Tang Dynasty Mingyue

Both the writing and the content of the extra chapter are better, and the writing is even better... The writing has improved a lot compared to three years ago. Come on, work hard! This kind of writing style is what I love most

Driving a bullock cart to sell his daughter. . . . You are awesome←_←Goodbye←_←

After reading the first chapter, I have to say that the author successfully described the sorrow of ancient society! Very sad! This is both a success and a failure! I think it is a big mistake to write the first chapter like this, and it will lose a lot of clicks and readings! Of course, it successfully describes the scene of survival in ancient society. People who are descendants of 80.90.00 May not understand that scene of starvation. My childhood memory is of starvation! It was an indescribable feeling. Although the author's description was very successful, he still gave up! I don't want to recall the indescribable feeling from the past, nor can I face the past scenes! People who haven't experienced it can't imagine it! Just one word! Hungry! Hungry! Hungry! Skinny! The little face is sallow! What is revealed in the eyes is food! Take everything you can eat!

Author, I am optimistic about you. Come on, don't give up.

Come on, author👍

I briefly read it and gave some suggestions to the author. I think you can read more online articles to improve your writing style and writing methods. I quickly read through more than a dozen chapters. The plot is understandable, but it is not exciting or cruel. It is too bland, such as the wedding room, which is mentioned in one stroke. It is very refreshing. No, the male and female protagonists have a relationship without feelings, and the emotional scenes are also very abrupt. This is a bit disgusting. The heroine's life experience is quite miserable, but I don't seem to have any mood swings. That's it. I think I can learn a lot by reading more novels by great writers.

The introduction is so good, but the content is not accurate, bye bye

The writing is very good, but I am not suitable for reading this kind of thing 👍