Rebirth with Beating Heart

The author's writing style is very good, and I feel that the quality of the novel is very high. There are too many fast food articles nowadays, and there are few novels that empathize with each other, as if I am the protagonist.

To be honest, even though the whole night has passed, the more I think about it, the angrier I get. It's obviously a harem story, but it ended up giving me a single female protagonist. Childhood sweethearts, English teacher, Tao Ran, Luo Xi, Xiao Xiao, Ke Shu, senior high school senior and twin sisters, almost ten of them. Isn't this the standard start of a harem novel? Since you want to write a novel with a single female protagonist, don't write about the male protagonist having emotional entanglements with so many girls. I've written two or three and I won't say anything, but what's the point of writing nearly ten and still having a single female protagonist? (I'm just venting my frustration, don't worry about it)

The ending is really disgusting. Two perfect heroines were created, but in the end there was only one? The thought of Xiaoxiao marrying someone else in the future makes me feel like I am eating away at Xiang. This kind of ending is normal in published novels, but it is extremely poisonous to write it like this in online novels.

You used your experience as material to write this story. Although the result is not perfect, at least you did it, right? I was born in 1997, one year younger than the author. I miss my junior high school and high school years very much. Those pictures that are stuck in my memory, those friends, brothers, girls' stories, those style stories, time has passed and we are separated. The only thing that can prove that these have accompanied me through a certain journey in my life is my memory. Just make your dream come true, don't worry.

I'm debating whether to read it or not. I hate novels that feature two and three girls very vividly, but end up with only one heroine. It's like you spent an hour telling me how delicious a dish is, and my mouth is almost dripping, but you tell me that it's for display and can't be eaten.

The author's excellent writing style describes the relationship between the female supporting characters and the protagonist very well, but it also makes me resent the single female protagonist even more. Can you change the ending? Author, aren't you a fan of Nirvana? Nirvana also has two female protagonists.

It's okay, okay, I didn't fall into the trap. Thank you, boss. Thank you very much. Single heroine and double heroine are acceptable, but according to the standard description of the heroine, only one of the results is disgusting. Isn't it disgusting?

Thank you fellow Taoists for testing the poison yourself, and say goodbye.

Isn't this plagiarizing the Great Nirvana of Rebirth? Even though I changed the name, the story is the same, and my writing skills are not good enough. I copied some small chapters directly, so I had to write them! Just copy it and you still post it at the starting point, I'm convinced too!

Don't you really want to read a novel like this and spend so much time on it? The most real thing here is actually Su Xiaoxiao. What would you do if you were born again? ? ? Where are the shoulders of the 2 people you gave me? Just pass by it from now on and don't look at it.

The single heroine persuaded her to quit. . . Especially the monologue at the end about not knowing that I am a guest in my dream and Su Xiaoxiao made me depressed.

The first time I left a comment was because it was so annoying I was immediately shocked when I read Chapter 261 and it only had a single female protagonist So my family is small

After reading about 120 chapters, the male protagonist is moved every time he sees it. He is obviously a scumbag, but he still seems so affectionate. I was really confused and ran to read the comments. Well, how should I put it? Some of them really disagreed. The author wrote that the male protagonist should be both affectionate and philanthropic. The contradictions made it difficult for people to adapt to reading. Alas, even though you haven't cheated on me physically, you are so mentally scumbag that you don't want to do anything about it! 🔨🔨🔨

I read the last two pages in advance and decisively abandoned the book. I created two heroines, but in the end there was only one. I was really speechless.

It's pretentious and the words are empty. At first I didn't understand why many places were so literary and artistic, but I understood it when I saw Hanfu. A common problem in this circle is that I can't speak well.

I read the ending... It's hard to put it into words. I read more than a hundred chapters from the first chapter, and then I found that the small chapters were getting fewer and fewer, so I went straight to the ending... I was disappointed, I was really disappointed. You (the author) described a very good character, but you rejected it. Disappointed... I don't want to see it anymore

The author has released a new book, using a new account, the title of the book is "The Heartbeat of Rebirth 2008". Welcome to support 😁🌹🌹🌹

I read the first few chapters and then read the ending. I didn't want to read it. The author's writing was good and well written, but it wasn't the ending I wanted! ! ! It's better to give up...

I was skipping to watch it so I forgot if there were any other emotional scenes with the male protagonist besides Xiaoxiao and Keshu, but I also felt that the single female protagonist should not have other emotional scenes. To be honest, the emotional line of Su Xiaoxiao was so well written in this book that I didn't find it disgusting. The ending of Su Xiaoxiao is really disappointing and makes me feel very sad. What a pity

😭This book is so tiring to read and so docile.

The author is going to start a new book soon, and I'm going crazy waiting for it!

I started reading this novel in 2016 when I was in junior high school. At that time, I felt that the writing was very good, and the sentences and poems in it were well combined. However, overall, it lacked story and continuous readability of the plot, and did not give readers a sense of twists and turns. But even after five or six years, I am still shocked by its words. How should I put it, I miss it very much.

I always describe the protagonist's eyes and mood. I feel that the protagonist's mentality is not like that of a rebirth novel, but different from that of a high school student.

Xiaoxiao was really upset when I saw it at the end

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The second part, Rebirth of the Heartbeat (2008), was written by the author using the new vest. You can check it out.

It was so painful to read the last two chapters, especially the penultimate chapter, which is a pity!

The writing style is quite good, but the overall story structure and story quality are not good. It feels like a traditional book and online literature, and it feels neither fish nor fowl.

Why do you have to pretend to be so mature? Isn't it embarrassing? It's all there❌