The Garrison of the Indescribable Ship Girl

How should I put it, the author actually writes pretty well. The main disappointment of this book lies in the selection of materials and water...

Being naked in front of a male admiral, does the protagonist want to get married?

In the previous chapters, when I saw the mysterious UO torturing the company, I felt so full of hatred that I thought this guy was NCC-1701. But as I went on, things got worse and worse. Why did I start getting darker and darker? Later, robots and transformed humans came out, and they had no scruples about attacking humans. Now the truth is finally revealed, it turns out that they are from Cybertron. Yiwu was originally a bit player, maybe he would receive a chicken drumstick lunch box when he was born. Sure enough, but if I just mentioned it, it would be fine. In the end, it would be a dark humor like "Iwu's Heart" that makes people laugh. You are really worthy of L University. What a pity for orphaned and widowed Essex. Come on, Arden, you are all aboveboard in public and private affairs, let's see what new abilities you can get by killing the special ship girl for the first time! By the way, hurry up and create Leviathan - isn't it natural to have one after the war?

Personally, I think there are several reasons for the author's poor performance First: The main plot is unclear [although I am a semi-daily person] Second: Over-enhancement of the Spear of Adun [In the currently known science fiction worldview, if calculated according to the level Adon is at, he is really at the bottom...] Third: The author has some deliberate moves to belittle other science fiction worlds. I hope I feel wrong. Fourth: I'm a little bit wrong with the Lily article, but I can still read Pure Lily. Although there are pitfalls later, Charlotte is still a poisonous point... Fifth: If you want to take off, just take off. This rhythm seems to me very boring... [... Above, I hope the author will work hard in the work he is currently writing...]

A newbie who just got into the game is looking for a solution. It was said earlier that the first-generation ship-girls were the offspring of the first-generation ship-girls and humans. Does that mean that the first-generation ship-girls were basically fucked 🤔

Shen TM 20w steel, 600 barrels and 20 damage pipes, it is better to just grab an 80+ Lingbo, then attack the boss with a goalkeeper attack, click Brother Xinchun, and then use one shot to enter the soul in the night battle. I really don't understand the world of rich people 🤤

To be honest, why the score of this book is so poor is not a male-female problem, nor a setting problem, but the author's expressive ability, a feeling that I can't explain. I feel tired reading this book, and I feel that the author cannot express what he wants to write well in written form. Obviously Explain a very simple thing, and then pull out some messy things. In fact, if you remove those messy things, although the number of words may be less, the content will be more precise and more understandable. Online novels are mainly easy to understand. After all, ordinary people are the main body in this world. .

This book is really good. After reading more than 500 chapters, the plot progresses very slowly. Often the plot starts to talk about a lot of meaningless settings. Sometimes it even writes several chapters in a row with settings that have nothing to do with the plot. However, the setting of the protagonist is really good. It's okay to freshen it up at the beginning.

If it were a male protagonist, I guess the results would be better.

The former focused almost all its firepower on that electromagnetic gun. The latter has good conventional firepower while taking into account doomsday weapons. And because the Planck space is also a fried chicken, the stomach can hold things.

It's really not a good idea to write about a female admiral at the starting point. Readers here generally prefer to substitute the male protagonist as a ship pusher. (Perhaps readers of other websites will like it, such as ) Not to mention the addition of Charlotte. Although I switched to the third-person perspective, coupled with the appearance of the protoss and the setting of the Spear of Adun itself, I really didn't feel much (a robot would feel ashamed if it was seen? What's more, they are not of the same race, would anyone care about being looked at by a monkey?)

It seems that my poison resistance is low. It is too uncomfortable to have three different views. It is difficult to achieve equality of personality. I am not an SM audience. Even if I am an interstellar player, it is difficult to continue watching.

? ? ? Is the protagonist a female admiral? ? ? What did the author think?

Do you still remember the psionic Death Star that the Xiling Empire ate up seven seconds of its own time when it was built? If someone built her, who would be stronger against Arden?

I didn't look back. Can anyone who has watched it tell me what the meaning of Charlotte's existence is?

My biggest impression after reading this book is that it's so weird. .

I don't know if the author deliberately made the races and factions in Warhammer so rubbish.

Now I hear that Hyperion can no longer look directly at him, his mind is filled with the posture of a ship girl.

It would be fun if you summoned your own captain's heroic spirit, such as Drake or Blackbeard 😏

Reading this book for five seconds will be deemed as automatically joining the El Poison Explosion, taking a solar battle ax and embracing the glory of battle for the Archbishop.

Why is it the ship of the protoss and not the ship of the interstellar human race?

See here. I also just want to say. Those chaotic and evil gods. In front of that adult. They are all vulnerable.

Until I said that the Nautilus was a fantasy ship and had no torpedoes, I didn't even think about it in Verne's novels. I thought it was the American ship from World War II (with mines and torpedoes).

It's just that it's too confusing and the plot is draggy. Everything else is okay and daily life is good. Currently, it's the only ship girl protagonist that can write such a long (niche) ship girl setting. The setting of the ship girl is still very reasonable (a human ship girl who goes to the academy with mixed blood can become a ship girl or an admiral).

Wuhu

This is my favorite comprehensive comic novel By the way, this is considered a comprehensive comic, forget it, forget it

Be sure to read it

Did the author himself bring in Charlotte? This character is disgusting enough

After reading it for a while, I weakened it a lot. I like riddles and talk in roundabout ways, and one question drags on for many chapters. The plot looks pretty good. After all, I like this subject very much.

As in the title, Sister Xue is mighty~Sister Xue is mighty~Sister Xue is mighty~