Eastward and Westward Demon Transformation

Hahahaha, here I go again~~! ! !

When I saw the school_days title earlier, I thought there would be a protagonist with only one head left and being held by the second lady. Or the pad chief used a knife to cut the arteries in his neck on the overpass. Or when Zizhao got out of the tram, the protagonist was pushed off the platform by Mu Q Such plot In the end, I managed to get through it with only artificial respiration. ---------------------------------- (Purely messing around XD)

I am able to read this book after many years. I wonder if the author will update it?

At first I thought the plot was about the Scarlet Devil Mansion before the prologue => Youyoumu When I saw Shoutu again, I thought what was coming was Yongye copying the series. I didn't expect it to be about Alice. And what kind of monster is Takeshita? And how will Zi and Alice clear their names in the future? I couldn't even imagine it What you wrote was really successful.

It would be great if someone could point out what I didn't write well.

Come on, author, first of all, congratulations. , Read it slowly, waiting for your release!

It was originally from a third-person perspective. But in a few words, it suddenly changes to Mei Hong's first-person perspective. I can't react a bit

First of all, the prologue is too long And Chapter 11 should be moved to the front as a prologue. Regarding the title of the book mentioned in Chapter 19 If the protagonist is later given some abilities of the Westward Demon (I don't know what abilities they are) Would it fit the title of the book better? The daily description is very well written. However, the combat part seems less graphic. Chapter 27 Doesn't Huiyin transform into horns only on full moon nights? Come on finally~ (There is a typo in Chapter 12: One thousand three hundred "duo" years ago There are many words: I am talking about sending him to Shiki "Four Seasons" Ying Ji) (Chapter 16 has multiple words: "demon" dreams have some resentment) (Chapter 19 has multiple words: "If" you can maintain your current situation in the future) There are also some typos that I forgot where they are.

The second volume is a bit anticlimactic The title of the volume is Anecdotes of Juwei But the part about Jumian is only about ten to fifteen chapters Less than half of the entire volume You may want to consider changing the volume name. Change it to something like Volume 1 I was expecting this volume to be an original mutation centered around Jumi-an Although there was at the beginning But like I said before Ran away immediately Behind it is almost all the Scarlet Devil Mansion It's a bit inconsistent with the name of the volume