Time Walker

I've read a lot of novels, and at the end of each book, someone will jump out and say, "Wow, this book sucked." "This book is too bad!" Anyway, the central idea I want to express is "this book..." Why is the ending so bad? To describe it in one sentence, the ending of this book is not to my taste. I have wasted so much time and money reading this crappy book like yours. I didn't plan on how long my book would be at the beginning. I only planned to write about one million words. By left and right, it could be left (less than a million words) or right (more than a million words). At the end, I thought it was the ending that I needed to write, and I had written everything I needed to write fairly clearly. When I saw the book review section, someone jumped out and said that the ending was brain-burning. I wanted to ask, is it really that difficult to understand? You should be able to understand it by looking at the chapter names of the last chapter. To put it simply, it means "creating something out of nothing." Everything comes from nothingness. The plane universe, including consciousness, comes from nothingness. Really don't understand? There are also planes and universes like cells existing in the bodies of living beings born in nothingness. This is also difficult to understand and cannot be understood? I said that the last volume is my world view. Let me explain the last two chapters in detail for those who don't understand. The first chapter tells about why those powerful cognitive civilizations fell in ancient times and where the "true immortals" in those cognitive civilizations went. The second chapter is about the world view of the planes. All matter, energy, plane universes, including consciousness and other essences come from the world of nothingness. Originally, there were no planes and universes. , It was the creatures born in the void who studied and understood the void step by step, and were able to resist the emptiness, and then formed the universe and the plane in their bodies, that is, the plane universe is like cells running in their bodies, and whether it is the plane void sea, the plane and the universe, or the land of nothingness, they are all devices built by these creatures to resist the emptiness, and they set up the guardians of the protection devices-the Lord of Order. To sum it up in one sentence: Nothing in the world originally existed, everything came from nothingness, and the cosmic plane where Baiye and the others lived and grew up was in the body of a powerful creature, just like the cells in the human body. Hard to understand? As for why it is divided into two chapters, it is because I wrote 5,000 words last night and did not finish it. I just added the second final chapter today. When some people read the first chapter, they will not read the words at the beginning of the chapter. Chapter 2, I won't explain it, but someone who has watched "Super Body" should be able to understand it. What example is the heroine in the movie giving? Did she say what happens when a car accelerates infinitely on the highway? In fact, nothing exists, nothing is meaningful, except time which can record everything. My point is somewhat similar to here, but different. Some people are confused after reading the following paragraphs. Okay, let me explain in more detail. In the first few chapters, Xu Wu was taken away by the Emperor of the Void Spirit. How will he be dealt with by the Emperor of the Void Spirit? As mentioned in the previous article, the Xuling Emperor shattered the conscious memory of Xu Wu's parents and scattered them in countless planes. Xu Wu also dealt with it in the same way. The little girl with a runny nose behind the final dividing line was a part of Xu Wu's consciousness. One of the reunited figures is Xu Wu, can you understand? Then there is another one. During the Blue Lotus period, Bai Ye made a deal with the Lord of Dawn. The deal was actually that the Lord of Dawn hoped that Bai Ye could help it reunite the memories that were scattered in all directions during the ancient war, so the other reunited figure was the Lord of Morning. Do you understand? It is estimated that some people have forgotten this incident and will not think of it at all. As for Bai Ye, so many desolate people died and he was alone, but he is the protagonist of this book. Needless to say, it can be imagined that he participated in breaking the void, so he came back to fulfill his promise and pick up Xu Wu at the same time. Do you understand enough now? Next time I write a book, I will never write a book that is vague and related. Just keep it simple and clear.

First of all, I am not a troll! I am born in 1986 and have been a bookworm since the rise of online writing in 2002. It's not like I have never thought about becoming a writer, I have tried it! I don't have the talent, so I tried many times and got frustrated! To be blunt, what you wrote at the beginning was at the same level as you are now, so why did you give up? I couldn't stand it anymore, so I gave up. I'm not a satirist, and I don't have the right to do so. I'm just encouraging! Such a good imagination, such a good idea, don't give up just because others don't understand or support it! Learning from the master "Wangyu", I still remember the first time I watched "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality" and I was shocked by the gods. What kind of talent and talent can write such an earth-shattering modern fairy tale? Haha, I later found out on Baidu that he is actually a monster who graduated from the undergraduate mathematics department! It is undeniable that what I like about "Wangyu" is that I admire his rational thinking in writing. Everything is well-founded and there are almost no holes to fill in the whole text except for a small hole! Come on, author, what you lack is just your writing power and word control. Don't let down your imagination! Haha, it's 2018, I'm 33 years old this year, I'm married, and I'm just an ordinary person! I just saw a version of myself that was once full of imagination. Come on, don't give up! I hope you will get stronger as you fight and become a god soon! !

Bai Ye does not die from homicide Even if you die, you will travel again If you want to kill the protagonist, you can only destroy his heart through reincarnation for thousands of years. The problem is that Bai Ye has now become a true immortal and understands his true heart. This method is no longer applicable. How to kill it afterwards.

I have read six chapters, and overall it is a good book. It is not a novice, but there are many flaws in the details. First, the Nine Yang Sutra is written in the manuscript of Bodhidharma. Jue Yuan Zhuishi clearly stated that Shaolin Temple has never lacked martial arts secret books. You can take them if you like. However, the Surangama Sutra is the manuscript of Bodhidharma, so it is too easy for the protagonist to copy the book and destroy the sutra. Then there are some short jokes, such as Yang Guo cutting his nails. Nails can be bitten off. Didn't you bite your nails when you were a kid? Mei Chaofeng's Jiuyin White Bone Claw is practiced on her fingers, not her fingernails. Her hands are the same as those of normal people, and her eagle claw skills are the same. She is another author who has been poisoned by film and television works. Clothes can be stuffed into the gaps of Xiao Zhao's chain without affecting changing clothes at all. These are all clearly stated in the original text. Since I am writing a fanfic, I'd better read more or less the original work.

This novel is neither fantasy nor science fiction. As expected, it is just his worldview as the author said... The author did not explain some things clearly at all, such as what the basis for the division of civilization is, and he suddenly started talking about first-level and second-level. That dark civilization keeps plundering other people's thinking and wisdom. I just want to say, can this really develop its own civilization to such a high level? After all, according to their plundering method, at most they can only plunder those who are lower than themselves. Is there any meaning in this? Is it to give myself an inspiration? But the dark civilizations are all composed of nobles from the original ancient tribes. Do they really know how to research? And regarding the cultivation civilization, would the author's description be too unflattering? According to my understanding, the laws, rules and avenues are similar to the scientific laws and theorems of physics and chemistry. They are the operating laws of the objective world, but they correspond to different levels of theory. Whether it is a scientific and technological civilization or a cultivation civilization, it is a civilization that continuously understands the world and advances. It is just that the means of understanding and the method of description are different. Just like modern science and ancient Chinese philosophy, they also describe the universe and the world, but the method of description and the form of expression are completely different.

Can you delete the 'friendly reminder'? ! ! There are chapters in every chapter, so you won't be able to stop people from listening to your novel.

There is a saying that the author works very hard, but he really has the shadow of a little butterfly, and it is not easy to escape from the cage.

I don't know whether the author did it on purpose or not, but women can definitely practice the Nine Yang Magic Skill. It should be Emei, it should be Guo Xiang, if there is any extinction, please contact Jiuyang

Chapters 31-40 of "The Cute System and the Otaku Host" written by the Tang Dynasty Plane fan "Time and Space Walker". One sentence summary: A certain otaku took the system and traveled to the Tang Dynasty world that was changed by the white night. Follow Zhiting2014 on Sina Weibo to watch the waterless version. Friends who want to read the first thirty chapters, please read the highlights in the book review area.

Alas, I read the first two volumes, and I really think that if the male protagonist wants a female protagonist, then he needs to be clear about it. Don't have a confidante, but a stunningly beautiful friend whose role is the same as that of the female protagonist. Is that okay? It's uncomfortable for people who like to have a female protagonist, and it's awkward for people who like to watch movies without a female protagonist. I was uncomfortable, and I felt that the male protagonist was maliciously flirting with girls (of course, my feeling is not necessarily correct). I would like to ask, are there also peerless beauties in the supporting roles in the next few worlds?

So poisonous! Oh My God! I can't stand it anymore, I feel so embarrassed watching the plot inside. What about seeking immortality and so on, and getting an army again, my God! Withdrawn

Author's new book, Time Travel of a Godzilla

Chapters 1-10 of "The Cute System and the Otaku Host", a fan of the Tang Dynasty Plane from "Time and Space Walker". One sentence summary: A certain otaku took the system and traveled to the Tang Dynasty world that was changed by the white night. Follow Zhiting2014 on Sina Weibo to watch the waterless version. The copy and a revised version of Chapter 1 have been posted at the end of this post. I thought this was an ordinary rebirth, but the surrounding rhythm was a little wrong! Cheng Pan watched his own mother run to buy groceries using Qinggong, while his own father used Fire Cloud Palm to grill steak. The kid downstairs left fingerprints on the board with just one swipe of his hand, and the neighbor's grandma used a lion's roar to call her wife home for dinner. "..." What else can he do besides ellipses? Well, no matter what changes have taken place in the world, but relatives are still there, it is a good thing to be reborn, and a martial arts system falls from the sky. No matter how you look at it, it's a good thing among good things, but... This article is also called "My martial arts world can't be that weird" "My system can't be so popular (not) cute (useful)" "It's impossible for my time-traveling senior to be like this" Chapter 1 My world can't be that weird A sudden flash of light, a crushing impact, a spinning dizziness, a burning pain that erodes the body... "It hurts..." The morning sunlight slowly crept up to the pillow, but the boy on the bed seemed to be in a nightmare, with drops of cold sweat breaking out on his forehead. Cheng Pan sat up suddenly, opened his eyes with difficulty, and saw a familiar room - Hey, wasn't he in a car accident? How could he suddenly come home? Is this just a nightmare? But that nightmare is too real, right? The burning pain, the helplessness and despair of losing consciousness before death, were so realistic that they made his heart palpitate. Wait, something seems wrong! This room, this bed, this bookcase and desk, and this decoration are indeed his home, but... Why are there such big differences in details, such as... What's up with the two shiny swords hanging on the wall? He doesn't remember when he became a martial arts enthusiast? On the shoe rack next to the desk, his basketballs and sneakers should be placed, but now there is a row of silver knives and a pair of cloth shoes. And why the computer on the desk has become an ultra-thin screen, and why the logo on the computer is so unfamiliar. The most special thing is the posters on the bedside. They originally showed beautiful celebrities dressed in modern clothes. How come they turned into knights in ancient costumes wearing white clothes and snow? Could that nightmare be real? Did you travel through time after a car accident? Cheng Pan hurriedly rushed to the mirror. Well, he still had the same face, but how did his small otaku body turn into a strong and tight body with abdominal muscles? Looking into his own eyes in the mirror, suddenly, a sharp pain hit his head, and Cheng Pan fell to the ground involuntarily. A few minutes later, the memories and souls of the two Chengpans were integrated. The new boy walked silently to the balcony of the living room and leaned over to look at this weird and unfamiliar world. In the garden of the community, a five- or six-year-old baby raised her white paws to a wooden board and shouted "Iron Sand Palm" before chopping it down. Then he held up his red hands and rushed back to the arms of the young woman next to him who was holding back his laughter and cried. It looks normal—if you ignore the small handprints on the thick wooden board. An old grandfather was walking slowly on crutches, coughing from time to time, which seemed very normal - if you ignore that after his wife shouted "Go home for dinner", he took a deep breath and "flyed" to the balcony on the second floor in one step. Suddenly, a voice came from the kitchen - "You will be admitted to college in half a year. Why are you still in a daze... Did you review your homework yesterday?" "Reviewed - On the five major significances of the discovery of acupoint quantum theory to the development of internal strength analysis." The memory Cheng Pan had just received subconsciously made him answer this way. "What was popular when I was in school were the three major effects of force analysis on the development of swordsmanship... Eat breakfast quickly, don't be in a daze, and then review and prepare for exams, essays, boxing, and internal skills, you choose." "..." Can you let me digest this world for a while before I mention my homework? How come the big killer of the college entrance examination still exists! "Huh?" The woman who was chopping vegetables didn't hear her son's movement and raised the kitchen knife in her hand. "I'll go back to my room and meditate." As the saying goes, he who knows the current affairs is a hero. After returning to the room, Cheng Pan naturally did not cross his legs immediately.

Although it's finished, I still want to pick out a few bugs. Let me explain in advance that Little Butterfly's writing is so bad that I didn't read it, and I didn't even have the confidence to watch the Battle of the Wellhead. 1. Writing needs to be practiced 2. At present, I only see Shendiao, and there are too many things that are taken for granted, such as the matter of universal education. Without enough productivity, it is impossible to support an education industry. With the agricultural level of the Song Dynasty, even if a large number of people were encouraged to study for imperial examinations, only a small number of rich peasants could support a person to study off the job. The same is true for martial arts, which even consumes more food than studying. Without Yuan Da Druid, it would be unthinkable for all the people to practice martial arts. 3. I don't understand what the protagonist thinks when he goes on a trip during the fight for the world.

Chapters 21-30 of "The Cute System and the Otaku Host", a fan of the Tang Dynasty Plane from "Time and Space Walker". One sentence summary: A certain otaku took the system and traveled to the Tang Dynasty world that was changed by the white night. Follow Zhiting2014 on Sina Weibo to watch the waterless version. Friends who want to read the first twenty chapters, please read the highlights in the book review area.

You, a four-year-old kid, do things that even an adult might not be able to do. Aren't you afraid of being treated as a monster and being doubted?

I read the previous chapters, they are not my cup of tea, sorry

Negative review(*｀Ω´*)v

Open a new book? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

[Approaching Science] (2) On the common psychological need of human beings to show off and slap in the face [Approaching Science] The first article in the series is: Is the universe a computer - starting with gray seeds. You can see it by reading the highlights. It's also a seriously funny series. Inspired by Volume 3: Creating a Different World, Chapter 51: Descendants of the Dead "Analyzing from the data, a long time ago, he said that this kind is called the second generation. They are a group of domineering and illogical creatures. My counterattack against your behavior is called pretending to slap you in the face."

Let me take a dip! Please pay attention!

Somewhat similar to the plane butterfly

I don't know what the author wanted to say in the first 30 chapters of Creating Another World. I was baffled and confused, so I left.

The book is a good book and thought-provoking.

Hey, this ending came out of nothing

It's a bit poisonous to just start it without any foreshadowing.

Thank you for your support, whether it is comments, recommendations, collections, or friends who give tips, I am very grateful. Some friends have given quite a lot of rewards, thank you, thank you, thank you! I didn't see a system comment at first, so I didn't notice it. Please forgive me. This month's experience points are all given away. Friends who comment after this month will have no reward points. Let's talk about it here.

It was really well written but it ended too early...

What are the chapter reviews called The Big Bang book?

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