The Era Begins

I found the storyline very interesting at first, but after reading more than 20 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. A lot of the psychological descriptions in the article were too redundant, and the analysis and description in long paragraphs were too deliberate and stiff, which made people feel a little embarrassed. And the main line was unclear. I wrote this and that at one moment, and I really couldn't stand it anymore. I hope the author can make some progress in the future.

I like the protagonist's personality, which is similar to mine. Although I'm a little bit more narcissistic than the protagonist, I still want to talk about narcissism. The protagonist, we are all the same people, haha!

The river waves are gurgling and the Guyu is spring. The flag gun is slowly rising and the green tea is new. The new buds in the pot are not old, and the fragrance of tea is not inferior to that of flowers. The scenery is endless and I enjoy traveling far away. I still miss the lush greenery of my hometown. Yifan returns and invites guests. Jiangcheng spring spring brews fragrant tea.

As a new writer, you need to understand one thing: when creating characters, you should show your distinctive character and extraordinary speaking background, so that the characters you create can be active on the paper. I really like the male protagonist created by the author now, and I quite admire the author's skill in creating characters.

Let me go, what's going on? Why is the number given to members for clicking 0? Such an awesome novel.

I really hope that there will be exciting things in the novel, whether it is emotional disputes or entanglements at all levels. I hope you, the author, will be optimistic!

The author really devoted all his attention to the protagonist! Even the appearances of these supporting characters are for the protagonist, watch out for you!

There is no problem with the quality of the novel. I hope the author can break through the siege as soon as possible and write a unique work~

The content of this book is quite imaginative, very distinctive, and worthy of your attention. Please give it a thumbs up and update it soon!

The creativity is pretty good, but the author's writing style still has a lot of room for improvement, so keep up the good work!

I like the way the author uses some side things to express some more important things, which is very natural and clever.

I have written so many chapters, but I still don't want to practice. I am still wandering around in a small corner. The pace is too slow.

I always like to watch stories where the big villain suddenly turns into a minor villain, and the bigger villain is killed by the protagonist before he appears, but then the evil one is discovered.

I hope to see business wars and put some effort into this aspect, thank you!

The author has great skill in controlling his works, not to mention he is still a newcomer. We are blessed (the less the public recommends the more), but we must follow our own ideas and do not change because of the requirements of some readers. Finally, I wish this book a great success. By the way, finish voting for today's recommendations.

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