Kyushu Creation

The author's skills are quite good, but the plot is a bit weak, and everyone is a wise man, but in the end they don't have any brains.

This book is a joke. The souls cultivated in the Ghost Valley are the same as those ghosts. Could it be that people with strong souls are not full of energy, but also have magical facial features? It's like masturbating all night. It's a joke, there are too many poisonous points, and it's written about ordinary immortality under the guise of hundreds of families. There is a reason why the book has not been popular since 16 years ago.

I feel that the protagonist is too self-centered in the early stage.

Everything else is good, but the writing is a bit like Gu Long, a novel from the Jin Yong era. Simply put, the protagonist has low self-esteem, entanglement, and contradictions, which makes the whole novel not very enjoyable. It is like a novel written 20 or 30 years ago. It is well written, but not exciting enough and does not conform to the reading habits of the Internet. If the protagonist could be more confident and decisive and less confused, this novel would be a fairy tale. Now, although the writing is very good, it feels frustrating to read.

I must say that this novel is a conscientious work, and it can be seen that the author put a lot of thought into it.

I really don't like the male protagonist, I hate it for no reason. The writing is quite good, but because I resisted the male protagonist, I had no choice but to abandon it.

The fighting in the first two chapters made me so embarrassed that I slipped away. The author can study the Wilderness Trilogy of Wild Fox Under the Tree.

Come on, Bai Jia Lun Tao made me crazy when I saw it. I don't know how to write it. Author, do you study various schools of thought? How can a person with the word "cow" be so good?

To counterattack and break the formation, it is well-founded and really enlightening. It is much better than those random novels. It has connotations and is worthy of further study.

He has so much energy and so much infatuation that he is willing to enter such a dirty and hypocritical place. What a pity, what a pity.

13 Votes for recommendation, come on! 😁

Ouch, ouch, faster, faster, I can't wait anymore

The writing style of this novel is considered to be good among online articles. The author's writing is not rough, smooth and not cumbersome. I look forward to its future development.

I think this book is an anti-internet novel to a certain extent, just like Jin Yong's "The Deer and the Cauldron" is an anti-martial arts novel. The protagonist Xiao Yi may make many people unable to have a sense of substitution, but I think the protagonist will grow and it will take time, just like it takes time for us to get out of the cultural desert. This book seems to be caught in the middle between writing to convey the truth and being refreshing. It needs everyone's support to allow the writer to write it down.

13 Votes for recommendation, come on! 😁

13 Votes for recommendation, keep up the good work! 😁

13 Votes for recommendation, keep up the good work! 😁

13 Votes for recommendation, keep up the good work! 😁

13 Votes for recommendation, keep up the good work! 😁

13 Votes for recommendation, keep up the good work! 😁

13 Votes for recommendation, keep up the good work! 😁

13 Votes for recommendation, happy holidays! 😁

The book is finished, please leave a message. It's still a pretty good novel.

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Come on, good books are rare, so you must stick to them. Few people read it now because they haven't discovered the value of this book yet.

Good books also need to be publicized, so take care of the author's worries

I'll click on the mutual fandom and get 12 more votes for recommendation. I sincerely hope for a reward! 🤭

Traveling around the states, is this the rhythm of traveling all over Kyushu? It is really not easy to have a coherent storyline and show the charm of different schools of thought. Brain-consuming work!

I'll click on the mutual fandom and get 11 more votes for recommendation. I sincerely hope for a reward! 🤭

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