Ace Pitcher

Just take a look: Indeed, there are very few people who understand baseball, and even fewer people read baseball novels. At this time, you need to make the most of your strengths and avoid your weaknesses, or write a fanfic. I think there are quite a few fanfics for Aces of Diamonds, but not for Major League Baseball. Originally, I thought there were a lot of gimmicks in anime, but after watching the real Koshien, I found that Japanese anime don't exaggerate very much about the projects they are good at, and they exaggerate all the things they are not good at. Someone like Shohei Ohtani, who throws hard and hits hard, runs fast, and has good striking skills, is a proper hexagonal fighter. After arriving in the major leagues, he came out of underestimation, and then got injured and came out again. He is a proper protagonist, and he is also very handsome. This year's Koshien has a defeated No. 2 Catcher ace, and he has 4 bats and 4 knives. We see a lot of people with 2 swords, but those with 4 swords are really rare. There should be a future in professional baseball, but it's a pity that they lost in the second round. In fact, the novel has a separate column, system data flow. I estimate that this type of novel, except for online game novels, will collapse when applied to other types of novels. Looking at the combat power value of Dragon Ball and the power value of pirates, the author abandoned it halfway. It will collapse too easily. I'm definitely not as good as the author when it comes to writing novels, but I've definitely read as many novels as the author. The first three chapters of the novel should be attractive. To be honest, your work does not have that. Internet novels are very taboo in developing slowly. Many people decide whether to continue reading after reading one or two chapters. Sports novels are relatively niche, and baseball is even more niche within a niche. You can refer to Takehiko Inoue's Slam Dunk. The total length is only 6 games, and the rest are covered in one stroke. The 6 games account for 70% of the length, and the rest is daily life. And to be honest, these 6 games are the evolution of the protagonist group. The protagonist of your novel says at the beginning that he has strong motor skills, but in reality he is only a little stronger. Look at how powerful Sakuragi Hanamichi's cheats are. For a layman, he just started studying in April, and in August he can compete with the number one team in the country in the national competition. This speed of evolution is the cheat given by the author. After Goro Shigeno in Major League Baseball lost his dominant hand, he developed his left hand and was still able to reach 160 mph. In Ace of Diamonds, the two protagonists, Eijun plays a happy baseball game and only knows the basic rules, while Sogo is a complete layman. But the author installed a plug-in for them, and in the end they made incredible progress. Since they are powerful and dominate the county, there is no need to write too much about the regional competition, and it is not a fierce battle zone like Osaka and Tokyo. Many sports novels make the mistake of writing a running account. Every game is written in great detail, which is too tiring to read. Moreover, it has no routine at all and is out of touch with life. In fact, the reality of Koshien is more bizarre than anime. For example, in 2014 Seiryo scored 8 points in the second half of the 9th inning to reverse the victory. For example, Kanazunong was the runner-up in Xia League in 2018. Ace Yoshida Teruhei beat an unknown team to the national runner-up with strong shots and strong play, and finally entered the professional world. It is equivalent to a school like Shohoku that won in a row and lost to the national hegemon Sanno Industry in the finals. Kanazunong defeated Omi with a 2-point bye hit and sacrifice, and finally lost to Osaka Kirin. , And Datong became the first team to dominate the league twice in spring and summer. For example, in the match between Xingling and Jimei in 2018, they took a big lead at the beginning, but the ace was injured in the 4th game. They relied on relays all the way to lead by 6 points in the 7th game. Then Jimei's miracle He scored 8 points in an ordinary inning and went ahead 9-7. Xingling scored 2 points in the 9th inning to tie the game and extended it to 13 innings. Xingling went ahead 11-9 and Jimei's weak bat hit 13 times. Koshien's first bases-loaded comeback and a bye home run. Reality is stranger than anime, what great material. Seiryo's ace Kyoshin Okukawa once again led the team to Koshien in 2019 as a third-year player. He hit 23k and 154 mph in one game, and went all the way to the finals. In the end, he lost to Osaka Kiyomasa, and finally entered the Tokyo Yakult Swallows first. Gee, isn't this more awesome than the protagonist of the novel?? The long key is okay. Baseball is too niche, so you either have to write fan fiction or use real people as references. Many basketball and football novels use real people as references. You need to understand your audience. Most people who read baseball novels understand the rules and have references, either from anime or real-life characters. Pure originality is thankless, and writing it yourself is tiring. After all, you don't want anyone to buy the copyright for this kind of subject, especially in baseball, which is even more deserted than football.

It's so damn childish to see that the protagonist's talent is some kind of phantom god. Persuade to quit

The author's baseball knowledge is too different. It's okay to have two shortstops.

The starting point is basketball and football. I'm tired of watching them all.

The author does not seem to have a serious understanding of baseball. As someone who has read several baseball comics (mainly Diamond A), I have found many mistakes in baseball common sense 😅😅😅.

I just feel it's quite boring. The male protagonist's ball speed is 135 and the power of the ball is too bad.

I was baffled by it. The first 6 chapters of the game had nothing to do with the protagonist. It was really embarrassing

Since the end of "Ace" in July 2017, Lai Lai has been busy with the business in his store while constantly conceiving the plot of the "Dance" book and working hard to save the manuscript. I originally wanted to upload it on New Year's Day, but then I thought about it and decided to postpone it to Valentine's Day in mid-February! Because this year's Valentine's Day is very different. The 14th is Valentine's Day, the 15th is New Year's Eve, and the 16th is Spring Festival... Have a great time~~🤭 Well, the new year 2018 has arrived. Let's take a look at the steps here to wish all the fans of "Ace" a happy new year! I sincerely wish you all a happy New Year, a happy family, good health, all the best, abundant financial resources, and all your wishes come true. Congratulations, congratulations!!!

I haven't even finished the first chapter yet. Is this book's praise just unreasonable or is it true that such a mentally retarded person would like such a mindless novel? There are all kinds of wonders in the world.

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