Rebirth of Blood Succession Limit

I have read this book from beginning to end, and there are a few areas that need to be optimized. I am a Naruto fan. I have studied Naruto for a long time, but I know it by heart. So far, there are areas that need to be optimized. First: The origin of the Sharingan Eye is a kind of pupil technique. The descendant of the Uchiha clan, Indra, the eldest son of the Six Paths Sage, can open his eyes through strong emotional stimulation and continue to evolve. Brothers can merge into the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan through transplantation. The reincarnation of Indra can evolve into the Samsara Eye after gaining the power of Asura. Judging from the content of this passage, first of all, the Sharingan is a kind of bloodline power, and the author also describes the ancient god's bloodline in the title of Chapter 21. This is good, but I think it should not be redeemed by the system. I feel that it would be better if the system redeems Sharingan serum and injects it into my body, so that I have the gene to open my eyes, so that I can open my eyes continuously. I feel that it is enough to exchange the system ability for props and learn ninjutsu in seconds. It is best to redeem the Blood Succession Limit with serum or the like. Second: Originally, when the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan was evolved, the protagonist should have a family, and then there would be people who wanted to frame the protagonist. For example, the protagonist is a direct descendant, and the others are branches. In addition, the protagonist has been away from home for many years and is not familiar with these people. Except for a little blood relationship, blood relationship is established. You can inject the Sharingan serum into his opponent, then stimulate him to open his eyes to the kaleidoscope level, and then transplant it to himself. However, the author has not laid the groundwork for this from the beginning, so there is no way. Another way is to exchange the serum for his sister, and then write a paragraph about her sister unfortunately dying in battle and giving the kaleidoscope to the protagonist, and then wait for the protagonist to obtain the same fairy body and Yang escape ability as Naruto, and then help the protagonist's sister restore her eyes. Third: The ability of the Samsara Eye. I can't finish this in a while. The author can go to the Hokage Information Station or Baidu Encyclopedia to check the ability of the Samsara Eye and then start writing. The most common state of the Samsara Eye is Nagato's. The second evolution is Uchiha Madara's. I think the author can make a slight modification here. Nagato's eyes are ordinary Samsara Eyes. When Uchiha reaches the stage, Uchiha Madara can modify them into the Three Magatama Samsara Eyes, and then awaken to the Samsara Eye? The side prison ability, then came to Sasuke's Six Magatama Samsara Eye, the ability to awaken the power of the Tenshou, and finally the Nine Magatama Samsara Sharingan, the awakening ability, Infinite Tsukuyomi + Ten no Gochu. Fourth: When it comes to Naruto, I feel like there is no one who doesn't know about the Akatsuki organization. The author can also establish an organization with 10 people, and then imitate the personal abilities of the original people and make an Akatsuki organization from another world. For example, Hidan has immortality. According to the original book, Hidan's immortality is not innate. He was used by other believers for experiments (maybe voluntarily) when he was in the evil cult, and gained the curse ability and immortality. It is the first successful case of the "Evil God Religion" experimenting with forbidden arts. Here, you can curse a member of the Akatsuki organization through the system to redeem the curse, which is equivalent to giving him power, or there can be a cult in another world, he was experimented on, escaped, and the protagonist took him in. These are all possible. Fifth: I feel that the author must get the tailed beast, otherwise how can he change into the six paths mode and open the reincarnation sharingan. It was mentioned in the original work that the two abilities of the Nine Magatama Reincarnation Eye can only be used by people with far more chakra than the Ten-Tails and the Ten-Tails Jinchuuriki. The change of direction shows that if the protagonist does not have such a huge amount of energy, even opening his eyes will be useless. That's all for now. I hope the author can learn from it. Thank you.

It has been poisoned... It is better for those who come late to be careful...

Author: Have you really watched Naruto? Are you telling me that the Wind Release Spiral Shuriken is A level? Also, adding fire to the Rasenshuriken turns it into a Fire Release Rasenshuriken. Naruto and Madara missed it once when they were fighting.

When I first read this book, I felt very good. The writing is good and the concept is clever. But since the protagonist's sister Ji Yuxuan appeared on the scene, a major poisonous point appeared that ruined the whole book! The author keeps praising my sister for her beauty, over and over again, every time she appears, several times in a chapter, with all kinds of gorgeous words, from the front to the sides, her head, her mouth, her teeth, her smile, her clothes, her eyes, her walk, all kinds of compliments, anyway, this sister is so beautiful! A smile that captivates the city! All kinds of admiration from others! Reject people thousands of miles away! His eyes are cold and clear! Damn it! Is this still a human being? This is like putting ten kilograms of rouge on the face of a stunning beauty. Instead of making her feel beautiful, it makes her feel disgusting! Vomit……

By the way, is the world where pig's feet live in a prehistoric time? If it was really prehistoric, how could I write about it? Not to mention the great saints, those golden immortals, heavenly immortals, earthly immortals and ghost immortals are enough for the protagonist. The difference in power levels is too big. Does the author want to deliberately suppress the power level of the immortals? If this is the case, there must be many readers who will be unhappy. To be honest, the gap between Naruto's power level and the power level in the world of immortality is really too big. Just one lifespan is incomparable. Therefore, moving Naruto's power system to the world of immortality is a very dangerous thing. It is not only a problem of power level, but also a problem of readers' psychology. After all, the pursuit of immortality is important to our countrymen. It is one of the cultures, but ninjas are from the Neon Kingdom. Suppressing the power of immortality will make the protagonist wander around and readers will be unhappy. If it is not suppressed, it will be impossible to write at all. Therefore, few people have moved Naruto's power system to the world of immortality. It is difficult to grasp the speed, so it is better to replace the world of immortality with another world, and then conceive an upgrade system similar to Naruto's power system, which will be easier to write! What's more, many online novels now have a younger sister or childhood sweetheart when their protagonists travel through time. This plot has been written badly, and readers are a little tired of it. Just like me, as a bookworm who has been reading online novels for 12 years, I have become more and more picky about novels. When I see a novel with a younger sister, my first reaction is usually to abandon the book. Of course, this also depends on the author's writing style! So this point can be considered a relatively big poisonous point now. There are too many novels, especially urban ones, in which the protagonists are like above when they see a beautiful woman. When they see a beautiful woman, not only their legs are soft but even their bones are soft, she is completely semen! @@ The sense of déjà vu on the insect brain, I hope this book is not like this. Of course, I have only read 3 chapters of this book and stopped reading it. It's not that the author's writing is not good, but the author's writing style is quite smooth. The reason why I didn't read it is because the number of words is too few, so I can only put him in a book and keep him in captivity, and then kill him after he gets fat! The above are all personal opinions, please don't blame the author if there are any mistakes!

To be honest, the opening four cards made my brain buzz.

So who is the pig's foot at the beginning of Chapter 3?

Flying Thunder God is S-level, right? How did he become A-level?

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The Uchiha clan is described in detail in the comics, but the Hyuga clan seems to be just a bit of a blur. The Sharingan pattern is beautiful, and the Mangekyo Sharingan has a variety of patterns. In the movie version 10 Byakugan upgrade and reincarnation, the Sharingan ability in the main manga is getting stronger and stronger, from one magatama to three magatama, kaleidoscope to eternal kaleidoscope, samsara eye to nine magatama samsara sharingan. It is difficult to open the eyes and the upgrade conditions are harsh, so it is story-telling and creates suspense. There are too few scenes between the Byakugan and the Hyuga clan, and the power of the Tsansigan is the same as the Rinnegan's aggressiveness. The setting of "insight beyond the eye roll" doesn't seem to be reflected at all. And I don't think Byakugan's abilities are really utilized either. Byakugan has clairvoyance and telephoto eyes, with a 360-degree field of vision. Can see meridians and acupuncture points clearly. If this were a martial arts novel, and the protagonist had white eyes and acupuncture points, he would definitely become a martial arts master. "Chakra can be released from 361 acupuncture points throughout the body, but without Byakugan, chakra can only be released from some organs such as the hands, feet, and mouth." As a result, the Hyuga clan has not seen any ninjutsu. He can see objects clearly from a very long distance, but it turns out that the Hyuga clan does not seem to have the ability to attack at very long distances. If you play Ice Soul in Dota or Future Warrior in LoL, rolling your eyes is equivalent to cheating. Byakugan has a strong ability to identify chakra (can distinguish different "colors" of chakra). Ao's Byakugan saw that Danzo's Sharingan was Shisui's (green chakra), Kaguya's Byakuya could see that Sasuke and Naruto had the chakra of Indra and Asura in their bodies. If it is a cultivation novel, replace chakra with spiritual energy. The protagonist can identify different fairy flowers and grasses with Byakugan, and improve his cultivation by refining elixirs. He can use his telescopic eyes to explore the terrain, avoid traps and enemies, release super long-distance spells for sneak attacks, and by the way, he can use his clairvoyance ability to see through girls, haha. There is no need for the Tenseigan or anything like that. In short, because the main manga over-exaggerates the ability of the Sharingan and focuses on describing the Uchiha clan, and the conditions for opening and upgrading the Sharingan are also suitable to create conflicts in the story, almost all protagonists in Naruto fan fiction must possess the Sharingan. If you have supercilious eyes, relying on telescope and perspective functions to avoid traps, monsters, and chases when you are weak will seem boring. It's powerful, but it's too rogue to use super long-range spells for sneak attacks. Unlike the Sharingan, opening a Susanoo and engaging in hand-to-hand combat with the same giant monster is so exciting. Moreover, the red pupils and kaleidoscope patterns are also suitable for the protagonist to show off. In addition, even if the Byakugan is upgraded to the Reincarnation Eye, it will not be as powerful as the Rinnegan through its attack capabilities.

This flashback technique was so good that I gave up after reading 4 chapters, especially the first one. I thought there was a bug in the starting point.

These are all imaginary names. If you are a fan of Guo Dalang, then you should choose a higher quality name, such as Ouyang Zhuobin, Dongfang Zunlong, Yuchi Haoxuan, etc. Don't end up with something inconsistent. If there is anything else, I can bear it. Flying Thunder God is actually an A-level ninjutsu. If you add the fire attribute to the Wind Spiral Shuriken, it will be the Fire Spiral Shuriken. These are not the same. Ergouzi, please be more careful. The toilet at the east end of the village is out of paper.

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Ninjutsu has too many blood limits and is too scummy to be interesting. When there is a better blood limit, why make a nearly useless one that is unnecessary and destroys the power system of the other world? The feeling of being over the top is very poisonous.

The Aolai Kingdom seems to be from the Dongsheng Shenzhou, but why did it become the Nanfangbu Continent?

I think the Seven Kills Hall is the ANBU in Naruto

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I must say that this novel is a conscientious work, and it can be seen that the author put a lot of thought into it.

Looking at the updated parts, I found that the author's concept is quite novel, and the original conflict points are gradually revealed. The male protagonist's restraint needs more characterization, and I hope the author can write a different plot. I like the author's writing, keep it up!

Reading a book means looking at the author's creativity. As long as there are good things in it, you will have loyal readers! ! Of course, only if we taste it carefully can we see the brightest highlights!

Haha, the story written by the author has a compact plot, one link after another, the context is clear, and the skill is so profound. In just a few chapters, the character's personality is vividly displayed on the page, a magical pen! The entire structure of this novel is easy to understand, concise and attractive.

It's so ugly, the relationship is not outstanding and the progress is meaningless

The protagonist is flesh and blood, radiant, but does not completely obscure the supporting characters. This is the type of novel I like.

In fact, there are inevitably some emotional scenes in every novel. This is a powerful tool to make the male protagonist become tender!

Since the title is called Rebirth: The Blood Successor Limit, it is best that the protagonist's ability is related to the Blood Successor Limit. Just try to use as little common ninjutsu as possible. Being of Uchiha origin, the main common ninjutsu is fire escape. Good at using shuriken kunai (long-range hidden weapon). The "bloodline" in the world of cultivation corresponds to the blood successor in Naruto. Chakra corresponds to spiritual power or internal power. Forming seals can be seen as activating magic in sign language (Tucao).

It seems to me that the protagonist is green at the beginning, can anyone tell me?

The writing style of this book is simply not on the same level as most online novels. I give this book thirty-two likes!

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