Under the Bloody Moon

The first chapter starts with suspense. Jester's right hand was missing, and blood dripped onto the dusty ground. There were also dense footsteps and noisy voices outside the door. Jester sighed at this time, he was lucky. Even if I die, I won't go back to that laboratory. Readers are most sensitive to the above elements and will guess, what is going on? What is this laboratory for? Is it that scary? Okay, my appetite has been whetted. Next, is the author's caring vision for Jester. Let's see how to shape him. A country boy, full of yearning for big cities, came to see his uncle with a few copper coins in his pocket. But I met a few people from the city. One said, "Give us the copper coins, and we will take you to your uncle tomorrow." The other said, "Ouxi, you usually deceive the rich, but why don't you let go of the poor's money?" , The man named Ou Xi gave a very reasonable reason, "Isn't old man Sam waiting for money to buy medicine? It's a little bit if you can scrape together a little." Hearing this, Jester couldn't control his behavior. He handed over the money and gave them his trust. There are two lines of dialogue that are very interesting. A man asked Jester: Don't you think it's missing? Jester replied, "Food is given to us by the moon god. We should not complain about the quantity and taste of the food." "This sentence with a particularly profound religious meaning, I believe, will touch the readers. After reading this, you can see the author's care for Jester. He is simple and simple, has a good heart, and has not learned to question or take precautions. Next, will his road be easy to follow? Is this complex city a place for him? Read on, the bio-armor comes, the lab appears. The reader's heart begins to worry about the fate of this child. When the camera turned, the searchers had found Jester's hiding place. The situation is critical! Well, the reader is firmly grasped by the author. Know how to dig a hole, and dig it skillfully. This is Luluo's feeling after reading the beginning of the author's two parts of the work. I hope the author and the work will go further and further.

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