My System Is Shenhao

Testing poison with one's own body, I don't recommend it to everyone, it's just another show of pretentiousness and a slap in the face

Poisonous. . So brainless. .

This primary school student's writing style is extremely poisonous

It feels like the protagonist has no brains, a bit like suddenly getting rich

The author took the time to comment on the book... The reviews basically said it was too bland. . . Nowadays, people don't care how boring the protagonist's character is, they only like pigs and tigers... Without some arrogant supporting characters to slap them in the face, life will be quite boring.

[Fn=5_10]This kind of simple writing is the easiest to break down. At present, it seems that none of them have been finished. The only one similar to this is Rebirth: The Prodigal Son. I hope the author will work hard

Yes, yes [fn=2_3]

The author should still remember me. I have sent you book reviews before, but I am not here to review books now. After seeing a lot of criticism posts, I think these things are inevitable. You are a new author. Although your ability has been confirmed by putting it on the shelf, it is a new work after all, and there will definitely be many shortcomings. Therefore, I hope that the author will ignore those sensitive words and absorb everyone's suggestions to make his subsequent creations more perfect. Of course, we also recommend readers to express their opinions rationally so that new authors can hear them. Maybe you will become a great god... Here, let me tell you a true story. In a certain fish, there is a stand-alone game anchor who is very popular. No matter what game he broadcasts, whether it is boring or dull, hundreds of thousands of people watch his live broadcast every day. Many people are curious about how this anchor is so powerful. A single-player game anchor can have so much popularity. Although he has a nice voice and sings well, more people are watching the games he anchors. His sense of humor and rich game explanations in the game, coupled with some bragging time, make the audience very excited to watch. Finally one day, this anchor told everyone in his spare time why he is so popular. First of all, he was also popular at that time with hundreds and thousands of people persevering, and he worked hard every day Secondly, when he is not anchoring games, he will watch a lot of movie news or learn new knowledge. Third, before he hosts a game, he will collect a lot of information about the background of the game, the historical figures in it, and a lot of in-depth culture. He will go over these things in his head before hosting the game. Last point, after all, the anchor is only one person, so when the anchor finishes the games he has played before and cannot find other games, he will take the initiative to tell the audience that if anyone has a good game, they can give it to the anchor. The above 4 points are what the anchor said about his experience at the time. We usually have a lot of interactions. I also like to watch his anchor all the time during prime time. So one thing is the same as all things are, and the same is true for writing. The author can refer to the above suggestions. I hope these can bring you some help. Of course, I also hope that the author will try his best to make small changes to the chapters he has written in his spare time during the summer vacation. Do not make major changes. This will make your first work deteriorate. After all, it is a YY novel. Finally, I hope the author will work hard to write a very good work. Come on...

There aren't many tickets, you only get one per day, so don't be dissatisfied.

How can I put it this way? This is an interesting YY novel. It's relatively relaxed and doesn't have a lot of grudge details. Overall, it's okay to read. But let me give you some suggestions. First of all, there are still many typos. I hope that when the author is busy updating, he can check and correct the previous chapters in Word (PS: These are not the ones you wrote wrong intentionally) Secondly, the pace of the characters' psychological activities is a bit fast. If we look at it now, it is still okay. After all, it is a YY novel. However, if you want to improve yourself, I hope the author will find more realistic books in the future, study them, and enrich the plot content. The third emotional scene is a bit unnatural. If it should be simplified, it should be simplified. There is no need to add more embellishments. For example, adding the word "gentle" in a specific way is superfluous. In other words, regarding the writing style, as mentioned above, it is a novice writing, but this thing cannot be rushed. You have to slowly enrich your life experience to accumulate your own routine. The richer your life experience, the more vivid the characters in the pen will be. As for what some readers criticize as bad, after all, they are newcomers, so it is inevitable to be criticized. The author should not pay too much attention to the sensitive words in it, but should think more about whether this place is reasonable. People grow up in frustration, but don't be knocked down by frustration, so I hope the author can keep writing. No matter what, finishing a work is like walking a journey in your life, and you will have your own experience when you look back. Finally, I wish the author to continue to break through and become a great master, not to break out too much every day, and to save more manuscripts in case of sudden need to put them on the shelves.

I say to you, the author, the writing for beginners is good, but don't be too naive. For example, the previous charge of 200 US dollars per gram for No. 4 Is too exaggerated. No. 4 Haofa is very cheap in the place of production. You can buy 1 kilogram for 200 US dollars. Also, the normal price of No. 4 Is RMB250+1g. This is common sense.

It is my first time to write a book. As a newcomer, I am mentally prepared to rush into the market! I will finish this book while ensuring quality! You can read with confidence. As a reader, I always liked to give a sentence to other authors, but now I give this sentence to myself! Don't be afraid of jumping on the street, just get used to it and you'll be fine!

This book officially took more than a week to write, which was not easy. Thank you all for your continued support. Thank you all. At the same time, I will work harder to live up to your love for me. Here, thank you all

This is my first time writing a book. I am not afraid of criticism, being scolded, or being scolded. But please, when you criticize me, can you please explain the reasons in detail, such as what are the problems with a certain chapter? Even if you let me die, I have to die clearly. Here, thank you to all the book friends who support me! ! ! !

Since there are so many characters, I feel a lot of pressure, so I am looking for readers who are interested in participating. Please write down the character's name, gender, age and identity. (Foreign names are also acceptable, but this book is lacking.) At the same time, thank you to the readers who have collected and recommended them.