Mythical Martial Arts

They always say that Zhu Ming won the country unfairly. What is wrong with him? ? Are there any corrections?

? Why do I think this book is so much better than other fics? His creativity is very good! Although the characters are very monotonous.

The protagonist is a ruffian from the beginning to the end. He talks and acts like a gangster. This is the only level of the author.

The writing and plot concept of this book are really good, but there are too many deliberately cliche plots, and the outline is also a traditional running account of leveling up and fighting monsters, which makes it easy for people to abandon the book. The new book Mythology Original Species reflects the author's progress. It's not easy to survive so many years.

Can't stand it. . . Ruined the idea. . .

It's a good idea, but it's too poisonous.

Now that Mr. Jin is gone, should the content of this book be restored to its original state?

The author has his own ideas. Due to the writing style, some things are specious but not true.

Although I think it's good, it feels very inconsistent

After reading a hundred chapters, I felt it was a mess, especially since the levels of martial arts realms were unclear and I didn't know what realms they were in. No wonder it wasn't popular.

It can be said that the creativity is good, but the content makes people feel as sick as eating shit. After reading hundreds of chapters for this idea, I still don't know what kind of person the protagonist is, and the performance of force is sometimes high and sometimes low.

Big Grasshopper will appear, will the veteran Zhang Sanfeng appear to recite a poem, will He Zudao appear to play and sing, will Bei Qiao Fengnan Murong appear to perform a cross talk?

Waste Paper Bridge, you misjudged me, there is no cross-dressing guy here!

The idea is good, but the author's writing skills are not good enough, the writing is not gripping enough, and the protagonist's character is also problematic. Take Chapter 45, for example, the protagonist spies on Lao Yue after coming down from Si Guo Cliff, and then is attacked by Lao Yue's Qi, which threatens to ruin the protagonist's future. The protagonist secretly hates it. It's okay to look at it this way, but the protagonist is full of real martial arts, and there is no explanation. , From Lao Yue's point of view, there is a high probability that a disciple who is a spy of the Quanzhen Sect, acts in a flamboyant manner, causes trouble for Huashan, and immediately after being punished, he can spy on his cultivation in person, and even covets his daughter. There is no problem in ruining the future of the protagonist. If I were Lao Yue, the protagonist's cultivation would be abolished on the spot, and then he accidentally falls to death.

The root of Lingbao may be Shifang, and Xiaoqian's scholar is just a cover. Xu Zhu's intelligence in this book has almost become that of Xiao Zhuge. In addition, he has completely eliminated emotions and humanity, and cannot have feelings for anything or any creature. Shifang must be of great use to him.

I said, why did you change the original name? It looks weird! !

As expected, it is an old book. It is extremely poisonous and cannot be read at all.

I watched a dozen of them and died from poison.

It's too messy and looks tiring😆😆😆

Logically speaking, it is understandable to change the name to avoid infringement, but the change is really messy. In other novels, gold-type characters and martial arts are used as the background, and their appearance is not very dense, so the name change is not inconsistent; in this novel, there are several changed names in each paragraph, which is too dense.

When was this book published, the name was changed 🥵? I really can't understand it.

Zhang Sanfeng is still the White-browed Eagle King Yin Tianzheng. According to the way of addressing elders, if this Yinggu Liang is called Grandpa Eagle King, then this Yinggu Liang is the daughter of Zhang Wuji and Yin Li, also known as Zhu'er. His third brother also claims to be of Genghis Khan descent, so Wuji must be one of the wives. Including Zhao Min and Zhu Er, with Zhao Min acting decisively, a very deep character in the city, Zhu Er who killed his second mother at a young age and resisted polygamy, and perhaps Zhou Zhiruo, who is vicious, it seems that the end of Wuji's harem is not to enjoy the blessing of everyone, but a fire in the backyard.

It's too deliberate and looks awkward****************

You can still look at the front, but there is basically nothing to see in the middle and back.

Abandon the book, abandon the book, revise it randomly and feel all kinds of discomfort

After reading this book, I can no longer read other martial arts novels.

Xu Zhu, a person who is least likely to become a villain, suddenly turned into an evil Buddha and evil god. This sense of contrast is very dark, and the author's writing style expresses the tense and frightening mood of the plot very well. It can't help but make people feel chills on the back and neck in the hot weather. It is well written and has a feeling.

The book is very good. It describes the spirit of martial arts. It explains what martial arts is and what chivalry is. Chivalry should not just do it for one's own selfishness, but should follow the righteousness in one's heart and let one's heart decide what to do! Hehehe, I have also written a book, but I feel that there are still some shortcomings. I found the missing things in you, and I wish the author to become a god as soon as possible!

The biggest leader of the Lock Gang who came out at the end was obviously known to the male pig, he couldn't be Wang Yu's old prostitute, that would be too bloody. . .

The Dugu Nine Swords were created by Guo Xiang, Feng Qingyang was Yue Buqun's junior brother, and Lao Zhu's world was conquered by Zhang Wuji