It's a brainless sweet story with good creativity. It has many bugs in the early stage. It gets better in the middle stage, but it becomes boring in the later stage and lacks stamina. The overly colloquial writing style is a major flaw. The design of the male protagonist is relatively old, and the golden finger is too big. It is aimed at cultivation, but in fact, the cultivation is very superficial. It focuses on companionship and gifting materials, and does not involve spiritual guidance.
The plot of "The Chronicle" is not forced enough to make up nonsense. There are few detailed descriptions and a lot of nonsense that can be skimmed. The description is repeated over and over again. The writing is good, but the author can't deliver. The female protagonist is more memorable, but the male protagonist is very ordinary and has no highlights like an NPC. The plot moves slowly.
I don't have enough writing power, and I can't hold on for less than half of it. The male and female protagonists are both this and that, both different and different, and the descriptions are very typical of the ancient times.
The plot line advances too slowly. The food is very long, but every description is very exaggerated. Instead, there is a kind of distorted falsehood, which gradually makes me numb. I quite like the image of the heroine. There are indeed a lot of exclamations in it, which is a drawback, and the male protagonist's cute little pitiful character style is really not very satisfying personally.
The writing is good and the plot is average. All interactions between the male protagonists when they flirt with each other are extremely awkward. Except for the main dialogue about solving the crime, they rely on nonsensical nonsense and lustful appearance to build relationships. . . Reading half of it is nonsense and a waste of time. I have read more than sixty chapters and abandoned the article. In the final analysis, I just don't like the characters of the male and female protagonists. The author deliberately emphasizes those false appearances and embarrassing sense of humor, which is neither fish nor fowl.
After reading the first dozen chapters, my evaluation was that the plot was almost written in one stroke, consisting of boring and awkward dialogue, seduction, and inexplicably over-exaggerated and flashy descriptions of appearance that took up space. It's an ancient routine, the male and female protagonists are so lustful that they make them faint, one is pretentious and the other is stupid.
The writing and setting are good, and the first half of the plot is also pretty good. Apart from his strong fighting ability and mechanical repair skills in the early stage, the male protagonist has no shining points, especially his personality and behavior. The same goes for the raised child. Only the first few appearances are slightly interesting. Later, the words and deeds are completely ordinary and can be said to be the kind of ordinary child raising novel. The small animal interactions make up for a little bit of the weak plot.
It is too different from the protagonist's psychological state, so the logic of the behavior is too difficult to understand. Crazy literature, using madness to cure madness
The background setting of the story is too complex, abstract and incomprehensible, and the whole framework is speechless. On this basis, the male protagonist assumes that he personally dislikes
The character design is cliché, and the copywriting setting is bloody. I know that this kind of writing is popular in JJ. After reading a few books, I found it difficult to continue reading. It's a personal reason. I'm disgusted by plots like "Bullying to Tears", where the heroine is as skinny as duckweed, and the hero is lustful and pretends to be aloof and duplicitous.
The identities of the male and female protagonists are too different. The female protagonist has no way out or retreat. She is worried about gains and losses in this relationship and is in a super passive situation. The female protagonist can only cook, grow vegetables, raise chickens and embroider to support her family. The improvement of her life depends entirely on gifts from the male protagonist. The male protagonist is just greedy for a bit of human fireworks and the topic of the female protagonist is to help her cook and cook, but the female protagonist is unwilling to marry because of her poor status. The two of them first got together because of sex. After that, the heroine wavered and refused and accepted her many times. It was so uncomfortable to watch. I can't blame the heroine harshly after watching it, but I feel deeply sad for this situation. I have raised a child, and I have been used as a tool to break the ice in relationships many times. This is also very embarrassing.
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