Wolf and Magician

First of all, I would like to thank the book friends who come to Chuanmen for reading my novel. I have thought about this issue before and always thought it would not have a big impact. After listening to your words today, I realized that there may be a big problem with this kind of opening chapter. It cannot arouse the readers' interest, and it is difficult for them to be motivated to read further. I want to ask the editor in charge if my novel needs any major revisions. Thank you very much.