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Author, your sentence fragmentation is really troublesome. The sentences are too long and difficult to read. For example: "First, because basketball reflects personal abilities more intuitively. Many teenagers like this way of expression. Second, because of the existence of NBA and CBA, when they want to watch gorgeous basketball, they can choose the NBA. When they want to watch domestic basketball, they can watch CBA. The third and most important point is that the national basketball team is at least top-notch in Asia. Especially in this year's Asian Championship, basketball defeated Iran and once again stood at the top of Asia." Damn it, do you want me to die? Reading this kind of paragraph makes me feel dizzy and dizzy. You can change it to: "First, because basketball reflects personal abilities more intuitively, and many teenagers like this way of expression; second, because of the existence of NBA and CBA, when they want to watch gorgeous basketball, they can choose NBA, and when they want to watch domestic basketball, they can watch CBA; third and most important, the national basketball team is at least top-notch in Asia. Especially in this year's Asian Championship, basketball also defeated Iran and once again stood at the highest peak in Asia." Doesn't it look and read more comfortable this way? I have listened to a lecture by a teacher from a new society before. He repeatedly emphasized an issue. The pace of life is getting faster and faster these days, and written expressions tend to be short sentences. That is, to express the same thing, the sentences should be divided into fragments as much as possible. Generally speaking, fragments of more than 10 words are not recommended. In short, the author's current sentence fragmentation is really very inhumane and can drive away many readers. . .
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[Comment] The author pays attention to punctuation
I just read the first chapter, and there are no punctuation points in many places...
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I hope that when pig's feet relies heavily on the system, it will try to weaken the presence of the system, and the way to get players should not be too simple, which will lose a large part of the content. We should also try to give personality characteristics to the players found by the system, so that they can become living people, not system template characters.