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[Comment] I feel a little confused after reading the first few chapters.
Being a point-grabbing forward requires passion. But more importantly, calmness. After reading the first few chapters, I felt that the protagonist's character was a bit irritable, maybe? Excited? Easy to move? Still impetuous, that's easy to say if you're just 17 years old, but as a rebirth, you can't be excited all the time even if you encounter exciting things. As long as it has something to do with football, there will be no time when the protagonist is not excited. The attribute is 18 calm, but the character feels very unstable. The attribute is just an attribute and has no effect on the character? ? Just a personal opinion, not necessarily correct.
Alas, I had to endure it and read more than thirty chapters. Sorry, I can't stand it anymore.
I've read about 30 chapters and I don't know what to say.
Who would read this rubbish?
A super bad, super poisonous book with no passion at all
I don't have much ability but I'm too arrogant. The rebirth plus system is not low-key and has always been self-motivated. It's useless. So there's a reason why I didn't do well in the book. You won't get 100 yuan for this book in 5 years.
I looked very embarrassed and saluted😅
I had the patience to read Chapter 30, but I couldn't stand it anymore and said I had to give up.
It's very confusing to watch, transfer, transfer, always feel like I'm getting kicked out.
[Comment] Player training is interesting
I also liked playing football when I was a child, especially when I was in elementary school. My parents didn't care about you, and then a group of people went to play football. But as soon as I got to junior high school and high school, it was no longer allowed, and I was required to study hard. It would be great if I could do it all over again.
[Comment] If you have any recommendation votes
If you have enough recommendations on hand. Hope you can vote for me. Because this is the greatest affirmation and encouragement to me.
[Comments] They are all really bad people. . .
My chapter numbers were repeated and no one told me. . . The two of us, Chapter 17, stood there quietly all day long. [Fn=2_6]
[Comment] Please call me the helmsman from now on
A mere 10,000 starting coins is disrespectful. Hahaha! I feel powerful. 😁
[Comment] Please call me Hall Master from now on~
Powerful and domineering, I will take the No. 1 Fan spot next month. [Fn=2_4]
It's a good book, but it contains protagonists from novels such as "Champion's Glory" and the length is quite large. It feels like a hodgepodge, so I'm sorry to abandon it.
At first glance, you can tell that the author is a football manager player. After reading a few chapters, I feel that the protagonist is a super self-centered person who believes that he can change the world.
The protagonist is not very powerful, so he should start with a small character. But, the protagonist always likes to sing a high profile. What kind of ideological stuff are you doing? It's embarrassing and disgusting to watch.
The writing is okay, but there are too many repetitive words.
After watching it, I didn't even know what I had watched?
The protagonist was described as a fool before, but who would read that? A product of Real Madrid's youth training? All I can say is that Real Madrid is a master of black magic!
[Related] Apologize first, then say anything else.
I could have gotten my notebook back today. But the boss said that the parts were sent to the wrong parts and it would take a few days. I asked how many days? He said maybe it could be done tomorrow. These days I get up at 8 o'clock every day, and then run outside to type. The code is about 8,000 words, divided into two chapters. One chapter is usually sent at 22:00. Maybe it was because I was in a hurry outside, so a book friend commented that it felt like a running account. Although I don't know what his standards are, I still apologize first before saying anything else. After all, my current condition is indeed not good, but I will still try my best to write well. The outline is very clear. I will modify the outline appropriately and add some things in my life besides the competition. I hope everyone likes it. [Fn=2_7]
[Comment] OMG someone actually talked about the female protagonist problem!
My urine sex. . . Don't you understand yet? Besides, the protagonist is currently under 17. . . The main reason is that not a single woman appears in the book now! ! ! This is too outrageous. . . So. . . . There is a best friend like Lin Yueru in "The Legend of Sword and Fairy"! ! ! ! I didn't want to spoil it. . . But it was spoiled in the group. . . They said. . . No spoilers for others. . . It really doesn't work. That one is hacking me. . . Did you see it? I just love that readers can't think of it and can't guess it. . . You all know what's next How am I still fooling around? . . 😃
[Comment] China vs South Korea South Korea won with one goal
[Fn=2_1]Wu Lei wasted too many opportunities. The shot was just like the protagonist's first shot. It was crooked, just a few meters away, and it could miss the target. Ren Hang's defense is also frustrating. In the end, I can only say that I was excited when we recovered two goals in two minutes. If, if, Zheng Zhi did not score an own goal. . . All right! Don't say what if, China will rise.
[Comment] I hope you can write it down well
The only football articles I can follow now are this and Lin Hai's "Heart of a Champion". I grew up watching the second-generation Galacticos, Cristiano Ronaldo, Kaká, Casillas, Alonso, Benzema, Bale, Ramos, Marcelo, Ozil, Isco, so many brilliant names. I hope the protagonist can return to Real Madrid in the end. In the past, many football articles only kept cheating, and readers got tired of reading too much. Why do so many people like Cristiano Ronaldo and Messi? Messi is a genius, and his talent for success accounts for the majority, while Cristiano Ronaldo relies more on his own efforts. Even this year, when he is supposed to be older and has declined, he can still score 47 goals. I hope the author will write it well. Everyone knows that football writing is a niche genre and everyone will order it from the author. I just hope the author will write the story with great care.
[Comment] Is there any cure for my problem?
I can't stop chatting with my brothers and sisters in the book club. He said he wanted to code words, but he reluctantly closed the group after saying it more than a dozen times. 🤫What can I do if I can't stop chatting? 😭Can I still be saved? There are still 4 people left to summon the second dragon. . . .
[Comment] Suddenly everyone was stunned!
I suddenly discovered that I could start reading this book directly from the fifth volume. Because it's official starting from Chapter 7 of Volume 5. . . . If you don't understand the plot, just go to the front and read it.
[Comment] After so long, I finally met someone who understands me.
Day 19 of writing the book. Fortunately, most people can still watch it and are tolerant. Unfortunately, things like the toe and the team anthem that I explain over and over again always bother me. I was very angry at first, then numb, but when I woke up this morning, I was very excited. Special thanks to a book friend who reminded me of why I came here! I am here to write about a different kind of football, and I am here to write about the football that I like. He has wins and losses, is full of surprises, and works hard like Cristiano Ronaldo and Messi. Those who don't work hard are like Balotelli, and those who are unlucky are like Quaresma. Some people say that I am understating the number of words in the team song, saying that it appears twice or even three times in one chapter (it is gone now because I deleted it, once or twice at most) But maybe it's because I'm a newbie, so I haven't understood what the seniors said, there's no benefit in releasing it before it's on the shelves! Therefore, because I am a newcomer, my two-in-one chapter of 4,000 words and 5,000 words in the early stage will not be flattering. Do I want to be like all novels, talking about my family background, why I traveled through time, and then score my first goal? Will you applaud? I thought about it, not really. I have read so many books, but I have never seen one that has not been scolded. Then I understood that writing a book means whether 100 people read it, 10 people agree with you, or 90 people agree with your book. Fortunately, most book friends still agree with it and can still read it. When I woke up this morning, the collection had reached 1,700. Although there may not be that many people, thank you very much for your attention. If you can't read the first two or three chapters, just ignore it for now and just let it be! In the following chapters, I will try my best to lay out the life line.