine that a person who grew up in a normal family would not know how to behave. Most online books don't care about this, so their books only have plots and no characters! When an author designs a character, if he does not think about how the character was born or grew up, but only regards him as a tool to complete the plot, the character will disappear. Therefore, what we see is passerby A, character A. It is also difficult for us to imagine what kind of environment would produce such talents with brain circuits that are different from ordinary people. Of course, it's very difficult to design a perfect character like this, so it must be left blank. Finally, the world comes alive. Let's talk about white space here. Generally, upgrade articles like to give several levels and levels at the beginning. This has many disadvantages. 1. Once you give these things, the world is set. Which bosses need to be fought and when the protagonist is powerful are all laid out on the table. If you want to design a plot on a sudden, it will appear very stiff. 2. Destroy the novelty of readers. Since readers know these levels from the beginning, the space for imagination is much smaller. How did this information appear? How do we know such a thing? What good does it do us to know such a thing? Many people don't want this, so they just throw out these settings. As a result, the protagonist also knows these things inexplicably. Please note that the current world information is also a resource, and it is the most important resource. This kind of essential understanding of the world can be known to the protagonist, which is really powerful. 3. Guide yourself to upgrade. Since the levels are here, good or bad has already been determined. All you need to do is move in the "good" direction step by step. Many authors also like to add narration to explain what is good and what is bad, and the protagonist also moves towards the so-called right path tacitly. It is absolutely not advisable to lower your style. 4. I mentioned characters before. Many authors write characters to create a successor to a certain family or a royal family, and then challenge the protagonist. These people often have backgrounds and no brains. It is hard for us to imagine why people from such a family would do such stupid things. If you think about reality for a moment, you will know that this is impossible. This is just because I don't have enough writing power to force myself to pretend to be B.

The book is a good book, but it is a pity that the author uses multiple perspectives to write it, and his writing skills are not good enough. The stories from each perspective cannot be well connected, so most readers are a little confused. It's a pity, it's a pity, this book could have become a small hit

I have rarely been involved in male videos, and I feel that I can rarely express that kind of emotion in a delicate way, especially to girls. Like most female videos about boys, they are rigid, rigid, and single. But the author's writing is amazing, figuring out the character's heart step by step. At least in the first chapter, the description of the woman is really great, very smart, and vivid. In the first chapter, you can capture a lot of information, which makes you interested in reading. Like the male protagonist, it feels like he came from time and space. It should be from time and time. It should be another story about Xiami Xiami. Jiangzi, come on. Although I have only read a few chapters, I can tell that this is a good article. [Fn=2_3]

Author, if you want to write a book from multiple perspectives, no problem. But don't write so much about a supporting character who suddenly appears, okay? It's really tiring to read like this. The protagonist disappears for ten chapters before reappearing and then disappears for another dozen chapters. You will really be disappointed if you do this. The narrative of the first two hundred chapters is not bad! But the last chapter contains almost all the biographies of the supporting characters. What the readers want to see is the protagonist. I guess the author wants to write it like a movie, but have you ever seen a movie in which the protagonist is so quick to make soy sauce? At least not that blockbuster movie. And the author, don't you always complain to make money? To put it bluntly, this article is not a painting by Van Gogh or a sculpture by Rodin. The only way to go is to make it enjoyable for the general public. If you are so cool and noble, don't complain about why there are so few subscriptions. If you don't cater to the majority of readers, then you can't make money from them. I'm not telling authors to write trivial articles, but I want to change their thinking. Have you noticed that Mao Qiang, Lao Qiang, Banana and the others are noobs? No, then why is it so popular? I hope you, the author, will think about it carefully. I can't stop complaining. I'm dying. I really want to write thousands of words. Forget it, my hand is about to break. I'm so tired of typing on my mobile phone (ಥ_ಥ)

I would like to ask the author if he is feeling better. If he feels better, he can consider updating.

Wen who is used to putting on airs and being indecisive!

What a crappy thing I wrote, I have no idea what the protagonist is going to do, it's dark, but it's meaningless! The Laji novel has been tested, so I recommend you not to read it!

The writing style of this book is very good and top-notch But I really don't understand Write a story Why do you write it here and there? ? I'm exhausted from reading it. You can forget about one or two stories written in this way. The whole text is full of this kind of multi-perspective! ! There are more than two perspectives. Sometimes they can be divided into 4 or 5! ! I'm wondering if you can just finish the story! No? No way!

It's a pity that the writing was scrapped, but I have the potential to become a great god again

I saw a review that said, "Theoretically, everyone in the book is mentally ill." I felt the same way after reading a few chapters. A few sect elders didn't have many bright minds, a maid didn't respect the master at all, and a protagonist was described as "mature" in the front, but his hands shook when he mentioned his name. Haha, in reality, an ordinary person can do better than the protagonist.

The author's writing is pretty good, but the author's narrative seems to have poor rhythm control. It always stops at the climax and changes the perspective, which is very disgusting. In fact, if the author describes from multiple perspectives, the change is still too fast, and things look a bit messy.

It's very simple at the beginning. Now that I've regained some strength, why don't I build my own force instead of asking others to forcefully add the plot? How many stories can there be in a human relationship? This book is on the dark book list.

Does the author stop writing books? It was well written before 😭

It is a very well-written novel, which is rare and can be ranked in the top 5% of the best.

Let me just say a few words. Many people in other buildings said that they couldn't stand it after reading the first part of it. I think it is very well written and breaks away from the scope of a novice novel. The first 200 chapters can be regarded as gods, really. But! What the hell is going on after Chapter 200? It seems like the author is too busy. Since entering the underworld, the style of the book has changed to a heavenly book. The protagonist who was the best choice in terms of wit, layout, and strength in the previous 200 chapters suddenly lost all his advantages. The situation, the nonsense written in Huangquan World makes no sense. If you have to be busy at home, you should stop and finish your work before coming back to write. You have to maintain the level of this book for the first 200 chapters. Your strength is definitely enough to become a god. Even if you are not famous, you can still lay the foundation for fame. Next This book is absolutely a hit. After 200 chapters, you are shooting yourself in the foot. There is no more writing for this book. Stop it. Either start a new book or rewrite it after 200 chapters. As long as the quality is guaranteed, I fully support you (previously) I was really shocked when I read this book. I felt that I had finally found something. The other books were all read at a glance, but I read this book very slowly. I also subscribed later, but after the 200th chapter, I really didn't know what you were writing.) I am angry that I will not fight. Alas, I have to spend several months looking for food and grass.

It's pretty good-looking, but it's a bit literary, and why is he a eunuch?

🤭🤭Not bad

The content introduction is good, keep it first 😃

A big devil who was tired of the whirlpool of all living beings lived in seclusion in Baiyun City in a medicine shop called Baicaotang to avoid the hustle and bustle of the world. Oneself, heaven and earth, and all living beings! This is the story of an enlightened man! Change to Oneself, heaven and earth, and all living beings! This is the story of an enlightened man! Should be better

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The opening chapter is very interesting, but the switching of perspectives really makes the eyes tired. Author, do you know about the global fantasy era? Like you, I like to cut the camera. It's a pity that I'm a eunuch, but your writing is better than him.

Life is lonely like spring snow, and a sword shines cold light on nineteen states.

The author likes to use multiple shots to advance the plot, and he manages it well. The writing style is above average at the starting point, but should he consider the characteristics of online articles a little, and whether the multiple shots are a bit too much. The description of the supporting characters has exceeded twice the coverage of the protagonist, and the propaganda It's over the top. When it's free, I probably won't see anything. If I don't like it, I can skip it. But if you subscribe and write like this, it's a bit overwhelming. The author himself also said that you have to support your family and squeeze in time to write. Don't be willful, because it's meaningless.

If you book lovers like it, please ask the author to vote for Sanjiang😃