Fake Makeup Notes

There are no skipped chapters in the entire book, the narrative is not procrastinating, and the rhythm is tight. The story setting is actually very good, but it is still far from a true classic. The description of the big scenes is lacking, the characters are a bit ingenious, and the details are not enough. The author wants to analyze people's hearts, but due to age constraints, it is difficult to feel that it is from the heart. On the contrary, maybe after reading too many books, I always have a feeling of déjà vu. Keep working hard, your writing needs to be sharpened, but life needs to be settled. 🌹

It feels like this is a book I'm doing for your own good so I won't tell you what happened. In the name of protection, it always puts people around you in danger. This is a very stupid approach. I can't understand that the heroine is obviously very smart in other aspects, but once she thinks she is "for your own good", she will become irrational. The plot is actually quite exciting, but the heroine who pretends to be "good for you" and "the Holy Mother" is really a bit off-putting. Sure enough, the heroine has been protecting her younger brother for his own good, but his younger brother has an innocent heart but no scheming. He is impulsive and easily deceived. This is very easy for others to take advantage of. As a future general, this is obviously a lack of education. After the heroine was reborn, she always believed that letting her brother know as little as possible was the greatest protection. Isn't this self-deception? Her brother knew that the cause of his sister's death was strange, so how could he not investigate or get involved? The most correct way for the heroine should be to give a subtle reminder and guide his brother back instead of saying nothing. Then the heroine, grandma, uses the banner of "for your own good" and does not communicate with others, thinking that she can keep the Xue family. However, she knows it in her heart, but she just doesn't want to think about it deeply. If this is so exciting, others will definitely investigate it, so it will only expose her favorite grandson to danger, and then once things are revealed, the whole family will not end well. So what's the point of sending her granddaughter to die (she didn't object), because she would be manipulated by others again and again, and in the end she would die, and the person she wanted to save wouldn't be counted as saved. This book reminds us that if we really want to protect others, we should not hide all the secrets and information related to her and let him guess, investigate and take detours, but should give appropriate reminders after considering the situation and communicate smoothly, otherwise, irreparable mistakes will be made.

The writing is good, the story is fast-paced, the foreshadowing is interesting, and the protagonists are well portrayed. But it's not fun enough. I want to see the heroine being domineering and torturing the scumbag.

The character descriptions in the article are too inconsistent with common sense

There are so few book reviews, so I flew over from Nianjun to take a look.

I just read the beginning, it should be a good read, I like this style 😁

The book is very interesting. I will save it and read it later.

So beautiful! ! I haven't read such an enjoyable novel in a long time! ! The male protagonist is super cute! !

The twins don't look alike? Obviously a healthy living one is more useful than a dead one, so we have to kill it

Just right! The prince is tolerant enough, Ah happy is smart and strong enough, haha, a match made in heaven, okay!

I thought it was a revenge story, but I felt aggrieved after reading half of it.

The terminology of "performance decline" is so modern.

The grave-digging part is a bit pretentious. The first hint is "You will hate me later." Then he asked someone to borrow tools, and only said a few words, "You can talk to her later," to delay the process. Later, when he ordered the excavation, he was naturally resisted, questioned, shouted, and then cajoled and explained. I just want to ask, can't you explain the doubts while waiting for someone to borrow the tools? The younger brother is so stupid. The heroine said that he must not understand that there is something wrong with the tomb? Need to be executed violently first?

The male protagonist can't be that cousin, otherwise I won't be able to stand it anymore.