Space-Time Ripples

This novel is about a harem, and it's written in a messy way.

What can I say about this book? The plot can be said to be self-liberating. It is very exciting. It can be said that it is very refreshing. It is like a hamburger. But the emotional scenes are really like shit. It feeds you not just once but constantly. First of all, it is the same as the heroine's emotional scenes. I won't talk about it. But you clearly write that the protagonist is devoted, but in every world, you will meet someone who falls in love with the protagonist. You can write it if you say it, but you refuse. While you are resisting in your heart, you don't refuse outright. You are always clinging. Do you think you, a great man, can simply write about the main character being devoted, and at the same time write about a lot of women who like the main character? If you reject it clearly, it would be helpful, but you don't want to be ambiguous. What should you do if you change your relationship when the ambiguity is over? Just find a taker. It's not about feelings, but if you like me, I want to be with you. But the problem is that the protagonist you wrote is just being ambiguous. He says he doesn't like it, but he doesn't reject other people's intimate gestures. He doesn't explain when others say he's your woman. In the end, he pats his butt and leaves. He's touched, he's touched, he's kissed, he's kissed, and then this character is with another supporting character, WTF? So describing so much inner drama is just too few words? ?

Don't stop me, I want to be brothers with the protagonist. After all, the protagonist gives away girls whenever he is happy. I think this kind of protagonist is very suitable for being a superficial brother.

The more I read articles about bad good people, the more disgusting I become. You can be a good person by writing articles, but you cannot be a bad good person, especially the Holy Mother. No matter how much content you write or how good the article is, if the main character is the Virgin and a bad guy, the article will be wasted. The more you read it, the more annoying it becomes, and the more you read it, the more upset you become!

I returned to reality and exchanged 2 million U. S. Dollars, but no one cared about it. Even with the same U. S. Dollar code, there would be problems.

Inexplicably, I got a girlfriend, inexplicably, my love is as deep as the sea, and inexplicably, I have a wide harem.

As a person in the Great Dao realm, I was poisoned to death by these few novels. I regret that I can no longer read novels that transcend my realm. My life is at stake.

Author, if you say this, your conscience won't hurt? It doesn't make sense for you to say that if a girl confesses her love to the protagonist, the protagonist must take her away. But you are the author, and you clearly know that this kind of plot will cause discomfort to some readers, so you can definitely write that except for the ones you want to accept, all the women are never interested in the protagonist. Wouldn't that be enough? You want to arrange for a girl to fall in love with the protagonist, and then have the protagonist reject her. Did you do this on purpose?

The book where I most want the protagonist to die

After reading dozens of chapters, I still don't understand what the author wants to write. Every time I travel, I just save people, save people, save people. There is no sense of purpose at all, and I don't see the goal. 😰

After reading a hundred chapters, I still don't understand what the protagonist is going to do. Is traveling through so many worlds just to change the characters in the plot? It feels like a primary school student writing a composition, only narrating. . No plot,

It's such a long story, it makes me want to sleep.

It's almost a million words, so why not put it on the shelves? !

The protagonist's name is well chosen~Chen Jialuo~haha~

Seeing the sun god Ra reminds me of the relationship between the protagonist and Ra in your next novel. Is there any relationship between this

After reading Chapter 23, why do I feel like the writing is so messy?

This damn thing goes back and forth too fast. If you want to write a world, just finish the main plot before leaving. I can't do this at all. Also flirting with girls in various ways. After flirting, give the girl to someone else. Speechless.

It was well written, I read it in one sitting.

The subject matter is good and creative, but it reads like a running account

I saw the main character pretending to be a dragon and saving a girl, and then just like a dog, he would do whatever the girl said. This licking dog is pure.

The most important thing is why not get rid of all the power crystals? Later, when you had the ability, why didn't you take it away in one piece? And the protagonist can train to throw a plane weighing several tons with just a few touches. Why do you only lift a few hundred kilograms after absorbing it for so long? The power is too weak!

The time traveler is gone too. . .

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is not. If it could be polished up, it would be a good novel.

The author has some misunderstandings about the kinetic energy generated by a flying knife ten times the speed of sound. That's billions of joules of energy! The frictional alloy at ten times the speed of sound is gone in an instant, so the electromagnetic guns are all made of tungsten. I watched a video where a ten-gram tungsten metal bullet accelerated to fourteen times the speed of sound, generating more than sixty megajoules of energy. The special cement wall five meters away was penetrated by bullets on seven sides. . . In other words, it can bring down the tallest building in Dubai with one shot.

The turning point is too abrupt. Although the time travel is random, this method of changing places in one shot is really not good.

The author has no common sense at all. 200 US dollars is enough for you to play several times.

Chapter 799 explains everything

Change the name of this book to Virgin Mary of All Heavens

This pig's foot is a holy mother bitch. Even the gangsters and evildoers are spared. The emotional scenes in it are like two idiots having a conversation.

Just write according to your own ideas. You are writing your story, not the story written by the readers.